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Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from war
Review:
Nice to see a update for this. Slayers vs wizards this should be interesting.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Godogma
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After waiting a year for an update, honestly this one didn't thrill me... The very small amounts of interactions between characters I actually gave a damn about made this chapter more or less seem like a teaser chapter and the cliffhanger ending didn't do anything for me either. Here's hoping you update more quickly with more of Harry and Xander interacting instead of a bunch of idiots yammering on about their stupid rules that they don't seem to apply to everyone instead acting as an albatross for the main character.

The White Council is and was a bunch of morons in the Dresden verse... Actually their bullshit is why I quit reading the Dresden verse years ago after I bought all of them up to the one from the SFBC with Harry riding the undead t-rex. I have no idea if it got better afterward but they really annoyed me to the point of making me stop reading the series.

Constantly hassling Harry instead of ... you know, doing anything vs the various damn evils that Harry has to go clean up while those idiots are fucking around and hassling him. Even when they're breaking the laws of the White Council it's still up to Harry to clean up their mess instead of the Wardens doing it.
Review By [Godogma] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Rubel
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Very good story so far. Good work at keeping everyone true to their characters. I wonder how long till Faith has to club Kathy over her head?
Review By [Rubel] • Date [10 Nov 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Very good story, I will be tracking this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from calikocat
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The soul gaze was fine...kind of want to know what Xander's soul looks like. ^^ Also a little anxious about the questioning.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [8 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
It's a two way street, we should have seen Xander's soul as well.
Comments from author:
I was writing from Xander's perspective during that part and switching over to Ebenezar's perspective to describe the other half of the soul gaze threw the whole chapter out of wack. Though I might be describing a little of what Ebenezar saw in the next chapter.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Bobboky
Review:
Good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Pitbull
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I say let the wizard council kill Xander, if I remember reading the books correctly years ago they are very arrogant morons. Then maybe Darth Willow could wipe out the existence of the Desden dimension not to mention battle those fairies.
Review By [Pitbull] • Date [27 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Genuka
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It was close enough to an alternate version of Dresden's very brief description in the book series that it flowed perfectly. I look forward to the next chapter.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [26 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from AllenPitt
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Soulgaze is tough to do right, you did fine. Eb. took a real risk doing that, if X. had been hiding a lot of evil it could have damaged him.
So... Xander is presumably a descendant of some wizard who went out the Gates. With his luck, somebody with a really bad rep & they'll realize he's a relative.
Sounds like Kathy might end up working for the Summer Queen. Hm. I wonder what would happen if someone soul gazed a slayer? There's a lot in there; the slayer herself, and the 'slayer essence' which is demonic in origin. That could get rough.
Please have Faith fight one of the local vamps. Could be fun. Also, any chance any of them arrivals has a duplicate in this dimension? It is pretty close to the world they came from...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Just finished Cold Days. He sure doesn't rest on his laurels when it comes to writing!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Genuka
Review:
good time alotment! More please!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from SimulatedSoul
Review:
Marvelous! This is a neat one and i'm very curious and anxious to see where it goes! Hopefully your next chapter will be here sooooooooon! :)
Review By [SimulatedSoul] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Yup, you got the characters down pat! Great start! Looking forward to more!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from mackenziex
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I think this story is well placed between Turncoat and Changes. I'm also reading Ghost Story currently and I'm about ready to chew on someone to get a copy of Cold Days. :)
Review By [mackenziex] • Date [10 Feb 13] • Not Rated
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