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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from DragonBard
Review:
It's not just sex that breaks the curse, but sex with someone he loves (or at least cares for deeply.) He had sex with Darla and didn't loose his curse, so meaningless sex probably won't break it.

You'll need to improve the explanation somehow. Say he was transformed and the woman he had sex with was the true love of the character he became or something along those lines. Might not exactly work since it wouldn't have been 'Angel' feeling perfect contentment, but good enough.

Though this 'is' coming across as just a way to get rid of Angel for some reason.
Comments from author:
I had thought Darla didn't break it because she was a vampire. I can't imagine any non-demon finding any sort of contentment with a demon. I will try to clarify that explanation though. As it should also make clear that Giles is theorizing rather than recounting sure knowledge. He is also trying to be tactful with Buffy. If some woman had happened to wear a costume that was someone he'd known in life he might have had a "perfect moment" etc with her. You are right in that I've never been fond of Angel but I am trying to provide a plausible and readable reason for him being Angelus again.
Review By [DragonBard] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from lordamnesia
Review:
Great new update, and I'm very pleased to see it too! Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from ChiVayne
Review:
"...it seems pretty selfish to drag a person from heaven just because you miss them or want their help.”
I like that you had Buffy say this. Of course, the Scoobies didn't think that they were dragging Buffy from heaven when they did their thing, but still.
Comments from author:
I'm glad someone caught that. Thank you for commenting!
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice work
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Genuka
Review:
great story thus far. I wonder what else got left behind and why we haven't seen anything of Angel?
Comments from author:
Thank you! The holidays will slow any new chapters down but I'll be posting again in January.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [16 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Bill
Review:
Very well done! I always thought Willow's 'Gay Now' was just political correctness on Joss and Co's part, she did love Xander and Oz as much as Tara.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your comment! I'd agree that Willow seems to go both ways in canon.
Review By [Bill] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from grd
Review:
Love Xander's solution to the Aura problem.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [grd] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CastorandPollux
Review:
Excellent!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Martin
Review:
In the US there isn't any tuition for public high school.

And while what you did might make you think it worked by changing names etc. The IRS do figure you will use the names of your family and do have a close relationship in nearly all the island nation banks. So it wouldn't work. She needs that money to be scrubbed clean. She needs to have a legitimate reason to have that money and preferably to have already paid taxes on it. If Willow was a true magician of a hacker she would have had that money put into her name 7 years before as a early inheritance, then put into IRS filings any interest it would have accrued for each of those 7 years.
Comments from author:
Okay, I will fix those two things. Thank you.
P.S. I made it a decade because I like round numbers. :)
Review By [Martin] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from alynambered
Review:
I have to agree with the other reviewers- that was quite a twist.

Pooh on Buffy, not wanting to stop Willow-babble with kissage. lol

Just one:
You figured that out the day after she made the the call? - lose 2nd 'the'
Comments from author:
I'll fix that mistake as well as soon as I get home. Too hard to do it from my phone.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from CPTSkip
Review:
I'm sorry about the original Aura. She was one of the few Cordettes other than Harm who had an individual separate personality on the show. I am glad Xander took care of the Sith Lady however. Sith types are never a lot of fun to have around.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Also, I agree, Sunnydale is dangerous enough without having to worry about the Sith. :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Rob
Review:
Good part.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Rob] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from moringstar
Review:
Another great up date I like how you handled xander compassionate but with a ruthless cold streak.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Glad you liked it. :)
Review By [moringstar] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from RafMereC
Review:
That was an unexpected twist.

Good chapter over all

Raf
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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