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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from trongod
Review:
Like that they stripped the visible portion of the store, but have to wonder about hidden rooms and such, even if Xander's Shadow memories should have that taken care of.

The talk between the Scoobies was fun, and nice to see Willow is obviously very much a girl to Xander, and that Cordelia seems to be marking her territory in stages so far. The last sentence of the story makes me think that some of the tomes they now have might start influencing the girls and Xander for some reason - Dirty Old Man Syndrome or Scoobie Luck, six of one...

But Giles thinking as he did sure seems like a Challenge to Murphy and His Crew...
Comments from author:
Thank you for your comment and I hope you liked what happened next. :)
Review By [trongod] • Date [15 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Given the time Lamont Cranston lived in the pulps, Xander might actually appreciate Giles' car now.. but want to have it completely overhauled.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thank You!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from IrFane
Review:
Good story.
Review By [IrFane] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Thank you for answering the question "Where was Willow pierced"! Inquiring minds wanted to know... Good chapter, looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [9 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Corsair
Review:
Really good so far. Any chance of Larry remembering enough of the Phantom to become a regular Scoobie? Also the curiosity is killing me, where is Willow pierced?
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Corsair] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from SamTurner
Review:
Willow,where are these piercings we wonder,please tell.(Just kidding,let the poor girl keep her secrets).
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [SamTurner] • Date [6 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from semkirk
Review:
Nice going. Well written story. And where was Willow pierced??
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [semkirk] • Date [6 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bobboky
Review:
Nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from dcarson
Review:
If Larry remembers enough of the Phantom a conversation between him and Buffy would be interesting. Longer lives and less generations but twenty generations KIA should give a lot of insight into how Buffy feels about being the slayer.
Review By [dcarson] • Date [6 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from trongod
Review:
Nice follow through with Xander and his Cranston memories; hope they raid the smith's business for everything - or maybe keep it as a spare place; never can tell when a front will come in handy, after all...

Hoping to see if Larry's possession left anything behind; it can go either way, with him being a Hellmouth borne and hence susceptible to such, or just a regular guy that shakes it off as delusions, swiftly forgotten. Either way will be interesting to see play out.

Let's see, three nubile, teen age girls, one with the memories of a harem girl, a good witch, and a Slayer with an attitude and a serious necrophiliac streak - REALLY hoping somebody pops her little bubble on that one during their jewelry removal! Be neat to be a bug on the wall during their talks, though...
Comments from author:
Thank you! Her necro streak will be broken. :)
Review By [trongod] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Bill
Review:
Nice! And what else was happening at the girl's party?
Review By [Bill] • Date [5 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from alynambered
Review:
This is a fun story and I'm quite enjoying it.

I second the piercing location question. Heck to the cold shower. lol
Review By [alynambered] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CPTSkip
Review:
Rats! Will we ever know where Willow's piercings were? Lol! Your story still has my interest. I look forward to reading more. I just hope Xander can get his hands on more .45 ammo. And does Cordy have a transport bubble?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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