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Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from mmooch
Review:
Freaky! Sam as a baddie...my mind is blown.
Comments from author:
You know, when I started that chapter, that wasn't what I had planned. But then Sam's backstory just drove everything in 'DCU supervillain' territory, and the rest was inevitable.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from MarcusSLazarus
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Well, I suppose at least one of the alternates had to be a villain at some point (Even if it's tragic to see how their potential can be corrupted like that, certain things can push even the best people over the edge); it just sucks that it was one of the most brilliant and hence potentially the most dangerous...

Hope you're going to continue this series; the concept of how other alternates will interact should DEFINITELY be interesting...
Comments from author:
Right now I have about 8 chapters written and another half dozen planned out.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from Kremer
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Nice twist, Sam as a superpowered, egotistical genius. (But for the
Greater Good, of course ;) ) Luthor won't know what hit him, no doubt.

If there's a similar Rodney in this world, good thing Sam apparently hasn't encountered him yet. He'd probably top her list of people to squish like a bug.
Comments from author:
Squishing Rodney like a bug might count as anti-hero instead of supervillain. :-)
Review By [Kremer] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from chrysanthemum
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Ooh, scary idea! Well, I guess at least one of them had to go evil :) And I like her superpower acquisition. Very cool.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from JediKnight
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That was something Ididn't expect.
Comments from author:
Good! Because what could be worse than a mad scientist with Sam's brains?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist" from Shadowman
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A nasty and rather unexpected twist. Well done though I am looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Well, it is the DCU, where this is the sort of thing that happens regularly, when the Anti-Monitor and Superboy-Prime aren't on the loose.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Brit" from SlowMercury
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Yeah, that meeting could have gone much, much better. I choose to believe that Hermione set fire to Snape's books and not him until explicitly told otherwise -- she always had a strong moral streak, if also a vindictive one. And it might help if she could tell how upset the Scoobies were at botching the meet; canonically, she accepted the first genuine offer of friendship extended to her and never looked back in spite of some extreme differences in personality and goals. Still, she *was* younger then...

I can't wait to see what the next installment is! Are you writing one from each world, or will we get to see follow-ups?

EDIT: ...is that Carlos Ramirez from the Dresden Files?
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading. I'm going to assume she set fire to some of his books, until she tells me otherwise. :-)

I am sort of writing 'one from each world' but there will be multiples from some worlds, and there might be two follow-ups. But not to this story. (And no prizes if anyone guesses which chapters get a direct follow-up.)

And no, it's not Carlos Ramirez from the Dresden Files. It's just a guy who uses his good looks to take advantage of lonely, nerdy female graduate students. Harry Dresden's Carlos would never do that. He might *hint* that he is that kind of guy, but he isn't.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Brit" from JediKnight
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Interesting job on this, looking forward to more.

-You have one grammar mistake "She made sure she recalled the exact wording of that Latin spell from Hermione" should be "She made sure she recalled the exact wording of that Latin spell from Willow".
Comments from author:
Oh yeah. Major thinko there. Thanks.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Brit" from Amberdrake
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Awesome. As usual. I was thinking... What if the Buffy-verse version of Jamie Sommers really did become an inner-city teacher? What if she discovered vampires and was trying to find the Watchers?
Comments from author:
That's not too far off what I was considering. But if you thought chapter 2 was odd, wait until you see chapter 3.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Brit" from RevDorothyL
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Go, Hermione! :)
Comments from author:
:-) Thanks for reading. And thanks for backing Hermione against Professor Cranky.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Brit" from burmafrdnow
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Now this was better than chapter one. A Hermione that has not been through a war is a very different Hermione. Not as self confident; and just as stubborn.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Brit" from PATM
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I like it! Snape doesn't suffer immolation does he? Singeing or a little worse would be sufficient.
Comments from author:
Maybe she'll just set fire to his books, which he might find even more painful.
Review By [PATM] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Brit" from cmdruhura
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Not that any incarnation of Snape doesn't deserve it, but I do hope she doesn't burn down the entire building just because of him. Maybe just light his pants afire. The front if he's real obnoxious.
Comments from author:
Maybe she'll just set fire to his books, which he might find even more painful.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Brit" from Gideon
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Well if anyone could convince Hermione to fireball someone it would be Snape! I wonder what excuse he thinks he has in this universe? And I can't believe the scoobies thought that Hermione would welcome the overturning of her worldview. They have been dealing with the weird stuff so long that they have forgotten what the world looks like to normal people :(
Comments from author:
And Hermione was about the *last* person at Hogwarts who was willing to accept things that didn't fit in with her worldview, so she was a really bad choice for this approach. Oops.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Brit" from MarcusRowland
Review:
These have been hilarious - and I hope Snape got what was coming to him. REALLY looking forward to seeing what happens when people go looking for their world's version of Selina...
Comments from author:
That might be a few chapters away. The next chapter is "The Wayne Foundation and a Scientist". You'll have to wait a bit.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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