Interesting section, especially the possibility of being very alergic to new things after the change! As for the question of actual bedroom scenes or not, I vote for not. I may be be hypocritical of me, but I have not idea with the emotions being shown, but the physical acts are not my cup of tea.
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I can understand that. Its one of the reasons why I'll make it skipable for any who aren't interested in such. Just make sure to read my author's notes for the warning to look for the skip sections! Provided I add any.
A couple of very good chapters. I especially liked the three boys being just as scared of Martha's family as they were in the dreamscape! Abosolutely waiting for more.
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I'm glad that you liked it. Considering who they are? I'm not surprised that they chose to be scared of Francine, even if they aren't willing to admit it.
Having read the latest update, I've got to say that it's nice to see that the drums are gone and that everyone is getting along for a change. Keep it up, please!
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I'm glad that you like my work.
I know that its hard for people who intensely dislike one another for some reason to get along but I also know from experience that if they make the effort they can make it work or at least minimize the public confrontations. I saw no reason not to both show the anonymity as well as the fact that both groups care enough for Martha that they might be willing to make a go of it, to just try. If nothing else.
Just because Doctor Who specializes in the weird, the extreme, the sciency, and innovative solutions that would actually work in real life doesn't mean that some of the more mundane issues should be ignored or not seen as a triumph.
Sometimes getting two particular people into the same room and to talk civilly to one another is more of an achievement then saving the world.
