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Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part II" from Crayshack
Review:
I need more of this stuff. The Secret return is pretty good, but I'm finding myself enjoying this group of shorts even more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I plan to update every other Monday. And after this story, I have a second story that I'll continue.
Review By [Crayshack] • Date [23 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part II" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like how you started catching us up with Danny, but then switched back and forth between points of view and perspective.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'll try to keep it clear who has the POV without clunky markers on the page.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from thapagan
Review:
Well this looks like it could be quite fun. Jack trying to get Danny boy on his side, Dr. Jackson trying to figure out if He can teach at a private school and repair his reputation, while Faith tries to figure out who she wants to settle down with, comedy ho.....
Comments from author:
Well, we will see where this goes. After all, we haven't even gotten into the story.
Review By [thapagan] • Date [15 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from SirLee
Review:
My take on this chapter is that Jack is already re-evaluating his original assumption. The way the girls behave -- and the school curriculum -- simply don't fit with the "villains brainwashing girls to be assassins" concept. He already knows that there's something else going on, and wants to figure it out.

His worldview is going to be seriously damaged the first time he sees Slayers practising combat. Particularly when he finds out HOW MUCH?! that troll hammer that Faith and Buffy wave around like it's made of cardboard around actually weights.

And then, of course, if he really makes an ass of himself, Willow might do something _amusing_ to him, to drive home the point that magic _is_ real, there _are_ supernatural threats out there, and those teenage girls _are_ the best people to take care of them. And that they want him to teach them _how not to get killed_.

(Given his taste for "The Wizard of Oz," though... will he attempt throwing a bucket of water on Willow?)
Comments from author:
And if he throws a bucket of water on Willow, how long will it take Xander to stop laughing?
Review By [SirLee] • Date [10 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from joshlamont
Review:
Yeeeeeeeeeeee!

Completely unhelpful, but honestly my first reaction.

Looking forward to more if you have it!
Comments from author:
Thanks. There is more. There is a complete adventure, just with some scenes and segues yet to be written. In fact, I'm going to post every other Monday, alternating with 'Xendra', while I have story.
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [10 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and a Brit" from fanreaderonetwo
Review:
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"And Sam Carter is at NASA, which is where she should have been if not for the SGC."

Note where Carter was when the series began, namely as an USAF geek working on highly technical problems, _not_ as an astronaut. If that problem hadn't been the Stargate, it would have been some other DoD or USAF problem calling for the services of a brilliant astrophysicist. Maybe radar or commo, or maybe even _actual_ "deep space telemetry" from recon or commo satellites. As compared to a Shuttle mission requiring a pilot or a payload specialist with an engineering degree.

Also, depending on what year your fic is set, the Shuttle program might have already been closing down or shut down. So they wouldn't be training new pilots or payload specialists and many of the existing ones would be returning to the home services for reassignment or retiring.
Comments from author:
Sam's dad was pulling strings to get her to NASA, where he felt she belonged. Without the SGC, she probably would have gone along with his wishes. Especially once she learned he was dying of cancer and there was nothing she could do about it.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [10 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the newest chapter, hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. You'll have to wait two weeks. I plan to alternate between this and 'Xendra' on Mondays.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [10 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from OtteryLexa
Review:
Yay!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and enjoying. I accept chocolate, reviews, chocolate, recommendations, and also chocolate.
Review By [OtteryLexa] • Date [10 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from Cutiepie
Review:
Oooh, so this will be alternating Monday updates with Xendra? Yippee! I can't even begin to tell you how excited I am about that. I love all your stories, so another regular added to the schedule means real happiness for me.

Tell Agatha that her payment/payment is already on the way and that the International Community of Muses appreciates her great service. Her invitation to the annual Muses' Holiday Party/Medals Ceremony should be arriving any day now and my Thomas is going to insist that she save him a dance.
Comments from author:
Yeah, just watch out after Agatha has too much scotch. Things suddenly go from a cotillion to 'Lost Weekend". :-)
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [10 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from Tabercil
Review:
This comment is addressed to Diane Castle but rather her muse:

Thank you for getting Diane to continue the story started in "Scoobies and a Retiree". Here's a sock with a half-brick in it to act as a spare in case something happens to the one you are currently using.

P.S., Any chance you could do the same trick to Bek D Corbin for her "Of Masks and Marvels" or Foxglove series? :)

To Diane proper: Loved it and can't wait for the next installment.
Comments from author:
Stop encouraging my muse Agatha!

And Bek's muse Enid is unfortunately *too* motivated. Bek seems to invent a new universe with new characters about every forty-seven seconds. And yes, she is currently blocked on both stories.

Thanks for reading. And even though you're encouraging my muse, I'll still post the next chapter in two weeks.
Review By [Tabercil] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from docfeng
Review:
thanks
Comments from author:
You're welcome!
Review By [docfeng] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from PATM
Review:
Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Comments from author:
I hope you like where this is going to go.
Review By [PATM] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from Amberdrake
Review:
The story immediately preceding this one is Some Wishes Do Come True. I think that says it all. :D
Comments from author:
Thanks! As you know, I can be easily bribed by reviews and recs and such. :-)
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
I hope you decide to update it more frequently than every other Monday. If that meant less frequent updates of TSROAM I would regard it as an acceptable trade-off.
Comments from author:
Sorry, but every other Monday is the current schedule. For one thing, I don't have many chapters written and in my publishing queue, and for another thing, I don't have anything else ready after this story. On the upside, I do have something planned for the following story, and maybe even for a story after that one.

And TSRoAM is almost 60 chapters ahead of publishing date, so updating there is not an issue.
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yay! I'm so thrilled to see Jack AND Daniel getting a chance to find out the truth for themselves, and couldn't be more pleased with all the questions and puzzle pieces that Jack's trying to deal with so far, thanks to his two charming Slayer escorts. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Jack may have a little trouble figuring this one out unless he gets some help.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
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