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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six" from PATM
Review:
Sam putting Haley into the initiative is appalling, appalling I say!
Comments from author:
Why?
Review By [PATM] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six" from CageFire
Review:
Pretty good new chapter.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five" from Thedruid
Review:
Nice. But you cut out the speech Buffy made to Walsh. One of the best in the series. :(
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five" from RevDorothyL
Review:
It'll be interesting to see if having Jack and the rest of SG1 on hand helps out when the Initiative goes bat-crazy in the wake of Prof. Walsh's death, this time around.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five" from AndreaMaine
Review:
nice new chapter.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five" from CageFire
Review:
Interesting chapter, keep up the nice work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Poor Spike! -- caught between his own vampire nature and history, on the one hand, and the perennial Sam-Jack UST on the other hand, his date was almost sure to be doomed from the start (in spite of Jim's culinary skills).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four" from CageFire
Review:
Another great chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [21 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from HMaxMarius
Review:
*Snork!*

The thought of Spike trying to figure out 'wining and dining' after spending over 100 years as a vampire where the idea of dinner involved draining some poor schlub dry...

Can you imagine Spike in a fancy french restaurant... Or a Chinese place... Can you picture Spike's comments about eating Chinese... (uh yeah, you can go with food or people and all the extra entendre's you care to throw)

;)
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [20 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Sounds like Spike's German tourist act was much more convincing than the 'American' accent he tried to fake when confronted with Riley in civvies in canon, and the idea that the soldiers reminded him of some unfortunate experiences during WWII (not limited to that time on the submarine) makes a lot of sense. Nicely done.

I also enjoyed seeing Spike and Sam get better acquainted, of course. :)

Something tells me that Oz is going to lose out again in this version of season 4, even if it will be to Daniel instead of Tara this time around.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Well, I'm sure Spike would be thrilled to show Sam where the good ice cream can be bought in Sunnydale. :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Jazzibear
Review:
I hardly know where to start, for there is so much to enjoy in this story. I think you’ve dealt with the problem of Willow’s being marooned in Daniel’s body very ingeniously, and so entertainingly too.

It was very perspicacious of Sam to work out that physical contact would be the key to reintegrating Willow, and credit, too, to the author for extracting himself from the corner he’d painted himself into.

I enjoyed the reference to the Nutrimatic Drinks Dispenser’s cup of tea.

A couple more points: has Buffy been away from Sunnydale when she said “I knew the town … ”, or was it just a slip? The times had been tense, and I would guess that everyone (maybe not Teal’c) would be feeling somewhat discombobulated. Also: in the parenthesis in the last paragraph I had to think hard about the pronouns. Would I right in concluding that it would be “(which wouldn't stop her [Buffy] from doing her [Buffy’s] utmost to stop her [Sam] from trying to make her [Willow] stay)”?

Please, I mean no criticism. For me this is an exceptionally entertaining tale, and because I can make no creative suggestions (being quite devoid of any talent in that direction) I can at least look at the nuts and bolts, or indulge in a little nit-picking, however you like to put it.

Also please: more? Lots more? As soon you conveniently can?
Comments from author:
Thank you!

It's true, there were a couple of errors in the last few lines (thank you for pointing then out, I'd have missed them otherwise) but they're sorted now.

Yes, there will be more, and soon. Hopefully. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from Leeef
Review:
Yay more story. But Willow's body is dead. Wouldn't most people notice that?
Comments from author:
I know. I realised afterwards that I'd completely forgotten about it. On the other hand, one might say that no one knew she was dead.

Anyway, it's not like they could've done much with the impending threat of a slavering werewolf killing everyone. Which is my only defence.
Review By [Leeef] • Date [6 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Oz and Daniel/Willow -- would that be a menage a trois?
Comments from author:
Oh. That honestly hadn't crossed my mind - if I went that way with the story, I suppose it would be. I'm almost tempted, now. But I probably won't.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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