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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Calison
Review:
This chapter was awesome and I think that Xander is probably going to kill not only the head honcho but whoever designed or put the collar on him.

Here's hoping for a speedy update!
Comments from author:
There are worse things than death. Any Heterodyne can tell you that.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Calison] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from TAO
Review:
Fun little romp you got going here.

One question...you're not going to have GEN-13 or DV8 show up in this, are you?
Comments from author:
Thanks. And no.
Review By [TAO] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from grd
Review:
You are having way too much fun with this. Love the scary image Xan brings. Humiliating defeat.
Comments from author:
Scary Xander is always fun to write. Thanks for the review.
Review By [grd] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from TroyGuffey
Review:
WOW! Starting to be a VERY good story.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Cypher
Review:
Very nice so far; I'm really looking forward to more of Xander's interactions with the DC universe's XCOM members.

...I noticed you reply to Moringstar's question about Death Rays, and the first thing that came to my mind was Gil's Hand-Cranked Runcible Gun; http://girlgenius.wikia.com/wiki/Runcible_gun

Mostly because the image of Xander weaponising the contents of the facilities cafeteria, and mowing down the guards with a hail of high-velocity plastic sporks, is a particularly hilarious one.
Comments from author:
Yeah... Xander can do better than that. Though that would be funny.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Cypher] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from OdinMage
Review:
My only words at this point are: Effing AWESOME!
Comments from author:
Cool.
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Vilkath
Review:
Great to see an update as always. As for events to see affected I always loved to see established facts shreded and rebuilt in a new way. Things like the teen titans, making Raven, Starefire, even Cyborg never join that team and instead follow Xander. Turning potential vilians or hero's into Xander's friends like Circe or wonderwoman.

Over all I love to see stuff altered before they even start, instead of the usual run into canon events and affect them after the fact. A great event would be the formation of the Justice League. What if they weren't the one to save the world? Would the league even be formed in the first place if Xander put a stop to things before Batman even really noticed a problem?
Comments from author:
Mmm, we'll see how it goes...

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Ooo... reading down the list of reviews I saw speculation on how Xander escapes...

Might I suggest they make the absolute and total mistake of giving access to the bio-labs... =D

Jagerserum!!! =D
Comments from author:
*snort* No spoilers.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Nice! And well written too. In fact I kneel at your feet with tears in my eyes because I only found one spelling error! So many folks don't seem to pay attention to correct word usage (such as root and tow) that to encounter a well edited work is a JOY!

Oh, in case you're wondering about the incorrectly spelled word, you use 'exited' twice where in context it should be 'exCited'.

Bravo! More!!!
Comments from author:
No need to kneel but I do spend a lot of time editing my work and it's good to know that the effort is appreciated. That being said, I'm not obsessive enough to go hunt down one spelling error.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Selias
Review:
Oh, WOW. That chapter was amazing! Can't wait to see what else you have for us!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm working on it.
Review By [Selias] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Drakan
Review:
for some very disturbing reason...this chapter made me smile :D loved it! can't wait for the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Yes... give in to the dark side *cough* Umm, I mean yes I'm glad you like it.
Review By [Drakan] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from lordamnesia
Review:
Fantastic! Keep up the awesome work!
Comments from author:
I will, thanks.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from eirwinrommel
Review:
Good story. You should check out cloud storage. Dropbox and google drive (to name just two) will give you free cloud storage just for setting up an account. You can access the data anywhere you have wi-fi, and it will also automatically update your data. So if something happens to your hardware, all you have to do is access the data from a different computer. I have over 16 years of fanfiction in cloud storage and it doesn't come close to filling up the free space.
Comments from author:
I might do that, thanks.
Review By [eirwinrommel] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Truly awesome update I love it
Comments from author:
Cool. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Orchamus
Review:
Pretty epic, and it would appear Xander will be taking his leave of his oh so kind captors.
Comments from author:
Oh, he's going to do more than take his leave.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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