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Review of chapter "Bad conclusions" from burmafrdnow
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I really hope elliot is not dumb enough to think its PCP. But I can see as usual him trying to explain away her incredible physical capability.

And of course they think she is part of those killing.

Sad but predictable.

That is the problem with TV cop shows.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bad conclusions" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
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Nice story (I always like SVU stories) I hope you write this to a conclusion.

Noticed a few typos...did you really mean 'one thousand year stare' ? Normally its a 'one thousand YARD stare' to describe people who have seen or experienced a little to much in their lives.

Looking forward to the next update,
DaveT
Comments from author:
I'd always heard it as a thousand year stare. I guess either would work but I'll google it and see which is preferred.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bad conclusions" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Well, actually it's probably more realistic this way than if Elliot suddenly believed. He's a deeply suspicious guy, so it'll take quite a bit to convince him.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bad conclusions" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
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I can only imagine how this will go down...

Elliot to Buffy: "Don't you realize that you were molested and brainwashed into thinking you are this Slayer?"

Buffy to Elliot: "Yeah, and how do you explain the super powers?"

Elliot to Buffy: "PCP."

Sorry, I couldn't resist when I read that paragraph about brainwashing cults and this just popped in my head. That was so Elliot. I'm looking forward to chapter five.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Further down the rabbit hole" from NikkiR
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“Munch is going to be impossible to live with"

Was just reading hadn't logged in ... then I read the last line and had to login and say "Thanks!" cause that totally made me giggle :)
Review By [NikkiR] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Further down the rabbit hole" from Rich
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I didn't think you'd actually do it, but I'm glad you did - Finn's and Much's reactions were perfect. Of course Munch would be the one who's actually heard of the Slayer; and as always, there's no way to know whether or not he actually believes.

In spite of Buffy's advice, I don't see Elliot or Olivia walking away from this new case. They're going to pursue this wherever it leads, and they're good enough to actually get somewhere; this is not the Sunnydale PD. Elliot and Buffy will meet again. I look forward to it.
Comments from author:
Like Elliot has ever let anything go. And I'm sure once Olivia gets clued in that there is something more to the case than meets the eye she will be just as tenacious.

Munch is going to be in conspiracy nut heaven over this. Finn is the only one I don't have a good read on yet.
Review By [Rich] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Further down the rabbit hole" from KnightOwl
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I'm happy to see more of this story! I love Elliott realizing Munch was right. It would be fun for Munch to meet Buffy, I can just imagine that conversation. Thanks for updating!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Further down the rabbit hole" from Kremer
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Intriguing so far, and you have me hooked. As tragic as it is, hopefully the girls weren't slayers or witches?
(If they were slayers, that would be a mighty big deal, with them being helpless for so long.)
Review By [Kremer] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Further down the rabbit hole" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Hehehehe. Anytime Munch is proved right on one of his conspiracy theories, of course he'll be impossible to live with.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morning After" from Chan
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Hummm... two worlds seems as if they're on a collision course, wondering what chaos might result.
Review By [Chan] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morning After" from EasterCat
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So far so good. Looking forward to more.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morning After" from elvi
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I'm glad my fic inspired you, and I'm happy you didn't leave it as a stand-alone. It reads extremely similar to the one I wrote so I'm glad you added more.
Comments from author:
When I read yours I had this mental image of her walking towards the door as the vampire entered and then staking him and just walking through where he had been to disappear herself once outside. I kind of thought that was where you were going with yours and when you didn't I felt inspired to write it. Now of course my Muse has all these ideas running through her mind and she won't be happy until I do something about them.
Review By [elvi] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morning After" from Dmitri
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Hey, an impromptu sequel! Cool!
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morning After" from HananeELmokkadem
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I'm glad you added to this, it's very good.
Review By [HananeELmokkadem] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morning After" from Greywizard
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I'm pleased to see this is being continued.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [3 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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