Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

Something

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Five" from Letomo
Review:
It is a bit interesting that they keep doing that - how long will it take at least those 2, if not more, to get the name right.

I also wonder if, somewhere along the way, her real name got made into a secret, so that when she used it, the higher-ups would know it was the real one?
Review By [Letomo] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Four" from Runewolf
Review:
Great chapter. Bunfy was right in character.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Four" from wswords
Review:
I know I don't review your stories enough, but they are awesome. Keep up the good work.
Review By [wswords] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Four" from CageFire
Review:
Again, another amazing chapter. You do great work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Huh. Could Julie have fit in the Doctor's cellphone if they'd had time to rig a connection?

Cool story, good to see the organized chaos
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [22 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [22 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Two" from Letomo
Review:
Hmm, looks like Buffy's starting to move forward, even more than she did in canon. Here, it is a couple days after the Joining spell, and the attack from Sineya, plus in-story time, so she is still working out what happened there. And, nice touch that she doesn't know of a sister there, though why didn't she think it might have been Faith?

So, this is her chance to grieve, destress [sort of], and move onwards, yes? Heh.

Also, how is it she doesn't get the Olvikan reference? That part, at least, she should understand.
Comments from author:
Just fixed your last point. Thanks for the input!

(Yeah, I know, she's moving faster, emotionally, in my series than in canon. I've noticed that I seem to like to do that. It makes it more exciting.)

Originally, I was going to have a whole scene where Buffy gets so pissed off about the historical inaccuracies, she starts shouting about how she should just go home to "my dad, Giles, and my sister, Willow, and my pet alligator, Xander!" But it seemed unnecessary, so I cut it out. Note that the Doctor *does* know that Buffy has a sister, though, since the events of the Seventh Segment have already happened to him.

Thanks again for the feedback.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Two" from CageFire
Review:
Another great chapter. Keep up the good work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty One" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter as usual. I'll be looking forward to more.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [15 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from Letomo
Review:
Others may not like exposition, but if it's done well, it can really help a story along. If done poorly, well, that's why exposition gets a bad name. This - this at least starts out going well. Can't wait to see what the rest is!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :) I'll be looking forward to reading more as always. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eighteen" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Ouch. Buffy's recent experiences with Riley and the Initiative really did a number on her ability to trust anyone. And really, how would she have even known what code words might clue the IPSA Slayers in to her deception?
Comments from author:
Well, in my mind, presumably, the general said something like, "you should probably have this list of code words," and Buffy thought, yeah right; it's a trap, I can do this by myself, etc. Or she could have asked. Or any number of things.

But, as you mentioned, Buffy's got some issues with trusting people (or at least people who aren't Giles, Willow, and Xander, since that trust got restored during the Buffy series). And who can blame her? Professor Walsh was all nice, and then tried to kill her. The Initiative nearly destroyed the world, and trapped the Doctor. Riley lied to Buffy over and over again. And Buffy's *just* starting to realize that maybe, just maybe, the Doctor's been lying to her about Elizabeth.

It's not been a fun time for Buffy.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Letomo
Review:
He left her alone, and thought she would stay put? Did his head get damaged over the last 1800 years?

What a maroon.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Not Rated
start back Page: 2 of 5 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking