Really good so far. Any chance of Larry remembering enough of the Phantom to become a regular Scoobie? Also the curiosity is killing me, where is Willow pierced?
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Review By [CorsairX] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Not Rated
If Larry remembers enough of the Phantom a conversation between him and Buffy would be interesting. Longer lives and less generations but twenty generations KIA should give a lot of insight into how Buffy feels about being the slayer.
Nice follow through with Xander and his Cranston memories; hope they raid the smith's business for everything - or maybe keep it as a spare place; never can tell when a front will come in handy, after all...
Hoping to see if Larry's possession left anything behind; it can go either way, with him being a Hellmouth borne and hence susceptible to such, or just a regular guy that shakes it off as delusions, swiftly forgotten. Either way will be interesting to see play out.
Let's see, three nubile, teen age girls, one with the memories of a harem girl, a good witch, and a Slayer with an attitude and a serious necrophiliac streak - REALLY hoping somebody pops her little bubble on that one during their jewelry removal! Be neat to be a bug on the wall during their talks, though...
Rats! Will we ever know where Willow's piercings were? Lol! Your story still has my interest. I look forward to reading more. I just hope Xander can get his hands on more .45 ammo. And does Cordy have a transport bubble?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review By [Bill] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CrystalBlaze
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Superbly handled.
The fact is, a great deal of the Watchers' Journals and other occult tomes may be in Old Farsi.
Not Necronomicon (unless some poor asshole dressed as a Lovecraft character), but let's face facts here, the ancient and worldwide lineage of the Slayers' struggle means they'll have issues with demons from and/or require wisdom originating from the Middle east.)
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Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
As Ethan had dedicated himself as a son of Chaos then managed to get himself killed by his own arrogance, I am not surprised that Janus would regard it as a sacrifice, and a willing one at that.
Most of the changed.. well, likely would not be permanently altered, for the simple reason that Neither Glinda nor Lamont wanted them changed for good. Quite the contrary, they were acting to end the changes to the innocent when Lamont perforated Ethan with his .45 pistols.
Buffy is.. iffy. If she does retain ghostly powers, I'd have her regain her body but be able to turn it insubstantial, due to greater distance. Likewise, Willow and Larry would retain their new skills and such, but regain control of themselves.
That said, Glinda of Oz and Lamont Cranston, as the ones to offer Ethan to Janus (however unwittingly), are rather likely to merge with or even mostly replace Cordelia Chase and Alexander Lavelle Harris, unless I'm totally off base
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Not Rated
