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Review of chapter "Classroom Conflicts" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Classroom Conflicts" from Rich
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I liked this. However I think there might have been another solution to the problem:

1. Buffy reads the selected chapter from Umbridge's book, aloud, very quickly. This takes maybe 10 minutes, because there really isn't anything there in the first place. The "official" material has now been "covered".

2. What do you do with rest of the class time ? You do "extra credit" work, of course. Officially, Umbridge can complain if the teachers DON'T cover her curriculum - she can't complain if they cover MORE than her curriculum.

Of course, she'll raise hell anyway - but her position would be more obviously unreasonable.
Review By [Rich] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Classroom Conflicts" from Wolfkin
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Hope one of them tells Buffy. After all, Slayers kill demons and I'm pretty sure toad demons count . . .
Review By [Wolfkin] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ministry Approved Teaching" from spikesplayfulpet
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I like this story and series. keep up the good work and I will be patiently awaiting the next chapter.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ministry Approved Teaching" from AbigaelRose
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as usual you put out a great chapter, but this one is my favorite so far because it captures Buffy so well in her actions.
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ministry Approved Teaching" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ministry Approved Teaching" from ShalaDakiri
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I liked Buffy's and Burbage's reactions to the 'approved' curriculum. Even more so when Buffy tossed the book out the window. It'd be great if the thing landed on Umbridge and knocked her out, but I doubt we'd be that lucky. More likely, she'll find it and cause trouble for Buffy and/or Harry.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The High Inquisitor" from CageFire
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Nice new chapter. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rise of the Phoenix" from Rich
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Moody thinks Buffy isn't a match for him ?? It might be best to let him continue to think so. But if was Faith, his next opinion would have been delivered from inside the wall (or possibly the ceiling).
Review By [Rich] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rise of the Phoenix" from starwolf
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regardless of what Moody thinks, Buffy should be able to take the whole room if attacked. the only thing i've really not agreed with in the whole story is that Barty should have gone down way faster. keep up the great work. thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [15 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just The Beginning" from nightshadowlife
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Love this story!!!!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just The Beginning" from bradsan
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This is a very good story, really good series and I enjoy reading it. I like how Buffy dragged Severus into dancing. I like how Harry finally has somebody who will understand him and train him so he has more surviving chances. The picture was sweet. I presume The PTB or Whistlers has something to do with it.

However there is something bothering me. Buffy fighting a wizard with bare hands. She is as strong as 10 man and she can't defeat him with her first blow. Even when she pulled her strength back she could easily knock him unconscious for several hours without harming him. Than leaving him there without binding him so he couldn't escape or at least drag him along with her magically or carrying him. Buffy is a veteran "warrior". She didn't won and survived that long to make such stupid mistakes. It would have made more sense if he escaped when she had delivered him to somebody else.

Buffy is the strongest Slayer ever and a very powerful Witch, the wand and the spells are her weapons or fighting gear. The Slayer can use every weapon in seconds, she however has a Year to adjust and she still thinks that another wizard has better spells than her. Argggh how frustrating is that. She needs to have more confident in herself. A well you can't chance humans nature and thank god she is good at fighting without weapons in this case without her wand.

Oh what is Buffy animagus form would that be a wolf. I forgot if she could do that. Knowing her she would work her butt of so she could change also. if possible.

I'm done rambling and can't wait what will come next. Keep up the good work it's really, really good.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far, apart from that one bit anyway heh. I've actually heard all of this so many times now that I'm considering re-writing the chapter just to make it more realistic to the BuffyVerse. My line of thinking at the time was that Buffy would be more interested in getting to Harry than wasting anymore time on Barty, but I guess your idea of him escaping from someone else is a good one too :). As for the fight itself, yes she probably could have knocked him out with one punch, but that wouldn't be much of a fight scene would it? (although it'd be a lot easier to write, I really hate writing fight scenes!)

I said that she wasn't as powerful with her spells simply because of all the time she missed. She never went through the last few years of wizarding school so she wouldn't know as much as most witches/wizards. Sure she's had a year and a bit to catch up, but that doesn't replace the 15+ years of knowledge and practice that she's missed out on. Don't worry, she will eventually get better and realise just how powerful a witch she can be :).

I've never actually put it in, but Buffy/Isabella never learnt to become an animagus and I'm not really intending for her to start learning now. It'd be way too hard for me to choose the right animal for her, picking a patronus was bad enough lol! I've actually got an idea with the theme of animagus for Lost, if I ever get around to adding to it, that is...

Anyway, I'll stop talking now. Thanks again for your review and I hope you'll continue reading :D
Review By [bradsan] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just The Beginning" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [9 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Return" from AllenPitt
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Will this make it easier to proclaim V's return? Or will the Ministry just say that they're lying & are unreliable witnesses?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Return" from ChikaraKatherine
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Nice adding of Buffy, Sirus and Remus all ending up at the grave yard. It provied a nice way to cause old Voldie to have his attention wonder. Nothing bad to say about any of the chapter. Except I maybe would have had Buffy ending a few people. Maybe thats too soon. But in all honest Buffy has to know. That riding the game board of a few mudering monsters. Isn't a bad thing whats so ever. Perhaps I'm seeing more season 7 Buffy. Than I should. Still a bit more rulthless on Buffy's part could be needed. She does have to keep a low profile. But she's kind of blown some of that. She should have kept far more quite about herself. Wondering where Peter is as well. Still not something I wonder too much about. You did do a very good job on this chapter.
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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