I like the story, and Dawn being all kickass. But just a little point, while 'neuken' is 'fuck' translated into Dutch, I've never actually heard someone swear with it, most people just use the f-word actually.

(If you are interested in a list of dutch swear words pm me, it doesn't seem appropriate for a review ;) . )

Enjoyable as always. Just a point of clarification, sais rarely have pointed tips, nor do they have any sharpened edges, they are actually bludgeoning weapons. Also, may I just say that it's a dumbass man who doesn't take an opponent seriously just because his opponent is female, but such men unfortunately exist.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Cheers,
TwilightWanderer

I know, I actually have a pair of sais, which is why I chose to use those as her weapon of choice. I figured she'd just have a modified pair for more danger. Most people don't know the difference so I shrugged it off and went happily on my merry way :)

I appreciate those that like weapons.

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Violence, nachos, and tequila, with Steve all snuggley on the side -- sounds like good medicine, to me! :)

Katniss? I guess he'll be his own Mockingbird, then...

I tried to laugh while swollowing my coffee, it was a fail but this was still hilarious to me!

Love this chapter, I have a weak spot for Darcy/Clint. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Awwww...! Good going, Darcy! :)

*head tilt* why do I think I know this song by somebody else....

great update.

I much prefer this version ^.^

I quite enjoy the story so far, although I haven't recognized most of the song titles. Here are some random possible song suggestions for other chapters:
Original of the Species by U2
America by Simon and Garfunkel
Love for a Child by Jason Mraz
Daughters by John Mayer
Breathe (2AM) by Anna Nalick
Lost in the Sun, Stolen Moments, and Times Like These by Dan Fogelberg
Never Too Late by Three Days Grace
She Will Be Loved by Maroon 5
Blue Eyes by Elton John
Boulevard of Broken Dreams by Green Day
Sundown by Gordon Lightfoot
As Long As You're Mine from Wicked
Naked As We Came by Iron and Wine
Better Days by Goo Goo Dolls
Never Die Young by James Taylor
As I said, this is something of a random sampling since I don't know what kind of music you like or what direction you intend to take your story, but I hope you find something useful in there.
Cheers,
Twilight0Wanderer

I think the best thing about this story isn't that I DON'T have a specific direction. I'm just going where the music takes me!

Sounds like Dawn has an EXCELLENT plan for her after-fight activities! :)

yes she did.

Well hopefully the news people didn't get a good look or picture of her face.

It figures that Thor would gladly take Faith's threat in the 'friendly' and caring spirit it was intended! :)

Faith would break Thor; I think she's more Loki's speed.

I kid you not; it would be funny to see which of them comes up with the better double entendre/sexual reference/flirtatious remark in order to break the other.

Loki according to myth and comic canon, has been chasing women for CENTURIES, even while married to the goddess Sigyn.

The Loki in the movie seemed to of a more celibate, cerebral mien to me. Although, I like the idea of Faith either meeting a man she couldn't reduce to a babbling idiot, or Loki meeting someone who can give better than she gets.

you are giving my muse a lot of inspiration .... this could be fun in later chapters.

Yeah I can imagine that would take some time before the anger from what happened wasn't all you thought of when you saw or tried to talk to them but I'm glad Dawn has Faith in her corner. I can see those two, the outsiders in a way, bonding and understanding what the others feeling when dealing with the group.

Yup couldn't get the smile off my face when I saw the song for this chapter. Hell I had to double check to see if this was one I suggested or if somebody else did cause I totally have this song too.

aww engagement ring shopping. and hey Steve/Dawn sounds good(presently poking around AO3 in Avengers land).

Tony and Dawn and the Quest for the One Ring (that will be the perfect engagement ring for Pepper) -- it's epic!