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Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part IX" from Harry
Review:
Well, Thor has arrived and explained things. And I agree with B. She HAS to tell Red about what Giles had to say, and IN PERSON! Seeing Willow blush like that: LOL! ROFL! But now, we have to deal with this Gou'ald stun grenade!
Comments from author:
Well, the good thing about Goua'uld stun grenades: non-lethal.
Review By [Harry] • Date [29 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part VIII" from Riniko
Review:
Oh, now I am upset, you left me on a cliff and hanging. Can't wait til the next chapter and finding out how Carter and Jack get out of this one.
Comments from author:
Oops. Sorry. But I only publish that every other Monday.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [27 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bruce Wayne and a Golddigger, part IV" from Riniko
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I want a collection of Floombas too! That was fairly funny, but it was sad that they lost part of their collective. Buffy needs to find a way to better armor her little friends against damage. But, seriously Lex will be really upset, he was taken to the cleaners by cleaningbots. ;)
Comments from author:
Lex was outsmarted by the bimbo he thought he was ensnaring. He's furious! But not at his cleaning bots.

And Buffy hasn't realized that the new head of LexCorp is the dreaded Talia al Ghul.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [27 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Justice Leaguer and a Meta" from Riniko
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Been unable to review til now, as I have been offline reading the story til now. It has been pretty enjoyable, at first I was worried I would not see a return visit to some of the earlier chapters, but I have enjoyed the follow ups as they popped back up even if I had to go back a bit to check a few points.
Comments from author:
I do tend to obsess about details, so that can be a problem with my stories. Or it can be a benefit, depending on your point of view...
Review By [Riniko] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part VIII" from Zeviz
Review:
This remains a very enjoyable story. Thanks for writing. (I'd say the same in the other review, but I am too annoyed about Shar. :P)
Comments from author:
:D Sorry about that. But don't worry, I won't kill off Xander's little sister. :D
Review By [Zeviz] • Date [22 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part VIII" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the newest chapter
Comments from author:
Thanks. Liz just seems to keep going farther and farther down the rabbit hole. Not encouraging when she started out already knowing NSA and CIA stuff and working for the NID...
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [17 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part VIII" from SirLee
Review:
As for Samantha Carter losing her clothes... that trope has a name: it's "fanservice." Too bad this is not a visual medium...
Comments from author:
Oh, I'm pretty sure most of my readers have excellent visualization skills... :D

It could also be the trope 'Badass in Distress'.
Review By [SirLee] • Date [16 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part VIII" from Amberdrake
Review:
There is no part of this that isn't fun.
Comments from author:
:D :D Thanks! (I'm sure Major Carter is currently disagreeing with you.)
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [16 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and a Brit" from fanreaderonetwo
Review:
An Asgard ship being taken totally by surprised by a Goa'uld ship?

Wondering if Loki is dumb, sloppy (he has turned off those annoying sensor alarms that kept distracting him), is unlucky (a new tech Goa'uld cloak on the intruder) or is merely on a very poorly equipped ship......

OTOH maybe he just annoyed the script writers by demanding too much time on-screen or otherwise annoying them (ala Wesley Crusher) and the writers are taking their revenge? grin
Comments from author:
First, it is just a low-end science ship that Loki probably stole, and if so, it might have been in for repairs a la The Doctor's TARDIS.
Second, he has mentioned a problem with the sensors and such, which suggests Point One might be correct.
Third, the ships of Anubis and his underlings are a lot more high-powered and better equipped than your standard ha'tak.
Fourth, in canon one of Anubis' ships did indeed capture Thor, who does not travel in rinky-dink science vessels that need repairs. SG-1 had to rescue him. Or what was left of him.
Fifth, I love ordinal numbers. :D
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [16 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part VIII" from RevDorothyL
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Oh, Loki! If it weren't for the fact that you'd be taking what's left of SG1 down with you, I'd say it's just karma bringing the Goa'uld into play at this too-vulnerable moment for you.

Well, . . . karma, or possibly Murphy.
Comments from author:
Karma. Loki completely deserves what Anubis would do to him, given that it's pretty much what he has done to tons of humans in the past.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part VIII" from Xovervore
Review:
You killed Dawn! Or did you? Maybe she has set a new record for herself as regards her kidnappings - being kidnapped before she is even born.
Comments from author:
{Cartman}You bastards, you killed Dawn!{end Cartman} :D

It is also possible that Buffy chooses to believe this tidbit even when presented with the evidence that a lot of what Joyce said in that time period was just plain crazy.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [16 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part VIII" from Grovtech
Review:
I love the humor and the banter of the characters. You have me eagerly waiting for each new post.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Some characters just automatically generate snappy dialogue. Putting Jack O'Neill and Buffy Summers in the same room gives you tons of potential.
Review By [Grovtech] • Date [15 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part VIII" from fanreaderonetwo
Review:
"Teal’c calmly said to Loki, “You should not state that nothing can go wrong. This is a constant in Earth fiction.”"

*****

That "constant" probably predates this movie, but note the end of this trailer for the 1973 movie _West World_

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LcL3eP0Hfy4

"West World, where nothing can possibly go wrong, go wrong, go wrong" grin



http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Westworld
Comments from author:
I even used 'going Westworld' as one of the catchphrases of the inventors at Whateley Academy. But the phrase goes back way before that.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [15 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part VIII" from Gladius
Review:
I love Teal'c's take on "Don't taunt Murphy!"
Comments from author:
Teal'c is a very common-sense guy. I'm sure he's noticed this from decades of fighting battles too.
Review By [Gladius] • Date [15 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "SG-1 and an Agent, part VIII" from LFW
Review:
I really enjoyed Teal'c attempting to teach Loki; too bad he is so smart to listen
Looking for more
Thanks
Comments from author:
Loki is That Guy. The one who is sure that he's smarter than anyone else, or that he's a better driver than anyone else, or that he's a better athlete than anyone else.
Review By [LFW] • Date [15 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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