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Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from CubsKing
Review:
Absolutely awesome story! Nice touches of humor. It was wonderful to see Penny actually get to act, and competently at that!

I'd love to see what would happen if something from the Buffyverse attacked Stewart's comic book store. Or if Leonard found a stake in Penny's apartment. Or if she had to distract the guys while at a movie opening to keep them from seing something demon-related...

Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
You'll see more chapters, as I'm posting every other Monday.
Review By [CubsKing] • Date [15 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from dreameralways
Review:
This is so much fun. Thank you for writing.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. The next chapter will be up on Monday.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
I COMPLETELY do not get why Faith made her strip, stripped her underwear until naked and humiliated only to wear a slutty dress and heels...only to go to work where she could then change clothes?

WTH?

I was really enjoying the story until that; it seems utterly pointless!

EDIT:
What does that have to do with what she did to Penny? It makes no sense. "You played matchmaker, now strip to your bare skin and put on a sexy dress; now, ride my motorcycle to get to work!"
Comments from author:
Why would Faith know what Penny had stashed away in her desk drawers?
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [5 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from Bluejello
Review:
You get infinite bonus points for using Avatar as a metaphor for Faith.
Random scary thought: Faith and Toph teamed up and turned loose. That's actually rather terrifying.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Hmm, Faith and Toph teaming up... There's got to be a fanfic in that. (Okay, there's probably a dozen already-published fanfics on that.)
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [5 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Penny gives good therapy (in other words, she makes good sense!), and I'm so glad it sounds like her matchmaking is bearing fruit . . . even if it's not without some payback from Faith, at least.
Comments from author:
Penny has shown good interpersonal skills in canon, even if her personal life is a mess.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from PATM
Review:
As close to weeping with hilarity as I've read in a fan fiction site filled with great reading in a while. I could actually see the bike ride from my desk at work which made me blush with sympathetic embarrassment. I didn't mean to stare but I couldn't believe what I saw.
Comments from author:
Faith would have looked pretty hot too, since she's using both hands to steer the bike.
Review By [PATM] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from (Recent Donor)draconin
Review:
Oh, well handled! Kudos. You managed to make the process of convincing Faith very believable and I loved her revenge. :-)
Comments from author:
Faith is an interesting character. She's the kind of complex character who's more interesting to write.
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from BillieBog
Review:
Great, great fun. Loving this.
Comments from author:
Thanks! The next chapter is in two weeks.
Review By [BillieBog] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from brokenangel
Review:
I hope Xander and Faith work out their feelings for one another.
Comments from author:
You'll get some info on that in future.
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from Zorgdub
Review:
One of the best Faith X Xander I've seen in a long time, and Xander isn't even actualy there, nice!
And that's one of my very favorite pairing, too.


Excellent chapter.
Comments from author:
I like F/X myself. And there are a couple canon pairings I didn't care for.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from Amberdrake
Review:
Excellent way to redeem a Monday. I'm not thinking Xander would need Willow's help to pay back Penny, although his prank would be less vengeance-y and more funny-y. Like maybe he finds out that Raj knows about what goes bump in the night. Then he keeps "accidentally" letting stuff slip around Raj and Penny so that Penny has to try to cover. Ok that was funnier in my head than it looks on screen. :)

Less than 48 hours to Willow Wednesday. :)
Comments from author:
There will be Xander-dealing.
Review By [Amberdrake] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Either they will praise her to high heaven, or she needs a new career. And now Faith needs to get back to Xander and be there when he wakes up.

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading. There will be connectivity with the next chapter as well.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from azulkan
Review:
Lol, go Faith. But Penny is right. It's a hell of a lot harder coming up than going down. Looking forward to next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Two weeks from today.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from Elorie
Review:
Until the point is added, in a couple of weeks.
Comments from author:
Good guess!
Review By [Elorie] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Inexpensive Counteroffensive" from Starfox
Review:
Ah, starts emotional, but ends up with a funny twist. Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Faith was a bit more emotional than I planned when I started the chapter.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [4 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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