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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Rob
Review:
Good part.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Rob] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from moringstar
Review:
Another great up date I like how you handled xander compassionate but with a ruthless cold streak.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Glad you liked it. :)
Review By [moringstar] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from RafMereC
Review:
That was an unexpected twist.

Good chapter over all

Raf
Comments from author:
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from lordamnesia
Review:
Didn't see that coming, but very well done with Xander's reaction to Aura. Truthfully, it's something that I could see Xander doing later on in the Buffy verse, but with the Shadow's memories, it just quickened the response. Keep up the fantastic work!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I think I agree that Canon Xander would have shot someone threatening a Scooby if he could and was sure it would work.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from starwolf
Review:
that was good. if it was me an a sith was involved, i'd double check to see if a light-saber might be lying around.
keep up the great work, thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you! I guess I should have had them check but I figured they'd be distracted and whatever was there is gone now.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [30 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from LFW
Review:
I am enjoying this fic and looking forward to more
and my God but this Harmony is a ditz . . . funny too
Thanks
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [LFW] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from alynambered
Review:
That's a plan and a half. Hmmm, Aura-1 and Harm-1/2. lol

And a safer witch Willow!
Comments from author:
Safer Willow is good! :)
Review By [alynambered] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Darklight
Review:
like it, keep the parst coming.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Darklight] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from CPTSkip
Review:
I loved Harmony's call to the IRS. It was evil, but totally sounded like Harmony. I still am enjoying the heck out of your story.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I worked hard to get it to be a credible evil plan and still sound like Harmony.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from lordamnesia
Review:
Very very well done! I really like how this is going, so keep up the fantastic work!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
I hope to keep it up and even get better as I go along. :)
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from RafMereC
Review:
LOL:)

Funniest tip to the IRS ever.

Great chapter.

Raf
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the high rating! :)
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Darksnider
Review:
Hopefully you have the hellmouth be what causes people to not notice and it not be a curse.

Seriously there are just to many butterflies if someone tried to lift it if it was a curse. Way to much author fiat would have to be used for the world to not be destroyed easily.

"Kay: A person is smart. People are dumb, panicky dangerous animals and you know it. Fifteen hundred years ago everybody knew the Earth was the center of the universe. Five hundred years ago, everybody knew the Earth was flat, and fifteen minutes ago, you knew that humans were alone on this planet. Imagine what you'll know tomorrow. "

Nothing good would come from that being lifted.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your comment. I can't say what will happen without spoiling it but I did think of that and I hope you like how I handle it.
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from DHX
Review:
Why would Aura turn on Cordelia? Aura is the only Friend Cordelia Kept post Sunnydale, the only true friend she had in the Cordettes.(and I'm not making that up, it actually did come up in Angel)
Comments from author:
Thank you for commenting!
You'll see the in-universe reason why Aura did it when Cordelia confronts her in school the next day. As for why I picked her, well I needed a Cordette with more than two brain cells to rub together for a villain and as far as I remember Aura was it.
Review By [DHX] • Date [21 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from starwolf
Review:
a great read with a different approach the halloween story.
looking forward to the next chapter.
thanks
Comments from author:
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Review By [starwolf] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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