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Review of chapter "Break-in" from TAO
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Whoa...a third chapter in the same day. Nice!

I'm glad you spared Raven the crappy fate she suffered in X3. However, now I'm curious at Antaeus' reaction about saving Mystique. I really, really, wanna' know this guy's history with Charles why he's pissed at him.

Oh and Antaeus' reaction to Magneto trying to off him indirectly..."Clumsy, Magneto. Very clumsy."....priceless.
Comments from author:
My plot bunny's going like crazy over this story.

I always liked Mystique, I didn't think she deserved to get so callously cast aside, so I made sure she wouldn't. As for Antaeus, well, you'll just have to find out.

And that was probably my favourite line thus far.

Oh, and thanks for the recommendation!
Review By [TAO] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Break-in" from AllenPitt
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huh. Maybe Willow can see / read people's auras, and that's how she perceives his power? Or something like that. Boy is he going to get a surprise when he reads through her recent memories. From the future. Magic/demons/vampires are real, all that. Though I'm starting to think she's in an alternate reality.
If not, maybe she's the descendant of one of the mutants of this time. Magneto, maybe....? How Antaeus figures into all this, I have no clue. Other than he's a golem or demon or something equally strange.
Glad you referenced "Earshot", I hope Xavier reads through that little experience also. And we're all hoping to meet 20-something Quentin Travers, Agent of the Council.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Raven and Mystique" from TAO
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Interesting second chapter. I'm curious to see how you change things in X3 (can't be much worse than how they did it).

BTW...sent you a PM over on the pit (FFN).
Review By [TAO] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Raven and Mystique" from (Current Donor)hols
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Ooh this is really interesting so far I really like it
Review By [(Current Donor)hols] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Raven and Mystique" from AllenPitt
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Hm. Charles isn't English, he's just very Wasp-y. Studied in England, though, sure. Unless you're changing canon in which case I'm totally wrong. Uh, moving on...
Poor Raven, persecuted everywhere. It'd be fun if she really were a demon, who thinks she's a human mutant. Nice use of her powers by Willow . Good thing Charles doesn't intrude on people's private thoughts, at least not right off, he'd be all about how Willow is from the future. Funny to think Giles might be a young student now... er, unless, 1962, nope, not yet. He's not THAT old. Plus he'd be in his rebellious youth phase, even if around at the time. Quentin Travers, maybe. Funny to think of him as a youth.
I suppose one big question is, is Willow an actual mutant, or a witch, or a mutant who thinks she's a witch, or both..... same questions as for Mystique, really.
Comments from author:
Your right about Xavier, I'll just put an addendum to the chapter to explain why I'm making him British. It's not really a major canon change anyway.

Hmm, Travers... interesting thought. Might just filch it.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Encounters" from TAO
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Wait a minute...hold on...a British earth manipulator named "Antaeus"?

Okay...maybe this is coincidence and you may not have any idea what I'm referring to, but this "Antaeus" wouldn't by chance be a certain character from White Wolf's now abandoned (but not forgotten) "Aberrant" 'verse, would he?

If he isn't, never mind. If he is, you definitely got my interest.

Either way, I'm still going to follow this fic.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately, I don't know what you're talking about - although I'll have a look at it, it sounds interesting.

Thank you nevertheless.
Review By [TAO] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Encounters" from AllenPitt
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Xavier would realize she's from the future real quickly. Is she from the future of his timeline, or in an alternate timeline? ie has she heard of mutants etc?
I'm curious on who "Antaeus" is. Possibly a demon or warlock masquerading as a mutant? I wonder if Xavier will accept her as a witch or think she's a mutant who thinks she's a witch? Or both. Will she get the cognomen "Scarlet Witch" ? .
Comments from author:
Hmm, Scarlet Witch... interesting idea, but no.

As for the rest, well, my lips are sealed.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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