Alright where is that school that teach writers how to be evil so I can find it and pummel those teachers. You are so evil.
First you ended chapter 3 with a mean cliffhanger next when I think yes an update. It doesn't involve a continue of that chapter but a flashback. That is so mean

Well even when it wasn't expected I totally love the way how you explained her gifts. again very refreshing and awesome.

can't wait what will come next. Oh and I can't wait how long she can keep her secret from her uncle, because he will notice with his background it would be strange if he wouldn't.

hmm..now thats interesting, though when I read big black dog I though it was a new HP crossover. lol

So, a very different approach to the Slayer line, with a more Native American(-ish), nature-oriented (associating the traits of the Slayer with animal, rather than demon, abilities) origin story than in canon, then?

I'll be curious to see why Dakota is a male or appears male, as well

Good chapter for drama. I can't quite do Math in my head regarding Buffy's age, though.

Is this a non magic world AU, or a Buffy just wasn't called AU? I like your extrapolation of her personality and potential.

Great story!

No mystical influence here I'm guessing since she needed an inverted bucket to mount the horse, interesting and looking forward to more.

Glad you updated even it was short and not a full chapter. Can't wait for more.

And yes school is important, so I won't complain about the few updates doesn't mean I will like it but well you have no choice.

I only hope you will try to finish this good story and won't abandon it like so many auteur's do.

Love it and good writing.

Thanks for the 'free preview' of the full chapter to come! Glad you're not skimping in your school work in order to update for us (speaking as a college professor!)

SG-1 is an active team, involved with all sorts of things. Missing a meeting isn't the end of the world. After all, it's to meet a new team member, not getting a new commanding officer. As an elite unit they rightly get cut a lot of slack, probably.
Anyway--Buffy Summers, who never went to Sunnydale, and wasn't "called" as a slayer until she's ... 21 or so? 22? is interesting.
The Council will do their usual thing and ID her as the new slayer, then seek to acquire her. That could get messy. Sacred duty or not, she's a serving officer in the Air Force.
So-AF won't let her go, she won't want to go, but the Council is very powerful and determined. Quite a collision coming up. And honestly, she is needed to do slayer-stuff, or vampires/demons will run out of control. Not sure if there's a good solution here.

I've read your story and I like it.

I hope you will have time to continue it.

two chapters and you already have me addicted. It's a good start and can't wait for more. It's a refreshing story which doesn't look like others and I hope you will update soon.

About some reviews. It's your story and you can make the characters act how you think it would fit in your story. I'll give the advice I give some other writers.

Read your reviews and enjoy the positive ones. The reviews who have some negative aspects, well read them and learn from them use when useful but again it's your story and you have the storyline in your head not the readers and reviewers.

For me I love it. I like the Buffy you write more then the Buffy who let her friends decide what's best for her and never noticed that behind the Slayer there is also a human involved who has a right to make mistakes and is perfectly capable of making decisions of her own. And she let it happen because she hate it when they are mad at her. So to me this Buffy is to very refreshing.

Keep writing and I will enjoy reading.

this is completely AU - so I can't comment on characterization. Except this, so far she doesn't seem like Buffy, she is someone else who has the same name.
"She also had the cap on her head, hiding her hair and eyes from view." I'm pretty sure that someone in dress uniform would never wear their cap inside - esp. in front of a general. I think that is a huge breech of decorum.

Sad! *sniff* but great update :)

Does buffy have slayer powers in this?

You'll see. ;)