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Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Sunhawk
Review:
Absolutely wonderful chapter! Interesting twist with putting the Guardian into the mix, I honestly had forgotten about that little bit and it makes so much sense! Going to be interesting when the Scoobies show up at NCIS looking for Gibbs *grins* wonder if they'll talk with Ducky and things will start coming together?
Comments from author:
Thank you! The Scoobies don't get to talk to Ducky at NCIS beyond a brief introduction, but they will be talking to him eventually.
Review By [Sunhawk] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Rich
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I really like this chapter. The conversation sounds right, the characters are all in character, and I think you did an especially good job with Faith (hit now, figure it out later). And "I look at him and I see something that’s awful close to a target," ? I wiah I'd said that (and I probably will).
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Rich] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
This is a very, very good story and it keeps getting better.

Thank you for writing and sharing it!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Eureka
Review:
Loved the new update. Made me smile while holding back tears of joy.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Difdi
Review:
> Stick with Summers, go with Gibbs- hell, make up an entirely new name if it works better for you. Whatever you decide.”

You know, between a line like that, the names you could get if you hybridized Gibbs and Summers and the Summers tendency to blow things up, I gotta ask: Is Burt Gummer a relative? =P
Comments from author:
No, and that's probably a good thing- I can't see Buffy or Willow being comfortable with his love of guns.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Starfox
Review:
Great scene showing Dawn's emotional state, as well as a revelation I should have seen coming but didn't - that someone else was involved in the cover up. Giles meeting Gibbs and Ducky should be a sight to see too, especially with orders coming down from the White House.
Comments from author:
Thanks! The chapter with Giles' meeting at NCIS is up now- and I think it's safe to say no one in the room is a happy camper.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from ShalaDakiri
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You know, in a way both messages are valid: Buffy may have intended it to mean she'll be back soon, but she's also not the girl Gibbs remembers.

I have to admit, I'm looking forward to Ducky's reaction once he finds out what happened to the old council and who is now in charge of things.
Comments from author:
That's a good point, although I doubt Gibbs is in a place to see it.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
Its a sign of life!! LOL So is he going to make it back in time for the meeting with Dawn and company? Or will he just be hearing about it later? This is an awesome story and I am very much looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Comments from author:
He'll be back in time for the meeting at NCIS, though he won't be very pleased about it.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Harry
Review:
Looks like there is going to be a lot of questions asked once Gibbs, Buffy and Dawn Patrol get to a point where they can have a civil conversation. And with the way things are looking, I think someone is playing both sides against the other for either their own Jollies, or for a game that is being played. And if it IS a game, you just upset the WRONG pieces!
Comments from author:
There will be a lot of questions, but if everyone sits down together, they will find that between them, they can answer most of them.
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from carmsfic
Review:
Awesome story and awesome chapter. Thank you for posting. I like the possible Guardian angle. Will we learn more about Joyce's original personality? Were you planning any possible pairings? I can't wait to see what you have planned ahead.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm afraid we won't learn much about Joyce's original personality. Beyond Dawn/Graham, I didn't have any pairings in mind for this story, but I haven't ruled out sequels.
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All My Sisters" from Eureka
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So how is Buffy going to talk to Gibbs if he is out at the hotel? LOL Faith did a good job at holding back on Ziva and Gibbs gotta say. More soon?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [7 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All My Sisters" from CindyB
Review:
This was an awesome update! For once, I was almost hap...Well, not totally unhappy that Ziva wasn't dead and oozing bodily fluids onto the floor. I am really interested in how Buffy's meeting with the President went and what has Dawn so pissed. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Also, Faith & Willow working together is kinda cool.....
Review By [CindyB] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All My Sisters" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Yay! Interesting confrontation, well done.
Thanks for posting!
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [5 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All My Sisters" from DrPhibes
Review:
"...um Buffy? We kinda maybe beat up your dad..." Can't wait to see that conversation as well as the results of the bureaucratic tac-nuke Buffy just dropped on Gibbs.
Review By [DrPhibes] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All My Sisters" from PATM
Review:
Faith and Willow meets NCIS and move on. Very nice.
Review By [PATM] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
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