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Review of chapter "SG-1 and That Brit, part 1" from Harry
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So, Giles is going after some artifacts that Daniel wants as well. Now, lets see what British Intelligence is after.
Comments from author:
Those Brits! You trying washing them out, you try scrubbing them out...

Oh sorry, that's a laundry detergent commercial. :D
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part VIII" from Marcel
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"the final part will be in two weeks"

Ok, that is by far the worst part of this story. I loved snarky Jack.
Comments from author:
Sorry. But after this, you'll get some snarky Buffy.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Reject" from Harry
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Could Daniel Jackson be one of Fox Mulder's contacts in this world? One of the Lone Gunmen, or a friend of theirs?
Comments from author:
Sounds interesting. Are you going to write it? Because all Dana Scully needs is a 'contact' supporting Mulder's belief in the supernatural.
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bruce Wayne and a Daddy’s Girl" from Harry
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This version of Buffy sounds like one who is taking the long view on getting revenge. Lex, you may be a master at getting your way, and avoiding criminal charges, but if your girlfriend gets the dirt on you, and drops it in the DA's lap, there is not much you can do. Be prepared to face jail time Lex. A LOT of jail time!
Comments from author:
Just remember: Lex has been suspected, investigated, arrested, prosecuted, and even convicted. He's still around. In every continuity, Lex demonstrates in one way or another that he is above the law. Or under it. :D
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and a Brit" from fanreaderonetwo
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"Review of chapter "SG-1 and a Spy" from Harry

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*Shakes head* No, No, NO B! DO NOT take this to Kinsey! If he is like the Kinsey that I know and despise, he will find a way to turn it to his advantage. Trust me, you do NOT want to take this to Kinsey!!!!"

*****

I thought Buffy's character in this fic was interesting. Someone everyone _knows_ is scary smart and has "mad skills", yet somehow they keep thinking that she is a Cali-girl ditz. Further more, they intellectually _know_ that they are massively underestimating her but still can't break the mental image of her.
It bugged me that someone that smart, skilled and well trained accepted Kinsey as a good person to go to. With her smarts, training and contacts she _should_ know that Kinsey has a bad smell to him.

I've been hoping for a follow up to this one since it came out.
Of course, I wanted follow ups to _most_ of them..... grin


from the fic....
"She was going to have to go all the way to the top with this intel. Maybe that guy who was on the Senate Oversight Committee. He looked a lot better than that slimy guy with the comb-over, or the two decrepit white-haired guys too old to take her seriously just because she was a hot blonde. Taking this intel to an up-and-comer like U.S. Senator Robert Kinsey had to be her best option."
Comments from author:
Well, take heart. I plan to write a follow-up to this one as well.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hermione and a Resignee" from Harry
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This version of Willow has her resentment toward the Magical World, but has worked out how to get back at them. By being a vampire, and a SMART Vampire (Not like the Vamp Willow we are so used to thinking of) she has put her smarts to use in a way that makes her very dangerous. I think she would turn Hermione into a assistant that would make many a person shudder!
Comments from author:
I think she's too smart to turn Hermione, because really smart minions with no conscience are an invitation to backstabbing.

However, she has already made a fatal mistake. She has decided to put Harry under her thrall and use him. Harry Potter, who cast a Patronus at age 13, who threw off an Imperius curse on his first try at age 14. She's dust waiting to settle.
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The OSI and a Computer Nerd" from Harry
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Bub, you just made a mistake. A BIG ONE! Messing with Willow is one thing. But both RED AND XANDER? Be prepared for Trouble! DOUBLE TROUBLE!
Comments from author:
Prepare for trouble!
And make it double!
To protect the world from devastation!
To unite all peoples within our nation!
To denounce the evils of-

Oh wait, that's the wrong universe. :D
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Retiree" from Harry
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Trust me Jack, you won't be bringing the IWC down. They will get you back in shape, and reinstall in you the purpose for which you fought for so long. You'll be back in the fight, and working with the girls.
Comments from author:
Well, you can hardly blame the guy. There's no way Xander's story could be *literal*, right? Right? (This is where you yell 'fer cryin out loud!')
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and a Spy" from Harry
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*Shakes head* No, No, NO B! DO NOT take this to Kinsey! If he is like the Kinsey that I know and despise, he will find a way to turn it to his advantage. Trust me, you do NOT want to take this to Kinsey!!!!
Comments from author:
Yes. He's that Kinsey. In fact, he's *exactly* the Kinsey you know and hate, because it's in Jack's universe, not Buffy's. And I have plans to continue this story too.
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and a Brit" from Harry
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Great. A version of Hermione that is more Samantha Carter than Harry Potter Hermione. Sounds like the girl needs a SERIOUS wake up call after what she went through!
Comments from author:
Well, isn't that what Hermione would be if she hadn't gone to Hogwarts? :D
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and a Brit" from Harry
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Well, one member of the team has been met with. Shame that Daniel Jackson didn't realize that he was getting some misinformation. After all, Giles, Rupert Giles also works for MI5 as well.
Comments from author:
:D Yes, but Giles, Rupert Giles is an expert at coming across as nothing more than a dithering old academician.
Review By [Harry] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part VIII" from JinaSolo
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Final part? What is this Final part? You have 152+ chapters in the previous story in this series...

What about shifting Hellmouths from 'pointing' to hell dimensions to point to Fae dimensions. Probably just as dangerous, but...
Comments from author:
It's only the final part of this one little piece. I plan to write a continuaiton of yet another cross-purpose next. It's the Buffy/DCU crossover.
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part VIII" from JediKnight
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Great job on the new chapter, hoping to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Well, you'll have to wait two weeks, just like always. Sorry.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and a Brit" from fanreaderonetwo
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"Wondering when it will occur to O'Neill that Willow is a potential "loose planet buster" and that it might be safer for the world if she met a "fatal accident", even one that cost him his life when the Scoobies found out what he had done.
A few more horror stories about how dangerous Darth Willow can be might accelerate the notion......

Comments from author:

Well, considering that canon-Jack knows Sam is a potential planet buster and *encourages* her, this Jack might opt to work *with* Willow and train her."

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OK, Sam’s genius and curiosity has produced a few scary “hilarity ensues” moments,
and she has done things that scared her friends in the Line of Duty (blowing up a star comes to mind) but….

I don’t recall any time where Sam’s _best friends_ were all absolutely terrified of _HER_ and/or of what she was intent on doing. ISTR at least one (probably non-canon) fanfic
mention that Xander was secretly packing a gun at Kingman’s Bluff with the intention of killing Willow if that was what was necessary in order to stop her from destroying the world.
Comments from author:
Good points. (Is Xander's gun canon or fanon? I'm not sure.) But Jack has also looked at obvious 'enemies' and instantly summed them up as potential allies and/or friends, and Jack has also looked at supposed allies and instantly said 'enemy'. He's usually right, and he usually trusts his gut.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scoobies and the New Guys, part VIII" from RevDorothyL
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Oh, yeah -- Jack fits right in, now that he's had his first real taste of demon-slaying and magical world-saving! :)

Loved the 'Spanish Inquisition' riff (with appropriate Daniel/Hermione lip-lock additions) at the end, especially.
Comments from author:
Boy, a group that *encourages* Jack to misbehave. You know how that's going to go.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Mar 14] • Not Rated
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