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Review of chapter "chapter 9" from Mcspender
Review:
No Faith, you do deserve to be loved, but first, you have learn how to love yourself.
Cool fight scene, wasn't expecting to see the First still around.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Hey, the First is eternal and stuck on Earth. People should remember that the First and the Old Ones and the others are stuck on Earth with the slayers and the humans. Strange bedfellows. i think it's gonna take Faith a little longer to forgive and love herself assuming the Yautja don't blow up the world in the meanwhile. : )

Next chapter Soon!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from Mcspender
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So, the killer smurfette is around this time... daaamn it man. This is gonna be a cool fight, bloody and probably will destroy the entire solar system, but hey, a cool brawl is an awesome thing to see.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Who would ever thought that Illyria would be the great defender of the Earth.
Once again Buffy "I am the law" Summers is putting her foot down.

See Ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Mcspender
Review:
The Old Ones?. This is gonna be a brawl to remember xD.
So the Preds found the original home world of the Señor Pardners?. They should have blow it away, just to show the Dog, the Venizon and the Goat (A.K.A. Wolf, Ram and Hart xD) they were not messing around.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Mcspender, you are getting blood thirsty in your old age. : ) The Four Kings have a combined score just high enough to use the planet killer only two or three times so they're waiting to make it count.
The new question here is, is Hive gonna let the Red Man release the Old Ones.

Next chapter soon!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 5" from Mcspender
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“How bad have things gotten if I’m the voice of reason?” Faith looked around the room. She knew she had a lot of work to do here.

Yup, and the fiercest and deadlier fighter of all is in the house.
Hell yeah.
The card is complete, South Boston Represents. Let's get ready to rumble!!!!.

E.T.A.: Weeell, being a fan of the Red Sox counts as being a Southie ?. I just like the old town and of course, Faith too xD.
Comments from author:
Mcspender are you a Southie? I've always suspected... : )
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 4" from eriktheviking
Review:
Wow, easy to see the Yautja are taking this seriously, well done.
Comments from author:
Yeah, most of the time they're just goofing around the galaxy, randomly hunting anything for fun. But every once and a while they like to hunt together as a pack. Especially monsters that keep grandpa as a zombie. : )
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 4" from Mcspender
Review:
So, any chance for an even better fight between the son of the slayer and Spike, the Bloody??. I mean, I didn't liked the one in the show, and with the Pred around, sport is guaranteed!.
Blood sport, that is it =D.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Oh yeah. The Pred's are good to have around when you're on a blood hunt. Blondie is in for a tough time.

PS: Here's a picture of Hive. Enjoy.
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=350545735020542&;set=a.251568871584896.57758.224355270972923&type=1&relevant_count=1
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well done bit of brutality to end the Turok-Han.
Comments from author:
Thanks! The next time you ask Buffy "You and what army..." Now you know. : )
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 3" from Mcspender
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Good news: No more old time super vamps working for the first evil!.
Bad News: the Preds are coming to wage war!.
Worse News: Now we have hyper powerful aliens controlled by a waaay out of control Buffy.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Hey, before you can build a Hive you gotta clear out those varmints in the basement. But don't worry I think some Preds are on the way spank Buffy. (Now that would make some kinna fanfic.)


Next chapter soon!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [10 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
When the Yautja hold a grudge, they really know how to hold a grudge. Well done.
Comments from author:
The thing about territorial predators is that nobody touches their stuff. : )
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [7 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SCIfilover
Review:
Hello author,

interesting story you have here. I have a question to ask about one of your comments in a review you replied to which is below, I hope you answer my question.


Buffy is now in the position to see the BIG picture with the muscle to do something about it. That my friend is the problem. Ultimately, all power fails. You'll see.

Buffy is right though in getting rid of the key, it is a hazard just laying around and there is an offchance that it can be used for destructive purposes and thus its better to be rid of it forever than leave it on the chance it can be used for sch purposes. Anyway, what did you specifically mean by power fail?
Comments from author:
In the Dune series there was a quote
"This is the fallacy of power: ultimately it is effective only in an absolute, a limited universe. But the basic lesson of our relativistic universe is that things change. Any power must always meet a greater power. Paul Muad'Dib taught this lesson to the Sardaukar on the Plains of Arrakeen. His descendants have yet to learn the lesson for themselves. -The Preacher at Arrakeen"

All power fails because over time goals change. The future is always in motion. The most you can do is use power to temporarily create the illusion of stability. Power is not information so it protects you from the change until the disconnect becomes too great and you fail.
Review By [SCIfilover] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
“I have to fix this world.” Buffy said. “It is broken and I am the law.”
With great power, comes great insanity =S??. I feel that a looot of headaches incoming around the entire planet. Of course, a bunch of heavily armed aliens looking for payback are gonna make things kinda hot for the bad guys... and a few good guys too.

Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
"With great power, comes great insanity" That line cracks me up! Unfortunately, thinking you have the power to move both heaven and Earth means you usually end up screwing up both. All Buffy wants to do is curl up in her warm Hive and lay eggs. But neither is gonna happen.

Next chapter soon.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Iceflame
Review:
I like Dawn, but at the same time, in this dark version of Buffyverse, her removal was apt. Buffy's basically the reincarnation of an Old One that based itself not in one body, but a multitude; at least that's the basic understanding I have.
Comments from author:
I like Dawn too. But the persistence of the Key in the world is a real problem. Imagine if someone stored nuclear weapons in your backyard, and they never came back for them. The Key is an extraordinary dangerous weapon. I talk more about this in my story "The Way of Light."

Buffy is now in the position to see the BIG picture with the muscle to do something about it. That my friend is the problem. Ultimately, all power fails. You'll see.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [6 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cmdruhura
Review:
Harsh.
Comments from author:
yeah but the galaxy is a hard place to tame as Buffy will soon come to realize.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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