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Review of chapter "The Return" from CageFire
Nice chapter. :) Keep up the nice work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Return" from AbigaelRose
Great update but you are leaving me on edge!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Final Task" from ChikaraKatherine
I have to say this was very good. Except for one tiny thing. Buffy isn't a moron. She lived on a hellmouth, and delt with a lot of horrible and vile things. Even if she was holding back that guy should be out longer or dead. Also I must point out that she wouldn't let the fool be left to just wake up. Unless theres something I'm not seeing. I don't understand why Buffy would allow it. Albus might be a manpulive old crazy man. But theres no way he could talk her into letting Barty Jr. To be left alone, let alone unchained up. Other wise I did enjoy the chapter. Except for that large glaring plot hole.
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Revealed" from MarzBar
ARGH!!! What a cliffie!! Just found this trilogy and I am hooked! More soon please.
Comments from author:
Heh, unfortunately there's another one in the next chapter, but it will all be resolved soon :). Thank you for your review and kind words, I'm so glad you like the story and even better, the entire series!
Review By [MarzBar] • Date [24 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revealed" from AbigaelRose
Noooooo what's with the cliffie?! You've got me craving the story already but that was just teasing!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [24 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Revealed" from starwolf
Buffy's not dumb, never leave an enemy behind you. it would only take an instant to transform something into restraints.
very much enjoying the story, thanks
Review By [starwolf] • Date [23 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Suspicions" from ChikaraKatherine
Excellent, excellent update. I really and turly love how you write Buffy. She's dead right with this. Lived in Sunnyhell too long not to see it coming. Loved the conversation with Sir and Remus. Sadly they are bit off. Can't see why, what with all they have lived threw. Ray is evil. Saw that coming. He's really Barty. That or I'm way off. Oh well. Plots great, flows great. Great lenght on the chapter. A great fun read. Just lots of good stuff. I thank you again for sharing. Now if I could only write a decent Buffy/Hobbit/Forgoten Realms cross. oh well. Thanks again. :)
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [16 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Suspicions" from ShalaDakiri
And once again, Buffy notices something off, but nobody takes her seriously (I can think of at least 4 incidences in the show off the top of my head and could probably find more if I dug). At least by now she's experienced enough not to let them talk her out of her suspicions.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [16 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Suspicions" from AbigaelRose
And the plot thickens... as always smashing chapter, love the way you write Sirius. I hope to hear more soonish!
p.s. I was originally reviewing on both TTH and FFN but due to classes and other college crap I can only promise one from now on.
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [16 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Second Task" from ChikaraKatherine
Nice look into the second task. It was a little short, but then the second task was a bit short. Still it was a very nice read. Very in the sprit of HP and the Buffyverse. Would have perhaps liked a bit more. With other peoples thoughts and feelings. Over all this was a nicely balanced chapter. You did a nice job on it. A very enjoyable way to spened ones time. I've really enjoyed this from start to now. Thanks for sharing it.
Comments from author:
Aw thank you for the review :).

I agree the chapter was a bit too short, but really I couldn't think of anything else to add in other than re-writing the task from Harry's P.O.V, which would never be as good as the original.
I think with this story I'm concentrating more on the number of chapters rather than the length of them, and there's plenty more to come yet.

Thanks again :D
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [15 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Clue" from AbigaelRose
Finally! I love the update a bit on the short side but great none the less!
Review By [AbigaelRose] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family, Old and New" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Has Whistler actually scored some brownie points? And are they made of real Brownies?
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family, Old and New" from ChikaraKatherine
There are only three or so enemys I can think. Who would have done the picture. One is Angelous. Two is the First. Three would be some other vampire or demon. Who would have been able to get the picture. All things considered thats a short list. Still very nice update. I'm glade the picture made Buffy happy. Ultimatly she is what she is. The ministery can piss off. They would be lucky to have a world with a slayer in it. They are just evil. Voldemort wouldn't know what a slayer is. Nor would he be able to get a slayer esances into him. The power alone would break his mind. Besides he doesn't have a normal body. The slayer demon/esance what ever you call it. Clearly hates other demons, vampires, exct. It lives to end them. Considering what old Tommy boy is now. I think he'd be insinerated or taken down by it. Very nice progression of the plot. The flows excellent. A very nice way to spend ones time. This is an excellent read.
Comments from author:
Aw thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying it. Your review has definitely made my day :).

The person who put the photo into the book will unfortunately remain a mystery. I've never intended for anyone to find out who done it, I just think it's a nice way to remind Buffy who she really is and all the people who have helped to shape her.

Thanks again, there's more to come soon :).
Review By [ChikaraKatherine] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dancing The Night Away" from CageFire
Great new chapters, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you :), there's more to come soon!
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dancing The Night Away" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
She's going to force Sev to show up in public in a Hawaiian soon, isn't she?
Comments from author:
Ah this made me laugh, I can just imagine the unimpressed look on his face if she tried that :)
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [29 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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