Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Live on New Server

Murder, Mayhem, and Magic!

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of story "Murder, Mayhem, and Magic!" from Jaylynn
Sort of confused but curious to see where it is heading with the setting thing and I can't wait for Riddicks arrival.
Comments from author:
my brain's a little fuzzy at the moment. I probably should have split the cordelia trap/revenge into its own chapter. I think I might have given to much back story in a sideways manner.... oops?
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Ripper" from Zyanadryn
Haha... Cordilia is funny. Oh and you are right that it is hard to do 'relationships' with Riddick, so him just being Alpha is good ...really good! I can already see teenage Xander going up against Alpha Riddick in a battle of wits!!!!v
'Xander - "But I dont want to go! I have to stay and help Buff..."
Riddick - Because I am your Alpha, and I have spoken child!"
Dawn - "hell ya! If you are taking Xander, I am going to! Hello! See the stars, new people! And You are NOT leaving me without my Xander!"
Riddick - "Your mate has spoken Child Xander!"

Comments from author:
*snicker* Now ^that^ brought to mind such an ^interesting^ possible scene. Should I put it in? Hmmmm.... I wonder..... Um, excuse me I have to go stop a disaster in progress....

Q! Janus! What have I told you about messing with my notes?! *snag, misses by a hair, mischeif makers escape leaving behind a seething author wondering exactly what they screwed with this time*
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ripper" from Sandi
Cordelia is so out classed. If Xander kept a fraction of the memories and skills she's ghosted the first time she gets in his face.

Okay the first time she threatens his pack.

Joyce should get to help choose Ethan's punishment. She would be ..... creative.
Comments from author:
The problem there is that Xander has been oddly infatuated/interested in Cordelia since around 3rd grade as far as I can tell in accordance with cannon. Now Joyce helping with Ethan's punishment is pure unadulterated evil.... THANK YOU!!!! There is very little that is more terrifying than a mother protecting her child/children. *Mwahahahahahahaha!!!!!*
Review By [Sandi] • Date [28 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ripper" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Oh really Cordy - Harris will pay...interesting way of blaming the victim. But then she always seemed to fixate on him.
Glad Giles finally noticed Xander's little scar problem from home...hopefully he can take care of that.

Great chapter!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ripper" from Mordare
I am liking how this one is going so far. Keep up the excellent work.
Comments from author:
I'll try but no promises. I'm glad that you're having fun. :D
Review By [Mordare] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ripper" from Lottii
Awesome story, I look forward to seeing more!


Comments from author:
I'll see what I can do about putting out a new chappy soon.
Review By [Lottii] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ripper" from Jaylynn
XD Good old Cordy, how her anger is miss placed. She might throw a punch herself at Ethan and risk breaking a nail if she learns that it was him that cast the spell. I can see Riddick being amused by her and added to the pack against her will, she certainly is fiesty like Jack/Kira.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Far Far Away" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Hmm, now the real question is...Riddick current time? Past? Future? You are implying current time...but nothing says it has to be.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
You have a very good point. That will let me play with how fast or slow Riddick gets there. *evil smirk* Unfortunately due to the nature of the spell I don't have the same luxury for those who were actually on the planet at the time unless they were using something specifically from a particular timeperiod in the person/character's life/timeline. I will be keeping that little time frame nugget in mind though. I do so ^love^ to play with such things in the depths of my simulator-like nightmarish mind. *Mwahahahaha!!!!*
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Side Effects" from Sandi
Is Joyce going to act more Dr. Jonesy around Giles? The Jedi is a good default but I think Joyce does her best work with an attitude.

Oz talking to his family will be interesting. I'd think that if you love someone, or even care about them at all, you'd tell them when exposing them to an incurable STD. Yes I think lycanthropy counts. Transmitted by saliva. There is no cure.
Comments from author:
It doesn't count as an STD because you can't get it by having sex. It would probably count as a virus, symbiote, or parasite possibly even a bacteria. An STD by definition is a ^sexually^ transmitted disease and the current medical definition of Lycanthropy is closer to a mental condition which is why I use the more common, classic/layman's definition. It means I don't have to explain much except which subspecied is involved if I don't want to and not even that. But you've raised good points and I don't really plan to use the Jedi as a default, I just figured the Jedi mindset/meditation techniques were a good way to keep her from freaking out or getting to angry over the situation until she could properly calm down and think about it all logically. We'll just have to see how it all develops. XD
Review By [Sandi] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Side Effects" from LucyH
Very nice!!

I rather hope whatever plan Cordelia tries to cook up completely blows up in her face because of the changes some have under gone and the effects it can have on the others.

I hope you consider doing a reactionary chapter of like Riddick waking up wherever he happens to be in the universe and maybe anyone else who might have become aware of things because of the Halloween night. Like... Indiana Jones could still be alive, granted he would be about 98 years old, and get a kick that he got one last adventure (and maybe sending things to Joyce as a sort of inheritance) or even something Torchwood-esque since someone might have noticed The Doctor reaching into this dimension to help Giles. Even Jenny could gain the attention of the Greek Gods considering she was in Wonder Woman's shoes for the night; that be interesting to see how it affects her magic.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reminding me of some areas that would be good to at least look at even if I don't decide to do something complex with them. And your Riddick chapter is up!
Review By [LucyH] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Side Effects" from Zyanadryn
this is a FANTASTIC story!!!! When Riddick comes to earth, is he going to lay down some Domination to the planet or just take Xander and the gang? Oh and is Xander going to be in a relationship with Riddick or is it going to be more along the lines of little brother, Pack mentality? REALLY looking forward to your next update!!!!
Comments from author:
Frankly I'm not sure. I'm leaning toward a pairing but writing any Riddick is pushing my comfort zone as is. Dare I go farther into uncharted territory and try to write an actual pairing? I don't know. I've always been a bit scared of screwing up writing anything to do with the Riddick verse so I've avoided it, same thing with writing any sort of pairing no matter what it may seem in my writing. If you can see a pairing good for you 'cuz up to this point I've only daydreamed about pairings and possibly writing them.
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Side Effects" from AnnaDruvez
Good catch on the T Virus. I was wondering about that....
Comments from author:
Yeah, I thought I'd been clear and then I went back and realized that I hadn't even put it in the story! That's what I get for writing when I'm exhausted.
Review By [AnnaDruvez] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Side Effects" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Good dodged two bullets there, Chaos magic could explain Joyce's tumor later in the show, and ugg the world does not need T-Virus running around. That would spoil everything.

Great chapter!
Comments from author:
I had originally thought that I'd dealt with the T-virus but it was a very busy chapter and I accidentally dropped it. It gave me the chance to do one better than what I was originally planning in my exhausted state. I'm glad that you enjoyed the final result.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Side Effects" from Jaylynn
*snicker* Lol good to see some good happening for Oz. He may be a wolf still but at least this time he gets to keep his memory and control.
Comments from author:
Yup, and immortality to boot.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Murder, Mayhem, and Magic!" from DHX
Couldn't help yourself with the Cordelia thing could you?
Comments from author:
Nope not really. XD
Review By [DHX] • Date [21 Aug 12] • Not Rated
start back Page: 5 of 6 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking