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Review of chapter "Reaction" from randomguy
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Really enjoying this series. Interested to see how you take it if/when Draco finds that while Buffy is fine on the Hellmouth, it's his family, friends and culture that she needs protection from.
Review By [randomguy] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Reaction" from AllenPitt
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The wizarding world might react badly to all this. Depends on the info they first hear. Just imagine what Rita Skeeter would write. Lucius, secretly raising a Dark Creature at the Sunnydale Hellmouth...
Comments from author:
Oh, there's definitely still potential for it all to go badly, but one would hope Rita would think twice before writing that story. Imagine Buffy's reaction to being called a Dark Creature...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reaction" from BrownFinderth
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Very interesting in that Buffy has never held a wand until her bio father showed up and then see the results!!!
Comments from author:
It seems like the wizarding world expects uncontrolled/accidental magic from untrained witches and wizards, and we've seen that Ollivander has to do cleanup from kids trying wands on a semi-regular basis, so I don't think the results are all that surprising. (Lucius is lucky to still be breathing. Buffy was in a stressful situation, and his wand knows some rather nasty magic...)
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [19 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sins of the Father" from FireWolfe
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I like it a lot. The only thing that would make it better is if it was a bit longer. I like when people make the Malfoys seem human. Not necessarily good but human is enough. They are not so one dimensional then.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Sorry they've been on the short side lately. (Today's offering is a bit longer.) The Malfoys seemed human enough to me in the books- they loved each other a great deal, but held some pretty horrible beliefs about pureblood supremacy.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sins of the Father" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Ooooh I like this. I love stories that feature the Malfoys. I dislike the simplistic view of them as "ZOMG DEATH EATERS!" and enjoy a more realistic look on how they may act.
Comments from author:
Thanks! We didn't always get to see it in the books (Harry spent a lot of time thinking in black and white terms) but it seemed pretty clear that the Malfoys as a family really cared deeply about each other. I'm just exploring that from a different, more Malfoy-centric angle. Now that I think about it, it might be interesting to toss Harry into the mix at some point...
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sins of the Father" from Dhampyr
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This is going to end very badly for Lucius I think. And that's not even counting what Giles will do to him when he sees him. I can just picture the uproar that will erupt when the Wizarding World discovers he has a daughter that happens to be a Slayer.
Comments from author:
The wizarding world might take it a bit more calmly than you think, but Lucius is still in for a rough time.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sins of the Father" from alexceasar
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I am really liking this series. Very good work. Narcissa is totally BAMF! Nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks! (You ever doubted that Narcissa was no one to trifle with? Even Bellatrix backed off when Narcissa got aggravated with her!)
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sins of the Father" from ChikaraKatherine
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Ok so far it looks like Lucius, didn't rape Joyce. At least I'm praying he didn't. Goddess knows what Buffy would do to him if he had. A lot of violance with so many creative variations. It would have Spike, Dru and souless Angel. All giving her a standing ovation. Give Lucius credit, he had the moxy to say what he needed to say. Not much else one could do, Crissa enraged is like Buffy enraged. Someone's getting there butt handed to them. Little does anyone know, Buffy certainly does not need protection. She is the protection. She's what's keeping the world spining, and everyone in there own little world. Very nicely done with Crissa and Lucius. I really liked how your wrote them. It all felt very sold and real. Over all just an excellent read.
Comments from author:
He may or may not have. At this point, I'm deliberately leaving it murky, because I feel like it could go either way. Buffy knows it's definitely a possibility, though. And yes, Narcissa is also not to be taken lightly when she's angry. If she and Buffy gang up on him, Lucius is toast...
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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