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Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from Rich
Review:
I'd be surprised if someone on Gibb's team didn't at least monitor the Quantico operation; they've circumvented orders before when it was something they felt strongly about, and this situation certainly meets that standard.
Comments from author:
You underestimate Operation Distract Gibbs. (Of course, it's possible the Scoobies may also be underestimating Gibbs' team.)
Review By [Rich] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Nice update!
See you next time!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from Ember
Review:
Just when I start to forget about this story you update and reel me back in, as always, a good update and I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I did not realize it had been so long between updates- I'm trying to get back to more regular updates and finishing the story.
Review By [Ember] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from serenityselena
Review:
the meeting did not go as Gibbs would have wanted but it has made him even more curious....
can't wait to see how things will go from here ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks. (Gibbs needs to get used to things not going as he would have wanted with daughters like Buffy and Dawn.)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
That was an awesome chapter. It was interesting, but I loved the they won't be continuing investigating it (in Quantico) lol interesting wording. I hope Dawn will be ok I was surprised that they just let her off in the middle of town alone and I was thinking it was night time but maybe I was wrong. and those super solder vamps are still out there. anyway very much looking forward to more. Especially more from Buffys side of things. : )
Comments from author:
Thank you. Don't worry, it was not night time- letting Dawn wander around alone after dark would be as irresponsible as Gibbs currently suspects the Scoobies of being.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Okay, fine, you got me. I'm hooked and want more of this story. Happy now? ;-)
Comments from author:
Very. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from Selonianth
Review:
"vehicle speed hasn't increased since the days of horse and carriages". While amusing, I think it would work better if it read "horse-drawn carriages" rather than horse and carriages. Reads better.

Beyond that, not bad at all.
Comments from author:
Thanks! (I dithered considerably on that very line.)
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from fearlove
Review:
I love the story and cant wait for more and to see where it goes
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [fearlove] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from kiwi
Review:
thanks for the great update! can't wait for more :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind review.
Review By [kiwi] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from Thedruid
Review:
And more dancing around, which makes noone happy, save possibly Ducky. Who expected the TWC to act quite diffrent.
Comments from author:
Yes, Ducky's a little puzzled now. It didn't go as he expected- which sums up that meeting for everyone, really.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
interesting update. Somehow i think that NCiS will not stay out of the loop for not (purposefully or not) ;)
Comments from author:
No, NCIS won't be out of the loop for long.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from Starfox
Review:
Nice one! Dawn showing nerves, Buffy not ready either - and all feels natural, logical, not a case of the "idiot ball" to explain actions. Good chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Starfox] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good bit of escalating tension, even with Willow trying to defuse some of it.
Comments from author:
Thanks- Willow wanted to make sure Giles got out of the room without getting hit.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from Sunhawk
Review:
This is absolutely wonderful again, you keep on hitting it out of the park with each new chapter.

So we have the meeting of the father-figure and the father, that went... better than I feared it would, to be honest. I will say I had hoped that Dawn would be at this meeting, but understand why she needed some time to herself.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Sunhawk] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from war
Review:
Should be interesting to see Gibbs reaction to that.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Next chapter shouldn't be long in coming.
Review By [war] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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