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Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from alynambered
Review:
Not as funny of an ending as you could do, but then it is Hank and the President talking. It does qualify for a snicker or two.

Does muse need any new socks??
Comments from author:
No! Not more socks! :-) Okay, socks are much better than sending her scotch and cigars. That leads to horrific muse-inspiration and loss of huge amounts of my time. In some ways, it's like having multiple personality disorder (which is not what it's called anymore, but what the hey): I start concentrating... hours later I realize I lost time, and there's twenty pages of written material in front of me, and I missed lunch with my SO.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from Bobboky
Review:
I would like to see a sort story where willow meets a prior
Comments from author:
That is a hook I planted pretty firmly, but...
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from EasterCat
Review:
This was entertaining, although it wasn't very in depth. If you ever plan to expand upon the story, I would look forward to reading it.
Comments from author:
Well, it was just a series of vignettes following the storyline from another story. If I ever continue, the story would move on, in at least one direction. Maybe two or three. It's hard to tell ahead of time.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from Amberdrake
Review:
Thank you. That was a fun ride. If your muse ever leads you back this way you've got to make sure Rodney meets Willow. It's officially Saturday here so I'm counting the minutes to SRAM. :)
Comments from author:
I would think that Sam would insist on it. :-)

And tSRoAM is now about 14 hours away.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from TheMaskedLurker
Review:
--'{@

Sad to see this end.
I've enjoyed most of the blurbs.
Hope your muse backtracks.

-[ These character pieces have been enjoyable to read for the most part. Some I liked more than others; mostly because I was intrigued and amused by those characters when I ran across them in the main story. ]-
Comments from author:
Some pieces are better than others, and some characters are more interesting than others, but it tends to vary by the person.
Review By [TheMaskedLurker] • Date [2 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from starwolf
Review:
that was very good all down the line. ‘night of the living jello’ prank I take it is something like 'the noodle incident'
keep up the great work, if your muse shoves you this way again, I read it.
thanks
Comments from author:
Night of the Living Jello is officially a Noodle Incident and will never be revealed.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from Rich
Review:
Does this mean we're not going to hear about the "Night of the Living Jello ?"

Seriously, this is a great series, and I hope you can get back to it sometime. Comgratulations.
Comments from author:
Night of the Living Jello is officially a Noodle Incident and will never be revealed.
Review By [Rich] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from deamon
Review:
well i didnt say make them a couple lol. but they could be friends. one is what 6 years old and made from her sister? and the other is two or three and pretty much was born asexually lol. they would understand eachothers identity issues and crisises
Comments from author:
There are lots of interesting parallels you can draw between the characters of Buffy and those of Stargate, but that's largely because both are trope-heavy.
Review By [deamon] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from LordCorwin
Review:
both stories were excellent ... :) ... if you ever did a sequel ... I'd read it..
Comments from author:
Thanks. I may write one someday when my muse gives me that spark, so I know what to write.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from DragonBard
Review:
Too bad you've got no plans to continue. This is a very fun series.

Would be interesting to see Carter try and see if she can understand magic from a tech PoV, or possibly build machines to use it without having a spellcaster involved

Well, I hope your next fic comes soon, and meets (or exceeds) the high expectatoins this series set.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I may continue it some time in the future, if and when my muse gives me something to write. I never just write a scene and put it out for comments or suggestions. If I write, I have an entire plot outlined with character development and key scenes written. For example, I didn't start writing the first story until I knew where things would go, how SG-1 would find Xander, how they would get him to the mountain, what Xander would do there, and how the story would resolve. In lots of detail.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from slmncpm
Review:
oh i so loved this! *hugs you lots* thank you!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading. You could always 'rec' it as a real thank you!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from Traszgo
Review:
I've always thought the fics that show Samantha Carter refusing to believe in magic when she has the evidence right in front of her were ...not as good a character portrayal as they could be. Sure, she will doubt at first, but the more she pokes it and it holds up, the more she will switch to analyzing the thing. Her mind plus ability to feel naquadah could potentially make her an AWESOME witch (assuming the sensing can extend to other things).

The Rashomon style look at the story from other perspectives has been excellent. I am sad it is done.
Comments from author:
I've always seen Sam as a true scientist: data trumps theories. New data indicates it's time to revise the relevant theories. She did it with Goua'uld equipment. She did it with Asgard stuff. She could do it with magic.
Review By [Traszgo] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from Shadowman
Review:
It has been a good and funny series I am sorry to see it finished.
Comments from author:
Thanks. But my muse is interested in other stuff now.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Awesome story Diane...

*sends Diane's muse the good chocolate and a picture of my combined 'Puppy dog eyes and resolve face'*

Poor poor Hank and Henry...
Comments from author:
You would think that years of dealing with Jack O'Neill would prepare you for Scoobies...
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue – Hank and the Red Phone" from Antaeus
Review:
why not a sequel you could do so well at it?
Comments from author:
The problem is my muse. She can't be bargained with. She can't be reasoned with. She doesn't feel pity, or remorse, or fear. And she absolutely will not stop, ever, until I have written what she wants me to.
Review By [Antaeus] • Date [1 Mar 13] • Not Rated
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