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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from CPTSkip
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You are a high school student? Your language teachers must love you. If you aren't getting straight A's, there is something wrong with the modern education system.

I am really enjoying your story and look forward to reading more.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Selonianth
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My name is* it currently says My name os Summers Buffy.

forgot to mention that kun and chan are also ways to indicate affection for a person. IE RomanticInterest-Chan/kun.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [17 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Difdi
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So, you changed the name, changed the personality, changed the entire setting, changed the history and kept the character's face...how precisely is this a crossover? That's not Buffy, that's an original character with a Buffy name label tacked on as an afterthought.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from randyzoopurple
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woooooooohoooo!!!!! loved new chap thought you left us.
Review By [randyzoopurple] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from AndreaMaine
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I assume the M3A1 that Buffy uses is some Japanese issue or other service issue weapon. Now I know that in my experience the M3A1 is a .45 ACP caliber submachine gun made by the Gas Lamp Division of General Motors. When I was in the Army Guard in one of the units I was assigned to I was issued an M1911A1 (well two different ones: a) the first was made by Remington Rand and was a piece of junk b) the second was made by Ithaca and was a charmed defensive tool) and an M3A1 submachine gun. Yet from the description of Buffy's M3A1 I suspect that she is armed with some sort of long range sniper type rifle.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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hmm..interesting update though its a it confusing how she got from the hospital to to the horse.
Comments from author:
Well, that part was a flash back while this continues on with the main timeline for this story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from RevDorothyL
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Glad you're not giving up on this!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from PATM
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How is this fit meant to be good? Every time they get near each other its drama and distraction, the meet deferred, again. I see that Buffy is going to be leading SG-1? I like that a lot.
Review By [PATM] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
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Good chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpacedCadet
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Excellent start...but I would have expected Mark to make at least a token attempt to convince Buffy to go to West Point.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from bradsan
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Alright where is that school that teach writers how to be evil so I can find it and pummel those teachers. You are so evil.
First you ended chapter 3 with a mean cliffhanger next when I think yes an update. It doesn't involve a continue of that chapter but a flashback. That is so mean

Well even when it wasn't expected I totally love the way how you explained her gifts. again very refreshing and awesome.

can't wait what will come next. Oh and I can't wait how long she can keep her secret from her uncle, because he will notice with his background it would be strange if he wouldn't.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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hmm..now thats interesting, though when I read big black dog I though it was a new HP crossover. lol
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from RevDorothyL
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So, a very different approach to the Slayer line, with a more Native American(-ish), nature-oriented (associating the traits of the Slayer with animal, rather than demon, abilities) origin story than in canon, then?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from VillageOrchid
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I'll be curious to see why Dakota is a male or appears male, as well
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
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Good chapter for drama. I can't quite do Math in my head regarding Buffy's age, though.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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