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Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from Gideon
Review:
Andrew is really not good with secrets is he? I think most of that little aside is probably things that Riley wished he still didn't know. And now he is going to have to find someone cleared to talk about the Astria porta. Not necessarily cleared to talk to him about it but cleared for him to talk to them about it:) I would have thought knowing Colonel Carter's name and the project she works on would be useful for that purpose but maybe Andrew doesn't know that yet.
Comments from author:
Andrew's really not having a good night, is he? Emergency calls to people who can rip him into pieces, or turn him into a newt...
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from AnFan
Review:
You know, every fic I've read with Riley in it has had a "special" phone of some kind :) And it seems that every fic with Riley in it was a Stargate fic... Of course, that could be due to my reading habits also.

I think everyone in the story is thinking about how they or someone else is going to be teasing Xander about this encounter. The more information about the encounter they get the more they will think about wanting to be there when he "gets it" from either the gang or the people who know him best.

Now, Riley's request would be a way for someone outside of the two forces already in the know to find out about this situation. So far the Stargate group and the Scoobie group both know about what's going on. If you want to drag in another group that might not be listening in (you know the NID have heard about it already) like maybe the President, this would be a good opportunity. Especially with the possibility that the President knows all about the fight the Scoobies are involved in, and we know from SGC cannon he knows about the Stargate... He could be a good unifying force to get the two to play nice together after the point of the previous story.

Wow, that was one long run-on thought and I'm too out of it to go over it and clean it up. Hope it's more coherent than it seems in my head after writing it.

Can't wait for more. I'm continuing to enjoy this story a great deal.
Comments from author:
Riley will get stonewalled. But he won't be the only person asking questions...
Review By [AnFan] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from Bill
Review:
GIGGLE! Well done!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bill] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from RevDorothyL
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Andrew's babble is almost Willow-worthy! :)

And I don't blame Riley at all for using some 'un-parliamentary' language at the thought of another rogue NID group playing footsie with extra-dimensional demons (after all, that's about as close to apocalypse-level badness as you can get, without actually having a scheduled apocalypse . . . yet!). Good thing his little daughter slept soundly through it, though, since I doubt Sam would take kindly to her child repeating those words at the worst possible time (as they invariably will).
Comments from author:
Andrew gets stressed. :-)

And poor Riley. I can't think of anyone who's going to want to tell him about the SGC.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from Alkeni
Review:
As always, an interesting chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Riley and the Surprise" from serenityselena
Review:
that was really amusing...
hope to read more soon ^_^
Comments from author:
The next chapter of the story is scheduled for two weeks from now.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy and the Interruption" from Gideon
Review:
Yeah, it looks like Buffy will be busy for a while, plus on the other side of the world, so no Buffy based rescue for Xander this time! I hope they keep her informed though, it should help her keep a worried frown on her face when she has to be in the same room as the mustache guy. I love the amount of detail you put in these chapters. It must be a lot of work for what will only be a chapter or two. The pizza rules were great! I can just see how her friends had to come up with their own rules in retaliation after seeing the craziness that Dawn and Buffy have come up with as food items. That would be a good demon test actually, feed them a Dawn special and if they eat it without comment they are obviously not human!
Comments from author:
Excessive detail is pretty much a hallmark of my work. :-) If you ever read my Phase novels, you'll see that. And it ought to be possible to make an edible s'mores pizza with the right dough, the right toppings, and marshmallows or peeps. It wouldn't really be a pizza anymore, but...
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy and the Interruption" from katfairy
Review:
Actually, there's a place in Old Town, ME that makes a barbecued onion ring chicken pizza that is super-tasty.
Comments from author:
I know a local place that makes an awesome 'mexican' pizza with salsa, black beans, cilantro, etc. And another place that makes a really good spicy thai pizza with chicken and peanut sauce. So maybe some of Dawn's experiments would be really tasty. Maybe a s'mores dessert pizza with melted peeps and chocolate...
Review By [katfairy] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy and the Interruption" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on this update.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Next: someone you won't expect.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy and the Interruption" from Rich
Review:
Ok, this whole series is great, but this chapter made laugh out loud (stupid cheaty sports guys). Plus the idea of an underwater hellmouth in the Philippines is flat out brilliant.
Comments from author:
Thanks. The Philippines are really a tiny amount of land in a vast area of water, so it just seemed natural.
Review By [Rich] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy and the Interruption" from alynambered
Review:
Yaaay!!! LMAO Great chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy and the Interruption" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great fun look at how Buffy categorizes things.
Comments from author:
And I like the idea that the big Buffy-Dawn arguments now revolve around tiny things like where the pizza cutter should be kept.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy and the Interruption" from SilverWave
Review:
Nice.

Cheers.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy and the Interruption" from bucksavage
Review:
Now that was damned funny! And you really captured the essence of Buffy.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Some days I really capture the character, and some days the character captures me.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy and the Interruption" from bashful
Review:
Loved this chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Trying to guess which character will be featured in it. The most obvious choice would be Willow (and maybe Kennedy). If that isn't it, then I'd guess that it will be Vi receiving a phone call from the call center. Not that another dose of Andrew wouldn't be terribly amusing.


-b
Comments from author:
Willow and Kennedy will be in a chapter. I'll admit that much. And it will be the only FR21 chapter in the story.
Review By [bashful] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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