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Review of chapter "Kennedy and the Inconvenience" from LFW
Review:
Great scott . . . quite the idea and all the chocolate . . . either way a very interesting chapter
Hoping for more
Comments from author:
My muse latched onto the throwaway line in the first story about Willow and Kennedy's hotel bill, and she did something with it. I couldn't stop her.
Review By [LFW] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kennedy and the Inconvenience" from RevDorothyL
Review:
You actually had me feeling sympathy for Kennedy in this chapter (which is really hard to do), but she REALLY should've known better than to bet such high stakes against Willow, team loyalty notwithstanding. :)

Kennedy's theory that the Rosenbergs may've been hexed into not being around for their daughter, after figuring out that something was seriously wrong with Sunnydale and telling the wrong person about it, is a good and generous interpretation. It's good to know that Kennedy, at least, had parents that weren't influenced by the Hellmouth, even if her childhood was perhaps less than ideal at times (and whose childhood ISN'T less than ideal at times?).
Comments from author:
If the Hellmouth influences so much else, why couldn't affect family relationships too? I've never seen anyone suggest that maybe the Rosenbergs were hexed by Mayor Wilkins, but it seems plausible.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kennedy and the Inconvenience" from eirwinrommel
Review:
Interesting part. Though WAY MORE than I wanted to know about Willow & Kennedy's sex life.
Comments from author:
My muse latched onto the throwaway line in the first story about Willow and Kennedy's hotel bill, and she did something with it. I couldn't stop her.
Review By [eirwinrommel] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Kennedy and the Inconvenience" from (Recent Donor)tammin
Review:
This was unbelievably both cruel and seriously erotic. I liked this positive portrayal of Willow and Kennedy's relationship. Thank you for this series of off scene vignettes.
Comments from author:
My muse latched onto the throwaway line in the first story about Willow and Kennedy's hotel bill, and she did something with it. I couldn't stop her.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kennedy and the Inconvenience" from Mcspender
Review:
I don't know what do I like best of this chapter, either the inmense amounts of chocolate, or the funny sexual games... what the hell, both of them are awesomely funny xD!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
My muse latched onto the throwaway line in the first story about Willow and Kennedy's hotel bill, and she did something with it. I couldn't stop her.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kennedy and the Inconvenience" from SilverWave
Review:
HAH!

Cheers :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kennedy and the Inconvenience" from Alkeni
Review:
I can't say anything but WIN!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from SilverWave
Review:
Great, spot on characterisation.

Thanks :-)
Comments from author:
And thanks for reading. I liked Riley more than most Buffy fanfic authors seem to.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Hallelujah. So nice to see someone get the whole "secure calls" thing and understands the concept of "need to know" and clearances. Most of the Hollywood originated crap that shows up makes my skin crawl.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [1 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from bucksavage
Review:
Sam groaned, “Do those guys just have magical demon magnets in their heads or something? Everybody else goes their whole life without even seeing a demon, and they’re running into them when they go to the grocery store.”

that line almost made me laugh so loud that it would have woken up the entire house; that's a problem because it is 11:28pm. LMAO

Great chapter!!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I personally preferred a different Sam line. I like Riley, so I don't write him the way so many fanfic authors do.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from Bobboky
Review:
very good work
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the update, I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Next chapter is in about two weeks.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from Zorgdub
Review:
Short but sweet.

Hmm, looking back and actually measuring the length of this chapterit isn't *that* short, but for some reason it felt much shorter than the others. Weird.
Comments from author:
It is a bit shorter than most other of these chapters.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
lol Yup Xander can run into demons at grocery store - not sure about the rest of the gang but Xander for sure.

In fact that would be another good fic...an ice demon in the frozen food section?

Anyway...great chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks. It did seem like every new person Xander met was a demon. The Sunnydale dating services must have been... interesting.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from alynambered
Review:
Another amusing and detailed chapter!!

Keep 'em coming!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. The next chapter is in two weeks.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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