I can't decide whether I should be worried or not; Buffy's not actually a bad guy here, and she's not going to give the information away to anyone who doesn't know it, but Kinsey's BOUND to have some trick or another up his sleeve that he can use to manipulate her into 'helping' him...
Still, fascinating as always, I assure you.
Comments from author:
This could go in one of several ways. But, since Kinsey is secretly behind much of the NID, if Willow doesn't find that out and Buffy presents him with the intel, then he would just have her killed. No one wants that. The alternative would be an AU Stargate where Elizabeth Summers sticks her cute little nose into the secret war between the NID and the SGC. Right now, I don't intend to write either option.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [7 Sep 12] • Not Rated
That recruiting trip really didn't go as planned, did it?
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from Jazzibear
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I like this a lot. I am amazed at the fecundity of your imagination and the skill with which you communicate it. Very well done indeed! I look forward to more.
I have had a couple of thoughts myself, not megathinking though, more minithinking. I expect nitpicking is the word.
Some years ago I was a student at a London college, and I travelled extensively on the Underground, as one does, including, of course, the stations in the vicinity of Russell Square. I have no recollection of ever seeing any gents lavatories in any of the deep stations near the Museum. But then, it’s clear that Giles Rupert Giles belongs to a different universe/dimension/world from ours – obviously one where the plumbing of a deep toilet would not present any problems.
Then Hermione, who is formidably clever and learned. My surname is Middle High German, and it provides much entertainment here in England as the locals grapple with the spelling. I am pretty sure that in whatever u/d/w this Hermione dwells the distinction would exist, and she would be fluent in both Middle Low and Middle High German, for she is that sort of young lady.
As for Chapter Three, I can only say something like “Gosh!”.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I've been on the London Underground, but not for *decades*, so I just gave up on verisimiltude on that one. As for the list of languages, I slacked on that bit, since classical English has the same sorts of distinctions.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from lunalurker
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Oh my, that isn't good at all! Well, not good for the world Supervillain Sam is in, because the story is quite good. Still loving the twists and turns of this series. :)
Comments from author:
It's the DCU. Everyone eventually becomes a supervillain in *some* dimension. Even readers.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from TinMan
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I couldnt help braking out into evil laughter with the ending of chapter three. Evil Samatha Carter, maybe she'll be the one to finally triumph over the Justice League and RULE THE WORLD!!!
Bwahahahahahahaha!!!!
Comments from author:
Exactly. You need that evil laugh to be taken seriously as a supervillain.
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from Rich
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Well, THIS is certainly new and different ! Samantha Carter, supervillain !! I'm a huge fan of the Stargate version of Sam, but I have to admit that I can see something like this happening (if I squint real hard). Good job !
Comments from author:
I love Stargate Sam, but a Samantha Carter in the DCU would either be another Steel, or else be a mad scientist. Different universe, different rules. And you know the mad science rules: as soon as someone laughs at the mad scientist's theories, everything goes to heck. Hey, maybe she'll kill Superboy Prime. WIN!
Review By [Rich] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from cmdruhura
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Sam really, realy needs to switch to decaf.
EDIT
Is Blue Jello her weakness? Maybe the sugar-free type since she already has so much energy.
Comments from author:
:-) :-) Unfortunately, she's drinking the radioactive coffee from Narbonic Labs.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from Gideon
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Poor Sam, driven crazy as only mad scientists in a comic book world can be :( It seems that Bruce was much too late after all. I hope the scientists he sends to see Sam survive the experience!
Comments from author:
If it's not mad scientists in the DCU, it's whacko aliens. Or insane comic book readers.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from RevDorothyL
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Oh, NO! Sam as a super-villain? And no Jack O'Neill or Teal'c or Daniel Jackson to 'talk her down' in this reality. This bodes really ILL for the Justice League.
Comments from author:
In the words of Teal'c, "Indeed." Still, can she be worse than the Anti-Monitor? Superboy Prime? Starro?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from misterwhy
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wow! I always knew that beneath that sweet demeanor, Samantha Carter had a Mad Scientist lurking. Now if only she could meet up with Poison Ivy ... Bwah ha ha haha!
Comments from author:
And Livewire! Oh wait, Livewire went over to the good side.
Review By [misterwhy] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from AllenPitt
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Now if only these twisted alternates could join into a team. Hermione & Samantha at least.
Comments from author:
Maybe they could get rid of Superboy Prime, at least, before they went on their rampage. I'd appreciate it.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from Aenea
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Teacher: And today's lesson children?
Alice:Batman is always right? Bobby:It's not paranoia if the conventions of the universe say injured scientists always go mad? Charlie: Ms. Didi is the sun supposed to be that bright?
*Flash*
D: Who wants ice cream? Sol: I wasn't expecting to go out like that. Death: Everyone gets a lifetime, and Carter's always end up destroying suns.
Comments from author:
:-) :-) :-) :-) Oh, that's funny. And you're the second reviewer to do the 'Carter blowing up a sun' ref. You know, I started out with a different goal in mind for the chapter, but then the conventions of the DCU took over, and Sam got completely out of my control.