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Review of chapter "Hey Little Sister" from war
Review:
Nice start on the family reunion.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [war] • Date [26 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hey Little Sister" from kiwi
Review:
yay! this chapter was so incredibly satisfying! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [kiwi] • Date [26 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from PJxxxxx
Review:
As with the other reviewers I like this story quite a lot. However, you seem to be intentionally holding off the first meeting between Gibbs and Buffy/Dawn, to the extent of a lot of meaningless manipulation to ensure they don't meet anytime soon. Considering this story has had no real action in it, and we've known the big secret almost from the start, I would urge you to stop fannying around and let something happen to the characters -- the big meeting, a fight, nuclear war, etc. If you were posting daily in short punchy chapters, it'd be fine, but with a monthly posting schedule and 56k words into this, I'd like a little more plot. But that's just me, greedy as hell. Did I mention I do really like this story? I do, in spite of the carping, so please continue.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you do like the story, but I'm sorry you're so frustrated. I post when chapters are ready, and I write as I have time- as with many authors on this site, this is not how I pay my bills. (I'm afraid if you're hoping for a nuclear war in this story, you're going to be disappointed.)
Review By [PJxxxxx] • Date [26 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from AllenPitt
Review:
This meeting did not reassure Gibbs, at all. If Buffy or Dawn don't meet with him soon he'll continue searching, the director will have to fire him, and weirdly to the President, that'll make Buffy & Dawn even madder.
And the whole abduction thing is really interesting --done to keep them FROM the council?! By whom, and all that...
Dawn not coming to the meeting probably made things a lot worse, at least from Gibbs' viewpoint. And of course -if it's a Tuesday, she probably will get abducted.
Comments from author:
Be of good cheer, Tuesday has already come and gone. And I promise Gibbs isn't getting fired!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from RevDorothyL
Review:
You tell 'em, Scoobies! Nobody MAKES Buffy or Dawn do things against their will, and not even their own biological father can decide for them what they'll be called or where they'll go and who they'll talk to. :)
Comments from author:
Indeed- can you imagine anyone trying to make Buffy AND Dawn do something?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from Chan
Review:
Some how I could see this just drawing them in deeper rather than keeping Gibbs safe as the girls seem to be attempting.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, Xander's figured out how to keep Buffy's 'keep my dad away from Quantico tonight' plan on track.
Review By [Chan] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from Lotusja
Review:
Good job! I like your style of writing. Looking forward to more from you and the story.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from dreameralways
Review:
Still so very interesting. I'm looking forward to the first meet-up. By now Buffy has definitely spent more time as Buffy and that is how she is established in the world. I can't imagine her going by Kelly. So is Buffy the second director of IWC? That would certainly make Gibbs' concern regarding the organization more complicated. A conversation with Dr. Mallard later should also prove interesting. Thank you for writing and I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Yes, Buffy has spent more time as Buffy than Kelly Gibbs, so switching back isn't going to happen, particularly since she's well established in her career as Buffy Summers. (And yes, she's co-director of the IWC. It will be discussed in a later chapter.)
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from Rich
Review:
I'd be surprised if someone on Gibb's team didn't at least monitor the Quantico operation; they've circumvented orders before when it was something they felt strongly about, and this situation certainly meets that standard.
Comments from author:
You underestimate Operation Distract Gibbs. (Of course, it's possible the Scoobies may also be underestimating Gibbs' team.)
Review By [Rich] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Nice update!
See you next time!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [25 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from Ember
Review:
Just when I start to forget about this story you update and reel me back in, as always, a good update and I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I did not realize it had been so long between updates- I'm trying to get back to more regular updates and finishing the story.
Review By [Ember] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from serenityselena
Review:
the meeting did not go as Gibbs would have wanted but it has made him even more curious....
can't wait to see how things will go from here ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks. (Gibbs needs to get used to things not going as he would have wanted with daughters like Buffy and Dawn.)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
That was an awesome chapter. It was interesting, but I loved the they won't be continuing investigating it (in Quantico) lol interesting wording. I hope Dawn will be ok I was surprised that they just let her off in the middle of town alone and I was thinking it was night time but maybe I was wrong. and those super solder vamps are still out there. anyway very much looking forward to more. Especially more from Buffys side of things. : )
Comments from author:
Thank you. Don't worry, it was not night time- letting Dawn wander around alone after dark would be as irresponsible as Gibbs currently suspects the Scoobies of being.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Girls Not In The Room" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Okay, fine, you got me. I'm hooked and want more of this story. Happy now? ;-)
Comments from author:
Very. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [24 Nov 13] • Not Rated
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