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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Bill
Review:
Very well done! I always thought Willow's 'Gay Now' was just political correctness on Joss and Co's part, she did love Xander and Oz as much as Tara.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your comment! I'd agree that Willow seems to go both ways in canon.
Review By [Bill] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from grd
Review:
Love Xander's solution to the Aura problem.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [grd] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CastorandPollux
Review:
Excellent!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Martin
Review:
In the US there isn't any tuition for public high school.

And while what you did might make you think it worked by changing names etc. The IRS do figure you will use the names of your family and do have a close relationship in nearly all the island nation banks. So it wouldn't work. She needs that money to be scrubbed clean. She needs to have a legitimate reason to have that money and preferably to have already paid taxes on it. If Willow was a true magician of a hacker she would have had that money put into her name 7 years before as a early inheritance, then put into IRS filings any interest it would have accrued for each of those 7 years.
Comments from author:
Okay, I will fix those two things. Thank you.
P.S. I made it a decade because I like round numbers. :)
Review By [Martin] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from alynambered
Review:
I have to agree with the other reviewers- that was quite a twist.

Pooh on Buffy, not wanting to stop Willow-babble with kissage. lol

Just one:
You figured that out the day after she made the the call? - lose 2nd 'the'
Comments from author:
I'll fix that mistake as well as soon as I get home. Too hard to do it from my phone.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from CPTSkip
Review:
I'm sorry about the original Aura. She was one of the few Cordettes other than Harm who had an individual separate personality on the show. I am glad Xander took care of the Sith Lady however. Sith types are never a lot of fun to have around.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Also, I agree, Sunnydale is dangerous enough without having to worry about the Sith. :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Rob
Review:
Good part.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Rob] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from moringstar
Review:
Another great up date I like how you handled xander compassionate but with a ruthless cold streak.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Glad you liked it. :)
Review By [moringstar] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from RafMereC
Review:
That was an unexpected twist.

Good chapter over all

Raf
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from lordamnesia
Review:
Didn't see that coming, but very well done with Xander's reaction to Aura. Truthfully, it's something that I could see Xander doing later on in the Buffy verse, but with the Shadow's memories, it just quickened the response. Keep up the fantastic work!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I think I agree that Canon Xander would have shot someone threatening a Scooby if he could and was sure it would work.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from starwolf
Review:
that was good. if it was me an a sith was involved, i'd double check to see if a light-saber might be lying around.
keep up the great work, thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you! I guess I should have had them check but I figured they'd be distracted and whatever was there is gone now.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from LFW
Review:
I am enjoying this fic and looking forward to more
and my God but this Harmony is a ditz . . . funny too
Thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [LFW] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from alynambered
Review:
That's a plan and a half. Hmmm, Aura-1 and Harm-1/2. lol

And a safer witch Willow!
Comments from author:
Safer Willow is good! :)
Review By [alynambered] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Darklight
Review:
like it, keep the parst coming.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Darklight] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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