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Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from mackenziex
Review:
Nice to see Merlin keeps in touch with some of his old friends!

And seriously, I don't even like guys and I'd take a liking to a half naked Gwaine.
Comments from author:
I love the idea that Merlin's more mythical friends are still around, only well-hidden (for the sake of my imagination, we will pretend it is totally possible for a dragon of Killgarrah's size to remain hidden in the modern world of satelite images and radar). Lol, half-naken Gwaine was definitely just the thing to bring the Diamair out of hiding! Morgana should've really just done that in the first place.
Review By [mackenziex] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I love it! If anyone deserves (and would choose) a chance to one day be of service to the world again by joining Arthur in Avalon, it's Janet. Much more satisfying than simply saying goodbye to her forever at the end of "Heroes" (however moving Sam's eulogy is).
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked Janet's joining Arthur in Avalon. I was really sad when Janet died in the series (and I knew it was coming), so I decided I couldn't just ignore it or circumvent it in the story with some little blurb. Also, I think Merlin knows Arthur enough to know the man's going to need a trained physician by his side if he's going to save anything.

I loved Sam's eulogy.

Thanks so much for reviewing!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
excellent read, thank you. loved the "I DON'T WANT TO HEAR IT."
Comments from author:
Lol, really? I wasn't sure if I wasn't being a bit too snarky with that, but I've had too many reviews (not so much on this site, ff.net seems to attract more of them) where the reviewers decide to pull apart and get all angry about some small detail that has very little to do with the story itself. And religion can be a touchy subject, so I just wanted to make clear that I'm not up to debating it.

Ehem. Anyway, I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Genuka
Review:
You gave Janet a chance at continuing in a long line of heroes and champions, a chance to keep doing what she was doing in life. You have honored and upheld her memory well. For this I thank you. *bows deeply*
Comments from author:
You are very welcome. *returns deep bow*

Lol, I love her character and, as I said in my author's notes, just couldn't dismiss her death out of hand (like I will a few other major events, just watch for it). And I thought this worked rather well. Plus, I'm sure Gaius will love the company of another medical practitioner - dear god, now I'm imagining the two of them sitting on rocks at the edge of the Lake of Avalon where Gaius is bravely defending the usefulness of leeches while Janet looks at him like he's insane and then answers by rattling off 20 reasons WHY he's insane...

No, that will not become a chapter.

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from cflat
Review:
I'm glad you did a chapter on Janet's death. I liked where you had her end up. So did Merlin stop her from automatically going to heaven when she was killed then?

Also, I was wondering, when you get that far, are you going to have Merlin visit Atlantis at all? It would be really interesting to see how the city would react to him.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked the chapter! It took several tries to figure out just how I wanted this to work, so I'm glad I made a good call. My thinking was that, yes, Merlin did somehow manage to keep Janet in this world long enough to give her the choice whether to go to heaven or Avalon (which for the sake of simplicity I've decided to treat as two separate places).

Merlin in Atlantis? I would LOVE to write that, I really would. Sadly, I don't think I can think of a logical reason Merlin would have for going there. Or rather, for the SGC to send him there. I mean, as it is he's a bit of a stretch that someone as old as Doctor Hunithson be allowed to work at what is nearly a front-line outpost of sorts. I do have some other things planned though, so just wait and see.

Thanks so much for reviewing!
Review By [cflat] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from RockyWilliams
Review:
Really enjoyable story. Greatly looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story! Stay tuned for more next week!
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from GraysonPaladin
Review:
Looks up the Diamair on the Merlin wiki... I don't know about the Ferling part 'cause she/he/it looks a bit like an Asgard with conehead.
Comments from author:
Lol, yeah, she/he/it really does. However, as we never are given an actual visual description of the Furling and she/he/it clearly isn't actually an Asgard, I figured I was allowed to call her a Furling. Having said that, I haven't seen "Universe" yet, so if they encounter the Furling there I don't know about it.
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent work
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from cflat
Review:
Liked this chapter. It would be interesting to see the others reactions to aliens from outer space and space travel. I'm curious now, where Merlin went to, that's different than where the Ancients ended up, right?

And I'm also wondering what season SG-1 is in.
Comments from author:
SG-1 is in season 7 right now. The previous chapter referenced "Evolution", which is about mid-season. The next couple of chapters will actually partially deal with establishing the timeline even more. As for Merlin, he basically just astral projected himself into some mystical cave in Albion (England). No specific place per say and probably somewhat separate from the normal world, but not any ascended plane like the Ancients, no.

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [cflat] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Genuka
Review:
Me and my dad managed to weather the storm fine up high on our mountain ridge. *grins* We were fairly incoherent for the two days because of the pressure variances and the way the storms threw our bodies out of whack but otherwise fine. Gotta love that Blue Ridge.

I found this chapter very amusing.
Comments from author:
I'm glad to hear you made it out relatively unscathed. Must've been really something to watch, mind you, even if utterly terrifying.

Glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Loved the bit about one of Merlin's "kin" being a Furling, and the dragon being so eager to hear tales of the Stargate! I guess you're never too old to find something new, surprising, and even exciting -- which is very comforting to know! :)
Comments from author:
Lol, well they never did find out what happened to the Furling, right? Thus it's open to interpretation. I'm glad you liked my portrayal of Killgarrah! Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Genuka
Review:
LMAO!!!! More MOre! Bravo!
Comments from author:
Lol, thanks! =D
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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