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Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from starwolf
Review:
i've just finished this in one sitting. you have a outstanding grasp of the character and produced a truly great story. I look forward to more. thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Kateydidnt
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Technically, no DNA test will prove 100% paternity. They always have to leave a margin of error so inclusion tests are something like 99.99% accurate and only disproved if you have an identical twin or something. It is a niggling almost non existent difference, but one Abby would know and acknowledge as a scientist.
Comments from author:
True. I was writing Abby the caffeinated and super-emphatic, not Abby the completely accurate scientist. I will be more careful in future.
Review By [Kateydidnt] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from kiwi
Review:
this chapter was worth the wait. no complaints.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [kiwi] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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Wheeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So very happy to see an update on this story! And, for the sake of all Powers now or ever, please ignore current NCIS canon. *makes very sour face* And if the reason you threw out several already written chapters is recent NCIS canon, please bring them back! Sometimes even the best tv series go haywire and this is one of those cases, at least in my honest opinion, though not all by effort of producers/scriptwriters.

As much as I loved every single aspect of this chapter, especially early morning in the Gibbs household, I loved Dawn's slippers the very best. Those slippers made me laugh out loud and grin from ear to ear. As for that dream... Whoo, boy...yeah, this story is no where near finished unless the bits the dream were about are for a sequel, which I have to admit I would very much enjoy. I am still very greatly enjoying this story and fully intend to keep following it, no matter how long in between updates.

Thank you kindly for the new chapter!
Comments from author:
You're welcome!

If the NCIS canon you want me to ignore is Ziva leaving... I'll worry about it if/when I get that far in this 'verse. For now, given where in the NCIS timeline we are, Ziva's not going anywhere. The NCIS canon I was concerned with the parts relating to Jackson Gibbs. Parts of what I threw out may be recycled. (There was one scene in particular I was sad to see go, originally slated to be the opening of this chapter. I'm hoping I can work it in someplace else, but it might not fit anymore.) While I never say never, none of what was in the dream was intended for a sequel.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Dragan
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LOL Tease!


I approve!
Comments from author:
Thanks! (Tease?)
Review By [Dragan] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from jebbypal
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Oh I'd forgotten how much I enjoy this. I think you did well with the continuation. Looking forward to more
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [jebbypal] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from (Moderator)Teri
Review:
Don't be nervous! I know personally, I am just so pleased to see an update. You made my morning. I have been enjoying this story since day one and look forward to many updates to come. (I look forward to Jackson meeting Dawn and Buffy). Thanks!
Comments from author:
Thank you, for both the review and the reassurance!
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
this was an excellent update :) Welcome back :D
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from burmafrdnow
Review:
keep it up!

my opinion: keep Jethro's father alive for a while longer. He has GOT to meet Buffy and Dawn.
Comments from author:
Thanks! And don't worry, this story is set midway through season 9, so the girls get some time with their grandfather before he goes. My holding off until after I'd digested the season 11 finale was because I was sure they would reveal more about Jackson, and I wanted to make sure what I'd written wasn't going to be instantly contradicted by canon. (Some of it would have been.)
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from war
Review:
Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [war] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Harry
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Its good to see you back on this story! I was wondering when it would return from the dead. Its good to see Buffy/Shannon and Dawn bonding with Gibbs. And Jethro, taking a day off?!? Is there a apocolypse on the way that we don't know about?!? And why do I get the feeling that Ducky is about to get a double grilling from Abby AND Ziva? Don't make us wait so long for the next chapter! I can't wait to see this grilling!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks! No, apocalypse, I just thought the slightly more mellow Gibbs of more recent seasons might believably take a day off when his daughter is back from the dead and he finds out he's got a second daughter.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter. Lots of warm and fuzzy, funny Dawn and Buffy stories, nonchallant referals to past horrors and an upcoming horror trip to the mall for gibbs. Well done!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Starfox] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Eukar
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the great work.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Eukar] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from dreameralways
Review:
Still amazing. I hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Working on the more!
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Day of the Rest of Your Life" from Sunhawk
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*SQUEES IN A VERY MANLY MANNER*
Yay an update! I really am liking it, and the dream sequences were very interesting and looped back the start very nicely. Got me wondering how Ziva is going to fit in, looks like the sequence was more or less making it clear she's still Gibbs' daughter in all but blood...

Looks like Abby and Ziva are about to try and corner Ducky, that won't end well LOL.

And poor poor Gibbs, he voluntarily is taking Buffy shopping *shakes head in sorrow* RIP, we hardly knew ya!

Can't wait to see what happens if/when Gibbs finds the original Scooby Rules, no matter how carefully Xander hides them Gibbs *will* find them, it's Murphy's Law of Gibbs.

Loved the slippers!

Gibbs is already primed with the knowledge of vampires that magic etc will probably not be as big of a shock, although to be a fly on the wall when he finds out how often his daughter died!

EDIT
I just reread the chapter... Drusilla was in the dream? This could make things interesting, I wonder what the significance of that is, because Drusilla seemed to be friendly in the dream, helping and happy. Could make for an interesting plot twist, yes?
Comments from author:
Your manly squee made me squee. :)

Don't worry, Dawn is going to save Gibbs from the shopping. Lucky for him he has two daughters now.

And while I don't want to explain it fully just yet, afraid you're running in the wrong direction with Drusilla's presence in the dream. (Sadly, it seems like what you're thinking is far more interesting than what I had in mind.)
Review By [Sunhawk] • Date [27 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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