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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Seven: John" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [29 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six: Buffy" from Callista
Review:
Great story so far, I loved reading it and I can't wait to read the next chapter! But Dean really needs to adjust his attitudes towards non-(standard) humans if he wants to keep Buffy. He'll be in for a nasty shock when he discovers Oz's furry side, or her relationship with Angel...
Comments from author:
Just uploaded John's chapter! As for Dean... well, I have plans. If I can buckle down and write it all out is the real question.
Review By [Callista] • Date [29 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six: Buffy" from raintree
Review:
So glad your back!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I really, really appreciate all the welcoming comments. There's always that little voice in the back of my head that wonders if my story is any good or if anyone else cares. It's totally inspiring to hear from my readers. I'm going to do my best to stick to my schedule and not keep you guys hanging for so long!
Review By [raintree] • Date [23 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six: Buffy" from crosie
Review:
glad that you came back to this story
Comments from author:
Thanks! I fully intend to finish it. There are only a few chapters left!
Review By [crosie] • Date [23 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six: Buffy" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
So glad to have you back where you belong. I can't wait to see what comes next!
Comments from author:
Ugh. I love my new job, but it's taken a bit of adjusting to balance everything going on. But now I'm setting aside some time each week to write, edit, and revise. It feels really good to get back into writing!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [23 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six: Buffy" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [23 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six: Buffy" from stopwatch
Review:
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for continuing with the story.
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you're enjoying it! And thanks for sticking around during the long hiatus.
Review By [stopwatch] • Date [22 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five: Sam" from aveave
Review:
Great story. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Comments from author:
Sooo, I didn't write it soon, but it is written and posted. >.<

I've got the next few chapters lined up as well, so there shouldn't (fingers crossed) be any more delays until this story is done!
Review By [aveave] • Date [5 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five: Sam" from MilaS
Review:
Hi. I really like this story. It is well written.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I have a slightly intensive editorial process, but it's definitely worth it because the readers get the best that I can give them.
Review By [MilaS] • Date [9 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five: Sam" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Great chapter. I do hope that you won't change one thing... please don't kill off Spike... he's much more interesting as an adversary. And think of how much he'd annoy Dean!! Other than that, I hope that Buffy will actually get some of the mooola from that loot. It sucked that she was so poor in later times...
Comments from author:
Kill Spike? That's an impossibility. He's got more lives than a cat! I also have to agree; I loved him more when he was bad and less obsessed with Buffy.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five: Sam" from raintree
Review:
Fab update! I really enjoy reading this story, and get super excited when i see a new chapter. i love how you switch from each characters pov so easily. I love the overall story your telling but its the little details you add in which explore that characters thoughts and emotions that i really like. Its such a treat to read such a well written story, it'll come as no surprise but I'm already looking forward to more ;-)
Comments from author:
Thank you for the compliments!

I was a little worried about the multiple POVs when I started writing this story, but I'm glad I decided to do it. Sometimes, though, I have to re-read a couple of chapters to remind myself of the character's voice.
Review By [raintree] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five: Sam" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [RHatch] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Dean" from Ashkana
Review:
Great story !
I read it all in one go and am now anxiously waiting for more.

More ! Moaar! MOOOAAAAAAAR !
(sorry, lost control of my inner dinosaur for a bit)

Keep up the good work :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I think I may need to borrow your dinosaur to bite me in the butt on this story. I've been dragging my feet because I'm getting close to the end. And I hate when things end. But moar is coming soon! (Like this Friday.) And I've got a sequel already planned out. :)
Review By [Ashkana] • Date [5 Feb 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Dean" from RHatch
Review:
good update
Comments from author:
Thank you!

I'd love to know what you liked about it.
Review By [RHatch] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Four: Dean" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
That actually went better than it could have... glad you let us see the softer side of John. He really is a good man... just tortured and beyond frightened. Unlike his wife who was born into the hunter life and his children who grew up with it, he was brought kicking and screaming into it by a loss that is still an open wound.

Thank you.

Blue
Comments from author:
I definitely wanted to bring more depth to John's character. With him being gone so early in the show, and even then only in a few episodes, it's hard to realize what he's given up, what he's gone through, because of what happened to them.

I think he truly does want a normal life for his sons. He nearly says as much at the end of Season 1. But he also wants to protect them and make sure they're safe. Little did he know that heaven and hell had that covered. :P

Thanks for your fabulous reviews!

Tiki
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [25 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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