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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from iamjmph
Review:
I'm enjoying this story so far, thank you for taking the time out of your life to write and post it. My only complaint is i don't know who the crossover characters are, but I'm sure I'll figure it out eventually.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Work is eating up my free time but I really enjoy writing.
Review By [iamjmph] • Date [3 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Moontrap
Review:
Wow. I really enjoy this story, and pity the x-com aliens when Xander and DC villains get around annoying him. Thank you for letting us read your work, and I can't wait to read more of it.

Sincerely

John
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I'm working on the next chapter.
Review By [Moontrap] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CageFire
Review:
Really nice to see a new chapter.

I hope I'll be getting better fast. I had to go to the hospital the other day, turns out I had appendicitis and needed it taken out. If you've never had surgery before, I'll let you know that it can make you feel as weak as a child, and when trying to get out of bed(or apparently getting out of a seat I'm leaning back in) I feel like a turtle stuck on its back. I also hope I can somehow find a way to pay the bills with how little I make in my part-time job. I was actually lucky I think, I got it caught early and unlike some descriptions I've heard of my symptoms were extremely mild, it's only because my dad said something and I did research that I even suspected I should go to the ER, and the doctor said the surgery went smoothly with no complications. If you ever feel a pain, (which apparently for me doesn't have to be a sharp intense stabbing pain like for some others) that starts out around your belly button and then seems to move to the lower right side(usually), then go to the hospital ASAP to get checked out, don't mess around as it can get really bad if not treated and it bursts. I almost didn't as the systems weren't anywhere near as noticeable as my research said they should be and I was reluctant to get the ER bill if it was a false alarm. I'm glad I did now before it got worse, but I haven't gotten the bills yet. But hey, at least I'm alive to try to pay them, and apparently the financial aid is going to help pay part of the bill which I thought might be the most expensive because I make so little and don't have much in the way of assets. I really kind of hope that with all the hospital visits my family has been getting lately and for the last few years, god decides to cut us a break and let us win even a share of the lottery jackpot. It would be a major major help to us.

Sorry for laying this all on you, but I just felt I needed to vent.

Oh, and I really hope I can get well enough to go see Iron Man 3, I was looking forward to it, but it's probably not best to see it while recovering and on pain meds, although I just took one almost an hour ago and I don't feel too woozy, although it's 3 am, so its hard to tell what might be the time, and what might be the pill.
Comments from author:
Damn, sorry to hear that. I've had surgery myself, a minor one thank god, so vent away. I know how much it sucks. I hope you feel better soon.

Thanks for the review and get some rest. There are always more movies to watch.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from LordCorwin
Review:
very well done ... had to go back to the beginning and re-read .. but well worth it.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you feel it was worth it. Some people are pi$#%& about the wait but RL comes first.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Kaosreign
Review:
I just hope you have him execute the Joker in front of millions when he tries to use Ace's powers on the people only to meet a grizzly end at the hands of Xander...and save Ace of course.
Comments from author:
Well, I do like Ace.
Review By [Kaosreign] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from gmaniscool
Review:
Awsome story.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Hey, I think this is my one hundredth review. On this story anyway. Cool.
Review By [gmaniscool] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DaBear
Review:
Very cool story, I am a bit confused about the claws and teeth though. Hopefully that'll be explained a bit later. :)
Comments from author:
The Heterodyne family likes to dabble in... genetic engineering. That's all I will say at this point.
Review By [DaBear] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Calison
Review:
This chapter was awesome and I think that Xander is probably going to kill not only the head honcho but whoever designed or put the collar on him.

Here's hoping for a speedy update!
Comments from author:
There are worse things than death. Any Heterodyne can tell you that.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Calison] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from TAO
Review:
Fun little romp you got going here.

One question...you're not going to have GEN-13 or DV8 show up in this, are you?
Comments from author:
Thanks. And no.
Review By [TAO] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from grd
Review:
You are having way too much fun with this. Love the scary image Xan brings. Humiliating defeat.
Comments from author:
Scary Xander is always fun to write. Thanks for the review.
Review By [grd] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from TroyGuffey
Review:
WOW! Starting to be a VERY good story.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Cypher
Review:
Very nice so far; I'm really looking forward to more of Xander's interactions with the DC universe's XCOM members.

...I noticed you reply to Moringstar's question about Death Rays, and the first thing that came to my mind was Gil's Hand-Cranked Runcible Gun; http://girlgenius.wikia.com/wiki/Runcible_gun

Mostly because the image of Xander weaponising the contents of the facilities cafeteria, and mowing down the guards with a hail of high-velocity plastic sporks, is a particularly hilarious one.
Comments from author:
Yeah... Xander can do better than that. Though that would be funny.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Cypher] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from OdinMage
Review:
My only words at this point are: Effing AWESOME!
Comments from author:
Cool.
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Vilkath
Review:
Great to see an update as always. As for events to see affected I always loved to see established facts shreded and rebuilt in a new way. Things like the teen titans, making Raven, Starefire, even Cyborg never join that team and instead follow Xander. Turning potential vilians or hero's into Xander's friends like Circe or wonderwoman.

Over all I love to see stuff altered before they even start, instead of the usual run into canon events and affect them after the fact. A great event would be the formation of the Justice League. What if they weren't the one to save the world? Would the league even be formed in the first place if Xander put a stop to things before Batman even really noticed a problem?
Comments from author:
Mmm, we'll see how it goes...

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Ooo... reading down the list of reviews I saw speculation on how Xander escapes...

Might I suggest they make the absolute and total mistake of giving access to the bio-labs... =D

Jagerserum!!! =D
Comments from author:
*snort* No spoilers.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
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