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Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from CindyB
Review:
I love the way Buffy calmed Dawn down. I really like the idea of the Guardians being the ones that hid Buffy from the council. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from serenityselena
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a new "confrontation" between the two sides seems imminent...
eagerly awaiting to read about it ^_^
Comments from author:
The confrontation has happened, and I'd say it's left both sides equally frustrated...
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Chan
Review:
Well the scoobies are pulling together a plan wonders how the plan is going to be exploding in their face?
I can just see Gibbs just about ready to pop as the orders come down two fronts, I hope giles has good reaction times to fend off angry bear.
Comments from author:
I don't know that I'd call it exploding in their face, but certainly the plan won't run quite as smoothly as Buffy's hoping...
Review By [Chan] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Sirena
Review:
Really good :D I'm liking the slow build even though its killing me waiting for Buffy and Gibbs to find each other, but I gotta give you kudos for how well your setting up things. I can't wait to read some more!
Comments from author:
Thank you! If it helps, the slow build is all but over- the chapter is I just posted is the last of the frustration. After this, Gibbs will finally get some face time with one of his daughters.
Review By [Sirena] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
Great updates :D
Comments from author:
Thanks :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from AllenPitt
Review:
Chain of command. Good to see they're using Jayne as a role model for management practices. Much info revealed in this chapter, interesting. the "Guardian" whose neck Caleb snapped, that's a great idea involving her & her group in this. They 'hid' the scythe, themselves, probably more.
Hm. But she seemed surprised at the name "Buffy". Maybe it wasn't because it was a strange name, but because she'd expected "Kelly" ?
Comments from author:
I couldn't resist the Jayne reference, even if I wouldn't let Xander actually say it.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from raelyn
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I have been following this story since you started posting it and always read the updates as soon as my email says there is a new one. I think that's the only story I'm currently doing that with at the moment so yours has really stood out for me. I think you've done a great job with the characters and building a complex and interesting story and I look forward to your next update.
Comments from author:
Thank you, it's wonderful to hear that the story is interesting to the point that you have to read it as soon as you get notice of the update!
Review By [raelyn] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from kiwi
Review:
Another excellent chapter! Thanks for posting.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [kiwi] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Sunhawk
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Absolutely wonderful chapter! Interesting twist with putting the Guardian into the mix, I honestly had forgotten about that little bit and it makes so much sense! Going to be interesting when the Scoobies show up at NCIS looking for Gibbs *grins* wonder if they'll talk with Ducky and things will start coming together?
Comments from author:
Thank you! The Scoobies don't get to talk to Ducky at NCIS beyond a brief introduction, but they will be talking to him eventually.
Review By [Sunhawk] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Rich
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I really like this chapter. The conversation sounds right, the characters are all in character, and I think you did an especially good job with Faith (hit now, figure it out later). And "I look at him and I see something that’s awful close to a target," ? I wiah I'd said that (and I probably will).
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Rich] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
This is a very, very good story and it keeps getting better.

Thank you for writing and sharing it!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Eureka
Review:
Loved the new update. Made me smile while holding back tears of joy.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Difdi
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> Stick with Summers, go with Gibbs- hell, make up an entirely new name if it works better for you. Whatever you decide.”

You know, between a line like that, the names you could get if you hybridized Gibbs and Summers and the Summers tendency to blow things up, I gotta ask: Is Burt Gummer a relative? =P
Comments from author:
No, and that's probably a good thing- I can't see Buffy or Willow being comfortable with his love of guns.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from Starfox
Review:
Great scene showing Dawn's emotional state, as well as a revelation I should have seen coming but didn't - that someone else was involved in the cover up. Giles meeting Gibbs and Ducky should be a sight to see too, especially with orders coming down from the White House.
Comments from author:
Thanks! The chapter with Giles' meeting at NCIS is up now- and I think it's safe to say no one in the room is a happy camper.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Past Imperfect" from ShalaDakiri
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You know, in a way both messages are valid: Buffy may have intended it to mean she'll be back soon, but she's also not the girl Gibbs remembers.

I have to admit, I'm looking forward to Ducky's reaction once he finds out what happened to the old council and who is now in charge of things.
Comments from author:
That's a good point, although I doubt Gibbs is in a place to see it.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [9 Nov 13] • Not Rated
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