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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from djhardim
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Given the fluid volume lost, wouldn't it be a good idea to give Dawn and Buffy a unit of saline solution?
Comments from author:
Sorry, but I know nothing about transfusions and am actually deeply afraid of needles so its likely your right.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [5 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter three" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
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Hmm interesting, I wonder if Logan recognizes vampires. I think in Marvel canon he has fought them before but I don't know if he has that memory or not at this point...
Comments from author:
Back in the day the x-men have fought Dracula. This was back when Kitty wasn't a ninja or the partner of a dragon though. So yeah they know what's out there.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter three" from AllenPitt
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huh... maybe this is the aftermath of the Buffy/Faith final fight? With Buffy being hurt as well? Or maybe she lost the fight? Should be 'fun' if Angel is at the hospital when Hank & company arrive.
I think Hank will be the more surprised than Buffy when the truth comes out. He thinks Joyce and the kids are complete baselines, or that Buffy is, anyway.
Any chance Angel & Logan have met in the past?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter three" from Robby
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Well, this is an interesting story idea.

I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Review By [Robby] • Date [5 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter three" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Giggled at the comment about appreciating Emily Dickinson because of the Owen storyline.
Comments from author:
I wondered if anyone would catch that reference.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter three" from CageFire
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Nice new chapter, keep up the nice work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter three" from bradsan
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Yes an update and Aaaarg you stopped.

You are mean leaving it like this. Can't wait for more. Hope you will find time to update soon.
I think Xavier is right. You can't always hide it's not healthy and it's dangerous because when the enemy finds out they would be taken by surprise. When they know about Hank they will be prepared.

Hmm can't they find a spell or make something that could hide his appearance. They could do it magical with a jewel or a spell. Magic exist after all so why not use it. So are Giles and Willow or other Wicca even Buffy could look it up. She did magic before, when her mom was sick, so she can if she has to .

love it. Good job.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter three" from SFBKludge
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I see fun possibilities.

Nice to know that your aware of Dracula going after the X men. Please remember it was Kitty who kicked his but and IIRC it was before she was possessed by Ogun. Hum kick butt teenage girls taking out the supernatural... could there be a pattern here?

Actually Drac took the team mostly unaware and their relative unfamiliarity with the supernatural is what gave him the advantage, if they had even a little forewarning things would have gone differently, so Buffy while no means a wimp she's no Spidey capable of taking out the entire team (Secret Wars).
Review By [SFBKludge] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter three" from serenityselena
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things are about to get very interesting...
eagerly awaiting to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from bradsan
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I read it once again. Still love it and can't wait for the next chapter.
Let me get this straight. Joyce knows Hank is a mutant and uses it to gain custody of their children. And Hank let her to afraid of what she will tell his children or the authority. She let Buffy and Dawn believe that their dad cheated on her with his secretary. She let her children believe that they aren't important enough to Hank. She didn't say it but she didn't deny it either or defended Hank. She let other doctors test Buffy so Buffy's X gene never comes out. And they put her in a nut house for nothing. Joyce left Hank because he is a mutant how comforting is that to Buffy.

Oh man, Buffy and even Dawn will be so mad about this. I wonder how Hank and Joyce gone explain all this shit.

About the freak thing. It was Angel who called their relationship a freak-show and not Buffy who calls herself a freak but other people who calls her that name. I don't think that Buffy will turn her back on her dad if she knows what he is. I think as a matter of fact she will be relieved that he will understand her more than her mom ever will.

Hank and the others are gone freak when they see all the children with stake, flamethrowers and axes and yes fighting.

I wonder if Buffy will recognize her dad because she did recognized Giles while looking in his eyes. As Daddy's girl I think she will recognize Hank the same way.
I really hoping for a quick update and sorry for a review as long as this one.
Comments from author:
ooh the eye thing I may have to go through one of my chapters and figure a way to work that in. As for Buffy never calling herself that I direct you to the episode "What's My Line Part 2"
Buffy: I guess I can't fight it. I'm a freak.
Kendra: But not the only freak.
Buffy: Not anymore.
I agree Hank will understand her more though.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CageFire
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Hmm, interesting story I suppose. I've seen other buffy's parent is a mutant stories before, and so far this is rather similar, of course it's hard for such stories to diverge very much in the first two chapters. It's also been like 19 days since the last chapter, not really an excessively long time, but considering the first two chapters were posted within two days. Then again, you might have just had both of them written. Or maybe you were trying to get it out of your system.
Comments from author:
actually the first chapters were unbetaed and since then I have gotten a beta who wants to go over the first two chapters first. I have some 3-4 more chapters already written I think. I just don't want to overload them with an influx of chapters either. So we all wait for my beta to make the time. ;}
Review By [CageFire] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from divaslayer
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Interesting story so far, I liked it. I can't wait to see where this goes.

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from bradsan
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ooooh got this one on tracking already. Can't wait for more.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ivanjedi
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Is this the x-men comic or movie - verse? because if it's the comic, then the elder X-men should have some idea of the supernatural, I think. if it isn't, then there is a high potential for disaster here; the last thing anyone needs is a comedy of errors during the graduation ceremony.
Comments from author:
based more on the comic than the films. still the X-men don't have that many crossings with the mystical unless its Belesco? and Limbo. It does bring in the question though since Dracula kicked the ass of an entire X-Men team on his own how powerful Buffy would be in comparison.
Review By [ivanjedi] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Waverly
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Very intriguing. Can't wait to see where you take this
Review By [Waverly] • Date [4 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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