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Review of chapter "Part 18: No More Secrets" from lunalurker
Review:
Oh no, poor Faith! And poor Buffy, too! Gah. As much as any flavor of magical mind-control rape creeps me out, and the Huntsman feral mating thing gets close enough to hit the squick buttons, this has a lot of other things going for it, so I'm hanging in there to see where it goes.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [26 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 13: Midnight Phone Calls" from (Current Donor)jedibuttercup
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This is definitely an interesting fic, so far. But I think two things are hurting you in the review department: (1) you actually went there and said you were going to hold the story hostage for reviews, which has a tendency to backfire with people like me who think to themselves, "well, that just means there's a much higher likelihood of the story not ever getting finished, why bother to follow it at all?" and (2) a lack of clarity when it comes to the purpose of the story. Is this going to stay B/A? Or is it a thinly veiled Buffy/OC? Or is it primarly an altered-plotline type of narrative aiming for a particular non-romance-related end goal? In other words, given the two levels of uncertainty, why should I bother to keep following?
Review By [(Current Donor)jedibuttercup] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12: Buffy Summers, Secret Agent?" from war
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That went better than I thought it would.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
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I am thoroughly intrigued by this fic and want more. Love your constant updates to.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 11: Answers, Requests, and Decisions" from moringstar
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Interesting flic can't wait to find out more about the huntsman.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 11: Answers, Requests, and Decisions" from war
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should be interesting to see how they try to fit Buffy into their command as a intel asset or someone they support with things like better equipment and intel.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 11: Answers, Requests, and Decisions" from Misery
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Really enjoying this story, thank you.
Review By [Misery] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 8: For Better or Worse" from djhardim
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Good. One correction - the "special guest demon" in this chapter is a "Mohra", not a "Mhora".
Review By [djhardim] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 7: The Correct Appliance of a Shotgun" from Misery
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Really enjoying reading this, thank you.
Review By [Misery] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 5: The Daring Escape of William the Bloody" from war
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that's gonna be a fun report for Riley.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3: Make Room For the New" from RevDorothyL
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Intriguing! Though it NEVER seems to be good news when the Council tries to do ANYTHING.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3: Make Room For the New" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
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Well shit. I'm.not liking that inquiry. Love this fic so far.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Current Donor)romero
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It's wonderful to read this story again. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Jazzibear
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I agree with other reviewers – interesting so far, but we need and want more. You tell us that the rest is to come, so that’s good.

Faith may be playing a small part in this story, but I really would prefer her to have her correct surname, a view that I would expect her to share. Change it, please?

It has always seemed to me that the Council was a repository for all the worst aspects of the English upper classes (with a few exceptions, I dare say). If the English honours system in this Buffyverse works like the real one, Dame Cleary would never be called that. The system of honours started before people began to bear surnames, so honorifics like Sir and Dame were, and are, attached to first names: so Dame Henrietta or Dame Henrietta Cleary.

I'm pretty sure that Dame Henrietta would give pretty short shrift to anyone miscalling her to her face.

By the way, it’s Wyndam-Pryce, not Windham-Pryce. (I see from WWP’s entry in Wikipedia that he's also spelt Wyndam-Price and Windam-Price. That’s sloppy.)

Please, I mean no criticism. I marvel at authors’ creativity and wish I had any. I am good at nuts-and-bolts work, though, and I try to be helpful.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from VillageOrchid
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I like that you show Wesley's change of heart and have him stand up to the council. Not sure where the rest of this will be leading or if I will like the insert character - but the drama and angst here is valid and well done.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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