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Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yay! I'm so thrilled to see Jack AND Daniel getting a chance to find out the truth for themselves, and couldn't be more pleased with all the questions and puzzle pieces that Jack's trying to deal with so far, thanks to his two charming Slayer escorts. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Jack may have a little trouble figuring this one out unless he gets some help.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from Eureka
Review:
KEWL!!!! Jack and Jackson getting to know each other in this universe...Wondering who will be reduced to a gibbering idiot first...
More please :))
Comments from author:
Maybe it will be a tie. :-)

I intend to publish more of this story every other Monday, so just hang on...
Review By [Eureka] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from Zorgdub
Review:
NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!


Why? Why no White Knight?


T_T


And it was no *the* least interesting but close enough. Blah.
Comments from author:
:-) :-)

Unfortunately, the White Knight is one of the ones I still don't have a good plotline for. Sorry.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from burmafrdnow
Review:
Poor Jack. Having to try and fit his theory in after continuous evidence that it does not fit.

But then he is very stubborn. Probably going to have to get bit by a Vamp to finally believe. And even then he will try and explain it away.

People make fun of Sam trying to explain magic away - but Jack is just as bad in his own way
Comments from author:
Sam's just rational. Every time she sees 'magic' it turns out to be advanced tech. EVERY time. And who does she fight? A bunch of creepy parasitical aliens who use tech to convince peons that they are magical. Why would Sam believe it's magic when some new dork comes along and makes the same old claim? That's why I gave Sam the chance to be a genius in my 'Xander and...' stories.

And yes, Jack can be so, so stubborn. Look at the way he acted after Daniel ascended.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Reject" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I enjoyed re-reading these.
Comments from author:
Great. I hope the continuation makes you even happier.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from ovid
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Oh, jack jack jack. Silly man, trying to put a black Ops twist on everything. His first vamp is gonna shatter a lot of his expectations. You know, I was worried when he said he was gonna bring the council down. but now? He's gonna be just fine. Probably gonna be happy to help keep the slayers alive longer, maybe see if he can't get some combat teams to replace them.
Comments from author:
Well, to be fair, if you live in a world with no such thing as vampires and demons, it *ought* to be really hard to convince you there are vampires and demons.
Review By [ovid] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from FireWolfe
Review:
This was very enjoyable. I do hope that Sam shows up eventually. It be wickedly cool if she becomes a slayer and adds mayhem to the situation. If Jack's not military maybe the pairing might work. Also love to see Janet show up maybe as a medic for the school.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from FireWolfe
Review:
This was very enjoyable. I do hope that Sam shows up eventually. It be wickedly cool if she becomes a slayer and adds mayhem to the situation. If Jack's not military maybe the pairing might work. Also love to see Janet show up maybe as a medic for the school.
Comments from author:
Sam is too old to become a Slayer. Sorry. And Janet is an important Air Force doctor, so she's not going to show up.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from fanreaderonetwo
Review:
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"Are you bringing the whole stargate crew in as teachers?"



This fic is a continuation of Chapter 4, "Scoobies and a Retiree".

I assume that the Stargate and the Goauld don't exist in this universe,
so Jackson is merely an archeologist with (maybe) oddball theories.
One question is how just odd those theories are and if he is still a
respected archeologist or is unemployable in his field and is working
"in other capacities" to avoid starving. IIRC one fic had him working
at a community college as language teacher.

Another question is where Samantha Carter is, and what her current
skills are that might be useful to the Scoobies. Then there is the question
of whether she is available for recruiting as a teacher, even on a part time basis.

Just for giggles, how about hiring retired General Hammond (he was
scheduled for retirement within a few months when the series began)
to handle administration and logistics for the Slayers?
Image of an amusing scene explaining to him why he got a job offer out
of the blue.
Comments from author:
It's the same universe as the other 'Scoobies and...' chapters. The Stargate doesn't exist, so any planet with creepy originally-aquatic parasitic snakes won't be spreading all over the galaxy. And Daniel Jackson is researching a different oddball theory. And Sam Carter is at NASA, which is where she should have been if not for the SGC.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Paranoia - meet paranoia!
Comments from author:
If you're paranoid, and they really are out to get you, then... umm... more paranoia? :-)
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from Gideon
Review:
Aww, they are trying to get Jack back together with his best bro! At least Daniel should get into Jack's good books when he shows how much he cares about people. I guess Sam and Janet and Hammond are all still in the military so they are probably not visiting Cleveland, if they even exist in this dimension. I wonder who will be first to notice how "prepared" Jack is and guess what soem of his luggage is actually for?
Comments from author:
Yes, assume that getting military people to drop out of the military will be a lot harder than getting an old retired guy to help out.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from Rich
Review:
Looks like a winner.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Jack has more shocks in store.
Review By [Rich] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from ZeakaGirl
Review:
This chapter left me feeling really amused. I hope this means that you are continuing this side of the story. Sure it's fun to read what’s happening with Alex, but I really want to know what happens next with the slayers and Jack.
Are you bringing the whole stargate crew in as teachers?
And Andrew a military cook HA! I can't wait until that meeting. Hell, any meeting.  Jack really has no idea what he’s getting into. He he he!
So again Please, PLEASE! continue this side of the story
Comments from author:
Thanks! Reviews and recommendations are the way to get my muse moving... at which point she bludgeons me mercilessly until I cooperate. :-)

And you'll see Jack and Daniel, but not Sam. And definitely not Teal'c, who doesn't exist (on Earth) in this universe.
Review By [ZeakaGirl] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from IronOx
Review:
Awesome :) Not just the whole Scooby/Jack and Scooby/Daniel, but a whole new take on Jack/Daniel? Time for a Snoopy dance!
Comments from author:
I didn't like the Jack/Daniel meeting in the Stargate movie. Expect something different.
Review By [IronOx] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part I" from Marcel
Review:
YES! MORE! How can I bribe you? :) I *so* want to see more of this, distrusting Jack O'Neill (two L's) is hilarious :)
Comments from author:
Bribes? Easy! More reviews and more recommendations! I'm easy. :-)

And expect more of this Jack every other Monday, as long as the story lasts.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [9 Dec 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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