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Review of chapter "23" from grd
Review:
Love these two. They truly have a style all there own. I hope they can make some small changes in history that only they realize later. Beating up the one who ratted out Anne Frank for example and they find out later she is alive and famous.
Comments from author:
Yeah, with Weird Weird West, there's going to be a lot
of worked out ripples when they return home. With
this story, not sure yet.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [grd] • Date [5 Sep 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "22" from SamDragon
Review:
Fu Manchu enters the story, nice, hitting everyone.
Comments from author:
Yep, he's a big player.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "22" from JediKnight
Review:
Great work on the update, hope to be reading more soon.

-Who was the Asian guy?
Comments from author:
Fu Manchu.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from fanreaderonetwo
Review:
re
"And it was because of that very real fear of war that he was out test piloting the Hawker Hurricane in the hope that this plane would act as the Royal Air Force’s defence against Hun expansion."

nitpick
The Hawker Hurricane was a _single_ seat fighter plane, so there was no place for a co-pilot, particularly for an evaluation flight in 1936 or so.

You might want to replace it with an aircraft with two seat, like a light bomber or small transport plane.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hawker_Hurricane
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

I'll change it to a Hotspur.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [17 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "21" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice start to the Euopean tour, hoping for more soon.

-What are Biggles and Algy?
Comments from author:
Lol, you yanks. :D

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Biggles

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [17 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from Sdarian
Review:
While this is good, I just can't keep reading it.

I really just can't stand stories where there is zero net outcome like this. They are in the past, and can do all kinds of things, change things in uncounted ways, and yet regardless of what they do there is zero difference from their actions and they have no impact on what they remember of history. While it's a good story, I just get too frustrated reading these kinds of stories to really enjoy it.
Comments from author:
You're welcome to your opinion. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Sdarian] • Date [23 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from JediKnight
Review:
Great work, I'll be looking forward to their adventures outside the U.S. I would have thought either Xander or Faith would be the reason Baron Von Strucker has a mechanical arm.
Comments from author:
They might run into the Baron again. :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from OlBear
Review:
So Xander and Faith are off to England. Somehow I don't think that the Watchers Council will ever be the same after meeting them. Looking forward to the next update.
Comments from author:
Yep, poor Watchers.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [OlBear] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from Ghostrider
Review:
Good to see more of this. I'm, however, wondering what the endgame is. Getting back to their time? Certainly. Is that a possibility? Probably. Is their future changed? Quite likely, maybe even more so than they can imagine IF they make it back.
Comments from author:
Their endgame is finding this time's Sorcerer's Supreme, and seeing
if he has the power to send them into the future.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [22 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from Typhonis
Review:
Minor nitpick on an otherwise great chapter but World War 2 has yet to happen so wouldn't it be Third Reich instead of Fourth?
Comments from author:
Ugh. I'll have to correct that!

Thanks for the review and the correction! :D
Review By [Typhonis] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from (Past Donor)vogonguard
Review:
On a point of information, if this is the 1930s surely you mean the Third Reich not the Fourth?
Comments from author:
Yep, my mistake.

Thanks for the review and the correction! :D
Review By [(Past Donor)vogonguard] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the new chapter, I hope to read more of this one soon.
Comments from author:
I hope I get round to posting more soon too! :D

Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from OlBear
Review:
Great to see another update of this excellent story. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Review By [OlBear] • Date [2 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "19" from Ghostrider
Review:
Ah, great to see more of this story. And you've just introduced another pulp hero in the mix ;-)

Looking forward to see how many more you'll be introducing.
Comments from author:
Well we'll be seeing more period era chars from other nationalities
soon.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [2 Jan 14] • Not Rated
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