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Review of chapter "16" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the new chapter, I'm looking forward to reading more.

-Any chance they'll run into Wilkins before they leave the town?
Comments from author:
Wilkins is gonna make an appearance. He may or may not meet Faith\Xander.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "16" from Studyofchaos
Review:
So... end of Rasputin? The Master ended up in the right place... that's got to count for something...
Comments from author:
Told you the timeline was robust!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "16" from OlBear
Review:
Excellent update as always. Somehow I don't think that Faith and Xander will not be going back to their own time despite their efforts. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Why so pessimistic?

Thanks for the review.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [19 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "15" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Very good story as always.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the update, enjoyed the fight though I do wish Faith could have landed a hit to The Master's nads. Hope for more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from Ghostrider
Review:
Nice to see the events shaping up that sent Buffy on to her first dead. The Master has always been a very dangerous opponent. And, we see Sunday's turning. Another of those small events that were glossed over.
Comments from author:
I think after the first couple of Seasons, BtVS lost track of just
how dangerous vampires were - The Master, Kakitosis (sp),
and Angelus were great. But the show missed opportunities -
a better Dracula, a vamped Slayer, a vamped Scooby, and
Elizabeth Bathroy could all have been used.

As regards Sunday I saw an opportunity to drop her origin in.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "15" from Typhonis
Review:
Great story so far. I wonder if all the people they have met will send something to Faith and Xander when they return to their time period? I figure the Doc will at least. Also I wonder what butterflies Xander has caused due to his actions. We know Faith started the DRI but what group did Xander start in the future?
Comments from author:
This story is just rife with repercussions and ripples. The biggest or most personal
of which will occur at the end of the Sunnydale arc.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Typhonis] • Date [29 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "14" from Genuka
Review:
You have to remember your history Xan. If you miss details it could be your downfall when you time travel. Of course there's also the fact that history is written by the winners to consider...
Comments from author:
Yeah, I bet he wishes he listened to Giles' boring lectures now!

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [19 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from Genuka
Review:
Ah, the threats of the comic book past. Too many bad guys working together.
Comments from author:
Thankfully not all of them are working together.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "14" from JediKnight
Review:
Great work on the latest update, here's hoping to read more of the story soon.
Comments from author:
Yeah, the Sunnydale arc's got a few chapters to run, then one final
arc in the US, and then we get to investigate the world in general.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [16 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from JediKnight
Review:
Verty nice work on the update, I hope to read more of your work soon.
Though I thought Fu Manchu was Chinese and not Japanese; if he is Chinese why is he working with ninjas who are Japanese?
Comments from author:
I guess because they're the world's first special forces? The world's perfect
mercenaries for the job in hand.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [2 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "13" from Dhampyr
Review:
Um, Mayor Wilkins WAS running Sunnydale in the Thirties. In fact, he founded the town in the late 1800's. Is Faith just unaware of that little tidbit, because Xander should remember it from being there when they all discovered how old Wilkins really was.
Comments from author:
Eh?


“You realise of course no matter how much we wanna, we can’t change Sunnydale?” Xander continued without giving her chance to answer. “You kill the Mayor and you might end up having no-body to lean on after Finch and might just go down and never come up. Or if we kill the Master now, there might be some other Vampire Master who isn’t trapped underground in charge when Buffy first arrives. We can’t predict how changing the past will affect our futures.”

How does any of that relate to the Mayor NOT being in Sunnydale?

Oh wait, you mean:-

"“Yeah, Rasputin.” Faith grimaced. She to admit that goin’ to Sunnydale caused her more than a few butterflies, maybe even more than last time she returned, ‘cause at least then, the Mayor wasn’t runnin’ the damn town."

Remember LAST time Faith returned to Sunnydale was in S7 when the Mayor was long dead. That's CLEARLY what she's thinking about.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "13" from Chargone
Review:
The chase scene... way too many sentences, sometimes several in a row, and paragraphs (likewise) start with 'Faith (verb)'. To a lesser extent the same happens in the fight, and with Xander. Some of them can be replaced with a pronoun... more can have the verb for changed, allowing a pronoun to be placed in a different location, and others, from memory, can drop the name/pronoun entirely through clever use of ", then". There are tricks to using repetition to drive home a point. When not using them, it's best to avoid it. (There's a weird sort of topic or focus marking or something that comes into play with pronouns too. Wish i could explain it properly, because it tells you when you need to restate who pronouns refer to. Mostly amounts to scene changes or when you change who the pronouns refer to, but sometimes you don't need to due to pronouns marking for case, among other things.)

That aside: yay chapter!
Comments from author:
It's a tricky balance, using names and pronouns too much or too little.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Chargone] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "12" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Any chance you can have the pair of them do a little spring cleaning of the council? Just have the results lead to an alternative universe string. Their return need not be impede by it. The whole multi-verse story should cover everything and a new string with improvements is always good for the balance.
Comments from author:
The only trouble with that suggestion is that these two aren't exactly Council historians, and as such wouldn't know which Watchers to kill. They will however have more dealings with the Council before the end.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [22 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
enjoying your on going tale, thank you.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [19 Jun 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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