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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from starwolf
Review:
except that cell phones weren't in common use among high school students yet this is really good.
highly recommended, thanks
Comments from author:
Not in common use true but Cordelia is a wealthy student who might be expected to get one as soon as they became available regardless of price.
It is why neither Buffy nor Xander had one. Willow's folks while not award winners at parenting would seem to be fairly well off so I decided she might have one as well.

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Review By [starwolf] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Harmony being capable of plotting.... Oh the horror!!! Actually it'll be fun to see if she is capable of anything truly intelligent after halloween.
Comments from author:
Thank you! You'll see soon. :)
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Riniko
Review:
Was leaving me wondering if Harmony had retained anything from Halloween? Well time will tell.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Time will indeed tell. :)
Review By [Riniko] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from CPTSkip
Review:
I'm still really enjoying your story. Who would have ever thought we'd be worried about the evil plotting of Harmony? Well, when she was still Human at least. Then again, nobody really worried about the evil plotting of Harmony once she was Turned either.

I am enjoying the growing Buffy-Willow relationship. Especially if it puts Angel/Angelus out of the picture.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
thank you!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from CPTSkip
Review:
This was a fun update. When does the horror begin? Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you! The horror? Wasn't that scary? Well there will a different sort of horror soon.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from RafMereC
Review:
Very nice.

Are you planning to use these pawn-brokers again?

They sound like decent characters.

Raf
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from ronin
Review:
nice story so far I've been a fan of The Shadow for awhile so i really like the slight crossover or at least stealing of the powers and memories you did.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [ronin] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from RafMereC
Review:
Loved the interaction and Cordy's analysis of the relationship dynamics in Sunny D

Raf
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Rob
Review:
I like it!
Review By [Rob] • Date [27 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from CPTSkip
Review:
I really like your Cordelia. But, just as Agent Scully once said, "Smart is sexy." Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from LFW
Review:
Fun read
I am hoping for more Xander uses the abilities of the Shadow though
Thanks
Comments from author:
Oh don't worry there will be! :)
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from alynambered
Review:
This was a great set of chapters. I really like this story!!

I'm glad to read that you didn't go overboard on Buffy's 'de Nile'; this leaves her more open to later naughtyness in the story (yeah, DOM much), but doesn't make her appear psycho over the situation with Willow, either. The group dynamics thus stay more 'normal'.lol
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [alynambered] • Date [26 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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