An okay chapter, not to big on dark willow, but I assume you have a plan.
Comments from author:
I've always got a plan. 'tis a surprising plan too.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yay! I got my Sam/Jack moment!
But Uh-oh! We seem to have something like the equivalent of Darth Willow, after absorbing all the magic from the dark books at the Magic Box and then draining Rack!
Comments from author:
Told you I wouldn't leave it out.
As for dark Willow - there's a surprise on that front...
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Looking forward to seeing how your version works out (though as a dyed-in-the-wool Sam/Jack 'shipper, I hope you won't do anything to totally discount the lovely S/J "I won't leave you!" moment!).
Comments from author:
No, I'm keeping that - I loved that scene too.
I'm just changing the force field so it doesn't go down when the C4 goes off.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
I'd forgotten about Willow's tendency to get high on power, and with the Atanik armband messing with her sense of responsibility on TOP of the extra power it gives her, she's more of a menace than Sam and Jack and Daniel (even though they themselves are much quicker to go to lethal force in this version of the episode).
Drusilla's return is a neat twist.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review By [CageFire] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I see the armbands are kicking in much faster this time around than they did in canon (where it took a day or so before Jack -- the first to try one out under Anise's close supervision -- started to notice some effects in his latest boxing match with Teal'c, and then it took a bit longer than it had with Jack for Daniel to feel any effects from the carrier virus and the augmentation).
Comments from author:
Yeah, I haven't actually watched the episode for a while now, I pretty much only remember the raid on the ship. Sorry about that.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Sep 12] • Not Rated
