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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AllenPitt
Review:
yeah, they need to talk about 'the incident' (Buffy getting tossed out). It was a real trainwreck, and this time they couldn't blame it on Spike. Not sure if they can repair things at this point. Giles betrayed Buffy when he helped Robin attack Spike (and lied to her about it). That's tough to get past. Her actions seemed crazy to them at times ...
They probably do need to ally with some group at this point. For one thing there are slayers all over the world and if they don't act fast, other groups will recruit them before they can get to them. That can get real messy real quick...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from bradsan
Review:
first let me tell you that you did a good job. I like it.
I really hope that Buffy won't make it easy on the Scoobies and Dawn. Let them work for it. Throwing Buffy out was a bad thing. I don't even go about who was right or wrong. But Dawn telling her that she couldn't stay and has to leave and the Scoobies agreeing with it. There was a whole town with evil beings running around and Buffy left with no weapons.
They could have shouted, Hey evil beings their is a slayer on the streets if you are hungry or want to kill her go for it. I never understood that Buffy didn't saw not one evil bad that night.

I still don't like Riley and I agree with Buffy. They have to leave or hide and get everything on track before they can be in the open again. Knowing them that won't take long. On the other hand what did the military think they did. You can't take a whole town down on your own. Oh wait it's marvel so you can.

I like Buffy and Faiths interaction. Those two need each other as friends I mean. They can show each other how to live again, because lets face it. Even Faith doesn't know how to live and enjoy it. She act's like she knows but she doesn't.
Well can't wait what comes next.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from LetsRandom
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I really enjoy the blending of the world that you've done so far and I'm looking forward to see how you continue the story!
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from link
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Thank you for another enjoyable chapter. I love the Buffy's speech about being cookie dough. The idea of Faith as cookie dough is hilarious. Keep up the good work.
Review By [link] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from RafMereC
Review:
Fun read.

Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from RevDorothyL
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I LIKE very much the non-lethal, mutually supportive (mostly -- including Faith getting a genuine, heartfelt laugh at the expense of Buffy's 'cookie dough' speech) meeting on the roof.

A lovely, long update to this story! Thank you!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from alynambered
Review:
Intriguing chapter. Shades of Twilight. Where do (pick a number) 100s or thousands of teenage girls hide?

Great chapter with good characterizations of Faith and Buffy's interactions. Dawn, in canon and fanfic, comes across as needy; yet the question of her humanity, along with always being left, is a valid psychological point. Wonder how you will address it?

Happy New Year!! Resolve to keep writing. lol
Review By [alynambered] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from silfic
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I have just read your enture series... again, and i got to say your work is absolutely incredible...
I can not wait and see how it will continue to progress...
I continue to love this fic and hope for a quick update...maybe with Tone & Clint?! Pretty please ;-)
Review By [silfic] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
Enjoyable update. ^.^ Love Clint.

CT.
Comments from author:
Thank you! And yeah, I have much love for Clint. ;)
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [4 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from HebiR
Review:
Before I read on, I predict that Faith is about to add, or try yo add, another homicide to her record. And no one from SHIELD will blame her.
Comments from author:
LOL They really wouldn't, would they? As for your prediction, mum's the word... ;)
Thank you so much for the review!
Review By [HebiR] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from slmncpm
Review:
nope, i love it!
Comments from author:
Awesome! :D Thank you!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [29 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from SilverAndSage
Review:
Hi; just wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying this, and am eager to read more!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate it. :) The next chapter should be up shortly!
Review By [SilverAndSage] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Clint's POV was definitely worth waiting for, and I very much enjoyed his first encounter with Buffy. Looking forward to more, whenever you're able to update.
Comments from author:
:D I'm so glad you liked this chapter! There will definitely be more of Clint's POV, too. :) And thank you, thank you, thank you so much for sticking with this story even though there's a gap in updates sometimes. I really appreciate it!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from eset
Review:
Great story. I loved Clint's "sales pitch"; he scaled it absolutely perfectly.

And the way you worked in Coulson's reaction to Capt America's discovery was absolutely priceless. I can just imagine his face--like a kid on Christmas.
Comments from author:
Fury knew what he was going when he sent Clint in, right? :) And yeah, I know I'm moving the Captain America timeline up a bit, but I couldn't resist!

Thank you so much for the review! I hope you continue to enjoy!
Review By [eset] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
Love it!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! :)
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [26 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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