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Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from CageFire
Review:
Okay, interesting. I'll be looking forward to seeing the next chapter. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Oz returns! Hopefully, he won't get captured and tortured by the Initiative this time around.
Comments from author:
I'm not planning on that, but we will have to see how it turns out.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Sixteen" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from Cutiepie
Review:
Sorry you are under the weather. Go and take a nice hot bath with a cup of Epsom salts and 16 oz of hydrogen peroxide dissolved in it. Get the water as hot as you can stand and soak as long as you can manage (at least a half hour, and preferably until the water is only tepid). I know it sounds kind of silly, but it really works to shorten the length of the colds I have gotten in the last couple of years (since I heard of this "cure"). My husband will never try it and he is always sick nearly twice a long as I am.

As for the story, I am still really enjoying it. I'd like to write more of a review, but my son just woke up from a nightmare and so I have to go calm him down. Looking forward to more excitement! Thanks for sharing your writing.
Comments from author:
Well, thank you very, very much, I will most certainly take you up on your suggestion. And I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from CageFire
Review:
Oh, cliffhanger.
Comments from author:
I love writing cliffhangers.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Rest up and drink lots of water and fruit juice! Get well soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you, will do!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen" from HMaxMarius
Review:
A cold???

I wish for colds so I can have days off to write :p...

But seriously, really enjoying and don't let quantity trump quality :D

hmm
Comments from author:
If only I could have a day off to write! Well, it would help if I could write well when ill too.

Anyway, thag you berry mutch!
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
And Riley and Buffy still haven't REALLY had their chat, yet -- he doesn't know from'Slayers' and she only assumes he's with the commando guys, without having had a chance to watch his face confirm all of her guesses.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
And Riley and Buffy still haven't REALLY had their chat, yet -- he doesn't know from'Slayers' and she only assumes he's with the commando guys, without having had a chance to watch his face confirm all of her guesses.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Interesting and more interesting! I can't help but be glad that Sam got her "I love you too, Sir" said, but with that whole 'can't do anything, because of regulations' caveat, it seems like Spike's interest in Sam may not be wholly hopeless (or at least, Spike might be able to make enough progress with Sam to stay interested, since she can't exactly pronounce herself as 'taken').
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
not getting confusing, just getting better and better. thanks for the enjoyable read.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Jazzibear
Review:
I am enjoying this – it’s a lot of fun. And I have no difficulty following whose consciousness is occupying whose body. The idea of Daniel and Willow both trying to steer Daniel’s body is simply hilarious.

Please post more as soon as you can!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you think so, I laughed when I thought of the idea myself.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from RevDorothyL
Review:
The bit with Willow controlling half of Daniel's body had me flashing back to the Steve Martin movie "All of Me" (the one where Lily Tomlin's spirit/soul/personality controlled half of his body.
Comments from author:
Hmm, I haven't seen that one. I'll have to get around to it.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from CageFire
Review:
Getting kind of complicated, but oh well. We'll see how it turns out.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [18 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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