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Review of chapter "A Flicker of Light in the Dark" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting time to place the story regarding the Buffy-verse. Thanks for continuing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Flicker of Light in the Dark" from (Recent Donor)dreamfall
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Really enjoying this so far! Great premise. One thing that surprised me a bit is that Gibb's letter didn't mention anything about only recently having gotten her letter instead of sitting on it for two years--but he probably figured she'd get that with the vague address.
Review By [(Recent Donor)dreamfall] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Flicker of Light in the Dark" from Keshkreature
Review:
I like it! It's not something that's been done to death, and both of them are a little skeptical of the other, as opposed to "oh, I'm so happy to find you!" Looking forward to seeing how you answer all the questions this brings up, and how the two of them will react to each other in person. Of course, we're rapidly approaching a time when Faith is going to have to no longer be incarcerated. That might be a bit tough for Daddy to swallow, provided he does turn out to be the dad.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Flicker of Light in the Dark" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
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Interesting, I will be tracking.
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Flicker of Light in the Dark" from Alkeni
Review:
Still interesting.
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Flicker of Light in the Dark" from war
Review:
Gibbs is gonna be looking into alot of things that many people will want to stay hidden and in the dark.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [16 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Electronical Trail" from kweandee
Review:
hey there...sounds cool so far. Can't wait to read more :)
Review By [kweandee] • Date [13 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Electronical Trail" from aveave
Review:
Great story. I hope you will write next chapter soon.
Review By [aveave] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Electronical Trail" from (Recent Donor)draconin
Review:
Interesting start. :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [9 Oct 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Electronical Trail" from Xovervore
Review:
Interesting start. Of course Gibbs will want to get confirmation via a DNA test. His curiosity will also be aroused by the case of a man going missing, possibly murdered; even if technically not in his remit as an NCIS case, but of personal concern if Faith is his daughter. Of course, the real story about Mr. Lehane could be very interesting. As to his disappearance - could be something as "humdrum" as death by vampire.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Electronical Trail" from Rich
Review:
So, by now Faith is out of prison, probably holding down the hellmouth in Cleveland or possibly (if you're following the comics) working with Angel in England. Either way, Jethro is in for a huge surprise. I look forward to more.
Review By [Rich] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Electronical Trail" from serenityselena
Review:
a very interesting start...
eagerly awaiting to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Electronical Trail" from Selias
Review:
Interesting. I don't usually read Faith-centric stories, but this one looks good.
Review By [Selias] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Electronical Trail" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Two years?

Postal delays of that size, I tend to attribute to outside agencies (alphabetical or otherworldly)..
Comments from author:
Letters have been known to suddenly be delivered over 20 years after they were sent. Granted they were extreme cases, but still it happens. The incomplete address probably didn't help.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [8 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Electronical Trail" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good scene and storytelling. Thanks for continuing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Oct 12] • Not Rated
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