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Review of chapter "G is for Growl" from AllenPitt
Review:
Sooner or later, her violent past (time in prison etc) will come out. Meanwhile, she needs to send an email and get half a dozen slayers sent down, stat. It's not like they're in short supply.
Comments from author:
Oh it will eventually but sadly no other Slayers are on their way. This all about Faith and not the minis I'm afraid.
Thanks for the review!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "G is for Growl" from (Recent Donor)Manchester
Review:
"She could overhear part of their conversation but was only able to distinguish a few words from Siles – school, torch, bolt cutters."

"Faith made her way upstairs, just in time to see him flying out his room with his jacket half on and a torch in his hand."

I do hope that you're British and when you used the word 'torch', you meant what us Amurrrricans call a 'flashlight.'

Either that or Stiles is carrying a honest-to-Frankenstein-black-and-white-movie stick with oil-soaked wrapping at the far end. To complete the set, he should also bring along a pitchfork for storming the lightning-blasted castle.

Good story!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I'm Scottish so a few words are going to creep in and I didn't even realise about torch. It's been changed.
Thanks for pointing it out and thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Manchester] • Date [27 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "F is for Family" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
Definitely a sweet family vibe in this chapter and it's making me hope when they do find out about Faith's entire past it's not screwed all to hell. Which is a good thing, you've got me invested. ;) I think the Stilinski men are an interesting sort and Faith really does fit right in with them.
Comments from author:
I'm not saying how they deal with Faith's 'past' and her indiscretions but it does come out eventually. Stiles being Stiles just can't help but poke at things he shouldn't.
Thanks again.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "E is for Encounter" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
There's something seriously adorable about the interaction between Faith and Stiles. Granted I think Stiles is adorable so most of his interaction with others falls under that umbrella, but still I'm greatly enjoying the big sister, little brother vibe going on between them.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
You have no idea how much I love this review. I've worked hard on the interaction between Stiles and Faith and I'm glad someone has picked up on it. I wanted them to be more brother/sister rather than cousins and it starts to show the more the story progresses.
Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "D is for Derek" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
"different town, same ignorance" - Ain't it always the way. :) There's something to be said about all the supernatural shows and in them the towns just go on their merry way, usually, completely unaware of what's really going on after dark.

It's a shame Faith couldn't have actually been there for the boys in this situation. She's much better at keeping a level head.
Comments from author:
I had wrote that Faith was in the car with Derek and Stiles the whole time but it just didn't fit well as I kinda love those interations in the show and so I removed Faith and put her somewhere else.
Thanks hon!
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "C is for Challenge" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
It's about damn time someone called Derek on his random attacks on Stiles! I know Stiles is mouthy and more often than not brings the moments on himself by testing something with an alpha complex by questioning their authority daily, but it's just nice to see Derek put in his place at least a little. :)

An interesting first meeting regardless and now I'm off the read the other chapters.
Comments from author:
Considering I'm a huge Sterek fan - I love all the random attacks that Derek does to Stiles. It's foreplay but no Sterek in this fic sadly. Maybe in a few future ones though.
Anyhoo, this chapter was the whole reason the fic is being written. I always wondered what Faith would do if she met Derek and he was being, well, Derek.
Thanks!
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "E is for Encounter" from Waverly
Review:
That was fantastic! I can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "D is for Derek" from thewrongalice
Review:
This is good - and I can't wait, both for more Faith / Derek but also how Faith deals with the Argents and Scott - can she smack him down? He's kind of annoying.
Comments from author:
Oh I think Faith could give Scott a few smacks now and then. He does deserve them, doesn't he?
Thanks for the review.
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [18 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "D is for Derek" from AllenPitt
Review:
I wonder if any of them know about slayers? Any chance of the werewolf hunter from Buffy S2 showing up? "Cain" I think his name was. Mein Furrier......
Comments from author:
Funny you mention Cain. I was thinking he would have done dealings with the Argents at some point and mentioned Sunnydale. You'll just have to wait. Thank you for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "C is for Challenge" from Waverly
Review:
That was fantastic. I loved how she handled Derek, and that she was so protective of Stiles. Can't wait for more!
The reveal should be awesome, Stiles is going to be so intrigued by Slayers
Review By [Waverly] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "C is for Challenge" from thewrongalice
Review:
Thanks for updating, really enjoying this so far and can't wait for more Faith / Derek interaction.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "B is for Bags" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
Stan may as well just said, "He's a pain in the ass, but you'll get use to it." ;)

Faith catching boys staring and then their 'hiding' was just the right amount if slapstick and a fun completely in character detail. I highly enjoyed that moment.

As for Faith and Derek: I have faith (pardon the pun) in your abilities.
Comments from author:
Lol! That would have worked. I figured that Stiles and Scott would have had their noses against the window watching Faith get out of the car.
Thanks for the review!
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "B is for Bags" from TheTurnCoat
Review:
I'm just waiting for Stiles to notice that his cousin's a lot stronger than she should be or... weapons, please let there be a massive amount a weaponry in Faith's luggage because I can't just see Stiles and Scott find them and freaking out about it 'oh no! evil hunter cousin!'. Misunderstandings make for some fun stories.

Really looking forward to the next update. Thanks for writing :)
Comments from author:
Funny thing, he notices very quickly. it's more how they all handle having a Slayer around during the season 1 storyline.
Thank you for reading and reviewing and I hope you enjoy what's coming next.
Review By [TheTurnCoat] • Date [12 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "B is for Bags" from Waverly
Review:
Lol, I love Stiles, he's such a spaz!
Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Yes he is but such a cute one. Don't just want to give him a hug? lol
Thanks again!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "B is for Bags" from lillyb
Review:
cute, cant wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [lillyb] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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