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Review of chapter "Into the Weird" from deathgeonous
Review:
Neat fic. I like. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Weird" from AnFan
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Yay! A new chapter. :D I can't help it, I love this story. I may just have to set up a default review for you that includes the first two sentences and the smiley ;)
Review By [AnFan] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the Weird" from WolfWriter
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They'll never get Daniel out of the library, there are so many old books for him to drool over.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Weird" from RevDorothyL
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Good for Buffy, recognizing the boo-boo she'd made in regard to Sam's leadership role, and good for Sam and Teal'c for heeding Buffy's warning and Daniel's instincts.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Weird" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Nice chapter! More please!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the Weird" from VillageOrchid
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Wow. Even if Buffy couldn't read the text, she could certainly read those pictures! Good chapter. Thanks for the update.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Steps" from Keshkreature
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I smell vampires! :)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Steps" from mithrilandtj
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I love this story
bored Buffy is fun
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [20 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Steps" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
LOL> great story so far !Can't wait to read more!
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Steps" from cflat
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Really like this new Buffy/Stargate crossover! Looking forward to seeing what might happen during the rest of the mission.
Review By [cflat] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Steps" from ianquest
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So, are you deliberately writing her as halfwit Barbie!Buffy? She's old enough now that she can no longer use being a Californian teenager as an excuse for stupidity, and to at least be aware of the concept of appropriate clothing. Even the American excuse for an educational system should leave her knowing what camouflage is, and the fact that they would be going to the wilds of a different planet; not a paved road or landscaped park or cemetery, where heels were fine and she wouldn't slow down her team when she twisted her ankle on rocks or mud or undergrowth.

Jack should have told her that if she was that bored & determined to commit suicide, he'd help her by putting a bullet through her brain there on the ramp, not told her that it was fine to keep wearing a great big pink "shoot at me" target if they came under attack from large numbers of local tribes or patrolling Jaffa companies. The SGC is well aware of how often 'safe' planets aren't. Jack's view would be that if she attracts enemy fire, then she's attracting it to her team as well. If she's stupid enough to get herself killed, then she's done everyone a favour by removing herself from the equation; but not if she gets others killed at the same time.

Even Vala knew the value of appropriate clothing in the field, despite playing airheaded bimbo to the hilt for maximum advantage!

Apart from that, this looks like an interesting start. I look forward to seeing more, so long as Buffy smartens up.
Comments from author:
Your review surprised me a little because I honestly didn't think I was writing her as stupid. She still maintains an underestimate me persona, yes, but she's not an idiot. You can assume that she knows she's going off the beaten path, she's had a look at the intel about the planet, and she knows what her own capabilities are. Those details aren't all included because they don't move the story forward. Also, when I wrote this, I was imagining a pale pink sweater; with the tactical vest added, she really wouldn't stand out that much. Jack wouldn't muse about the particular shade of her shirt, but if he thought she would be a danger to the team, you're right - he would've said something. I do try and keep the narrative perspective in character as much as possible. I'm sorry if, in this case, I sacrificed clarity to an unwarranted extent.

I will take what you're saying under consideration as I continue to develop this story. Thanks for the constructive criticism!
Review By [ianquest] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Steps" from Gideon
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I'm not surprised that Jack took those factors into account for Buffy's first trip off world but it looks like there might have been other factors involved too!
I'm glad Buffy is still slayeriffic on other planets and I wish her luck in ruining that pink sweater Dawn gave her.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [18 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Steps" from VillageOrchid
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Interestingly not meaningless. Cool!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Clarke's Third Law" from VillageOrchid
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Nice. Too bad Jack can't tease her though.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Barbie What's-Her-Face" from VillageOrchid
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Well done and interesting twist that Carter thinks she might be "cheating" or perhaps testing the SGC.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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