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Review of chapter "17" from Lurkerabove
Review:
Poor Faithy, just can't catch a break.
Comments from author:
I know, she tries and she tries. Worse,
she's got the guilt about something that
didn't even work!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Lurkerabove] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "17" from grd
Review:
Faith forgot that the Mayor would still be around and made herself a target. History on course. Ironic that she is the one that brought in Finch. Faith really needs to do better at writing coded messages to herself.
Comments from author:
Trying to find a way of leaving the message that would be delivered and the Mayor
would find was tricky.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [grd] • Date [2 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "16" from Typhonis
Review:
I wonder what 'interesting things' may wind up following the two back to the future?

I mean sure it seems like the wibbly wobbley timey wimey stuff is happening as it should, as are the fixed points, BUT they have to be making changes that have repurcusions to them in the future.
Comments from author:
We'll see.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Typhonis] • Date [21 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "16" from Genuka
Review:
Ha! Serves both baddies right!
Comments from author:
Yep, the Master got exactly what he deserved.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [20 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "16" from Chargone
Review:
Well, That was both interesting and convenient, while leaving their effect, or lack there of, on the time stream still unknown.

That said... "... the kneeling on one knee man..." you really want "... the man, who was kneeling on one knee, ...". You might have to adjust the surrounding sentence slightly to fit, but English likes it's relative subclauses somewhat more than it does trying force phrases into standard adjective slots, ya know?

(Also, i give up on it's vs its. By the standard rules they should both be it's anyway, and almost no one can keep them straight.)
Comments from author:
It's is a shortening of 'it is' while its denotes a possessive, belonging etc.

And you're right it should have been 'the man kneeling on one knee', I'll change that.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Chargone] • Date [20 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "16" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the new chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more.

-Any chance they'll run into Wilkins before they leave the town?
Comments from author:
Wilkins is gonna make an appearance. He may or may not meet Faith\Xander.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "16" from Studyofchaos
Review:
So... end of Rasputin? The Master ended up in the right place... that's got to count for something...
Comments from author:
Told you the timeline was robust!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "16" from OlBear
Review:
Excellent update as always. Somehow I don't think that Faith and Xander will not be going back to their own time despite their efforts. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Why so pessimistic?

Thanks for the review.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "15" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Very good story as always.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the update, enjoyed the fight though I do wish Faith could have landed a hit to The Master's nads. Hope for more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from Ghostrider
Review:
Nice to see the events shaping up that sent Buffy on to her first dead. The Master has always been a very dangerous opponent. And, we see Sunday's turning. Another of those small events that were glossed over.
Comments from author:
I think after the first couple of Seasons, BtVS lost track of just
how dangerous vampires were - The Master, Kakitosis (sp),
and Angelus were great. But the show missed opportunities -
a better Dracula, a vamped Slayer, a vamped Scooby, and
Elizabeth Bathroy could all have been used.

As regards Sunday I saw an opportunity to drop her origin in.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "15" from Typhonis
Review:
Great story so far. I wonder if all the people they have met will send something to Faith and Xander when they return to their time period? I figure the Doc will at least. Also I wonder what butterflies Xander has caused due to his actions. We know Faith started the DRI but what group did Xander start in the future?
Comments from author:
This story is just rife with repercussions and ripples. The biggest or most personal
of which will occur at the end of the Sunnydale arc.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Typhonis] • Date [29 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "14" from Genuka
Review:
You have to remember your history Xan. If you miss details it could be your downfall when you time travel. Of course there's also the fact that history is written by the winners to consider...
Comments from author:
Yeah, I bet he wishes he listened to Giles' boring lectures now!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from Genuka
Review:
Ah, the threats of the comic book past. Too many bad guys working together.
Comments from author:
Thankfully not all of them are working together.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "14" from JediKnight
Review:
Great work on the latest update, here's hoping to read more of the story soon.
Comments from author:
Yeah, the Sunnydale arc's got a few chapters to run, then one final
arc in the US, and then we get to investigate the world in general.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [16 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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