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Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from burmafrdnow
Review:
keep it up!

my opinion: keep Jethro's father alive for a while longer. He has GOT to meet Buffy and Dawn.
Comments from author:
Thanks! And don't worry, this story is set midway through season 9, so the girls get some time with their grandfather before he goes. My holding off until after I'd digested the season 11 finale was because I was sure they would reveal more about Jackson, and I wanted to make sure what I'd written wasn't going to be instantly contradicted by canon. (Some of it would have been.)
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from war
Review:
Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Harry
Review:
Its good to see you back on this story! I was wondering when it would return from the dead. Its good to see Buffy/Shannon and Dawn bonding with Gibbs. And Jethro, taking a day off?!? Is there a apocolypse on the way that we don't know about?!? And why do I get the feeling that Ducky is about to get a double grilling from Abby AND Ziva? Don't make us wait so long for the next chapter! I can't wait to see this grilling!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter. Lots of warm and fuzzy, funny Dawn and Buffy stories, nonchallant referals to past horrors and an upcoming horror trip to the mall for gibbs. Well done!
Review By [Starfox] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Eukar
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the great work.
Review By [Eukar] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from dreameralways
Review:
Still amazing. I hope to read more soon.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Sunhawk
Review:
*SQUEES IN A VERY MANLY MANNER*
Yay an update! I really am liking it, and the dream sequences were very interesting and looped back the start very nicely. Got me wondering how Ziva is going to fit in, looks like the sequence was more or less making it clear she's still Gibbs' daughter in all but blood...

Looks like Abby and Ziva are about to try and corner Ducky, that won't end well LOL.

And poor poor Gibbs, he voluntarily is taking Buffy shopping *shakes head in sorrow* RIP, we hardly knew ya!

Can't wait to see what happens if/when Gibbs finds the original Scooby Rules, no matter how carefully Xander hides them Gibbs *will* find them, it's Murphy's Law of Gibbs.

Loved the slippers!

Gibbs is already primed with the knowledge of vampires that magic etc will probably not be as big of a shock, although to be a fly on the wall when he finds out how often his daughter died!

EDIT
I just reread the chapter... Drusilla was in the dream? This could make things interesting, I wonder what the significance of that is, because Drusilla seemed to be friendly in the dream, helping and happy. Could make for an interesting plot twist, yes?
Review By [Sunhawk] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All Is Well, Safely Rest" from dreameralways
Review:
Please come back. When will you update?
Comments from author:
When I'm no longer glaring at the new chapters thinking they're a hot mess! (Which happens to be today. I make no promises on how long the next chapter will take- but I do not expect it will be as long as this one took.)
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [8 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All Is Well, Safely Rest" from Eukar
Review:
Great story. Definitely the best NCIS/BtVS crossover I have read. I was disappointed we didn't get to see Gibb's reaction to finding out about Buffy burning down the gym and anything else McGee could have found like the commitment to a mental hospital or arrest warrant. Given this I hope to see how Gibbs will react when he discovers the danger Buffy has been in from being run through with a sword to being declared dead.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Don't worry, Gibbs and his daughters will still be dealing with their past. He wouldn't be Gibbs if he didn't want to know everything, and there are definitely things that will come out he will be upset about. Buffy and Dawn might have a few things to deal with as well...
Review By [Eukar] • Date [29 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All Is Well, Safely Rest" from ArjaiH
Review:
Please if at all possible continue. This is too good a story to let die completely. I have had some health issues that have sidelined me for a few months, but I now am able to catch-up on my reading. I will be looking for your update eagerly.
Comments from author:
Never fear, the story is not abandoned. A combination of waiting for the last NCIS episode before posting chapters that would feature the girls interacting with Jackson + lack of writing time over the last month or so is what's behind the hiatus. I'm hoping I'll be posting more soon.
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [27 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All Is Well, Safely Rest" from Sunhawk
Review:
Here's hoping the next chapter is coming along nicely, since I just finished rereading this for the umpteenth time and can't wait!
Review By [Sunhawk] • Date [25 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All Is Well, Safely Rest" from Kumayasha
Review:
Absolutely love it, can't wait for more!

One question tho: in this chapter Ziva thinks about someone in mexico, I'm wondering who? Cause in chapter 2 Gibbs was thinking of the Diner where he got shot right? (Or I think he did, only saw part of it...) Correct me if I'm wrong but shouldn't that mean Franks is dead at this time?
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Also, good catch- Franks should indeed be dead, which means I've mixed up the timeline having Ziva allude to him being still alive. I'll just be fixing that...
Review By [Kumayasha] • Date [8 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All Is Well, Safely Rest" from mystshadow
Review:
I love how tight knit each group is - and how they're still willing to open p and e friends with the new (or old and refound) friends/family.
Review By [mystshadow] • Date [6 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All Is Well, Safely Rest" from dreameralways
Review:
Oh please can we have the next update. This story is so amazing. I miss it. There is still so much to address. Ducky and Gibbs think so lowly of the Council and still don't know that Buffy runs a huge portion or most of the Council.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry it's taking so long- there is some serious rewriting happening now that the season finale has sunk in. I'm leaning toward pushing Jackson's appearance back several chapters. I can't make promises, but hopefully sometime next week!
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [29 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All Is Well, Safely Rest" from CindyB
Review:
Really hope you give Buffy & Dawn a chance to re-connect with Jackson Gibbs before he dies. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Cindy B.
Comments from author:
Absolutely! The timeline is still several years before Jackson's death, so he will definitely be showing up. I held the next chapter because I wanted to make sure that what I had written was compliant with the NCIS canon as of the season finale, as I had a feeling we would learn more about Jackson. (I'm happy I waited, as it turns out some of what I had is now incorrect, or at least it seemed that way to me.) So I'm rewriting and re-working, hoping to get a new chapter up soon.
Review By [CindyB] • Date [29 May 14] • Not Rated
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