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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Nice! And well written too. In fact I kneel at your feet with tears in my eyes because I only found one spelling error! So many folks don't seem to pay attention to correct word usage (such as root and tow) that to encounter a well edited work is a JOY!

Oh, in case you're wondering about the incorrectly spelled word, you use 'exited' twice where in context it should be 'exCited'.

Bravo! More!!!
Comments from author:
No need to kneel but I do spend a lot of time editing my work and it's good to know that the effort is appreciated. That being said, I'm not obsessive enough to go hunt down one spelling error.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Selias
Review:
Oh, WOW. That chapter was amazing! Can't wait to see what else you have for us!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm working on it.
Review By [Selias] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Drakan
Review:
for some very disturbing reason...this chapter made me smile :D loved it! can't wait for the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Yes... give in to the dark side *cough* Umm, I mean yes I'm glad you like it.
Review By [Drakan] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from lordamnesia
Review:
Fantastic! Keep up the awesome work!
Comments from author:
I will, thanks.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from eirwinrommel
Review:
Good story. You should check out cloud storage. Dropbox and google drive (to name just two) will give you free cloud storage just for setting up an account. You can access the data anywhere you have wi-fi, and it will also automatically update your data. So if something happens to your hardware, all you have to do is access the data from a different computer. I have over 16 years of fanfiction in cloud storage and it doesn't come close to filling up the free space.
Comments from author:
I might do that, thanks.
Review By [eirwinrommel] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Truly awesome update I love it
Comments from author:
Cool. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Orchamus
Review:
Pretty epic, and it would appear Xander will be taking his leave of his oh so kind captors.
Comments from author:
Oh, he's going to do more than take his leave.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Genuka
Review:
.... damn. *stares in awe*
Comments from author:
Why, thank you. Glad you like it.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from dorkmoon
Review:
In the very first story arc of the “Girl Genius” web comic, it’s shown that non-Sparks barely comprehend devices invented by a Spark even if they have access to the blue prints and formulae. Thus, while heroes and villains alike horde their knowledge and technology, Xander can be “open source” about his innovations as he’s only person able to use it properly. I got the idea from Ezekiel Stane, son of “Iron Man” villain the Ironmonger, quote: “A post-national businessman and open source ideological terrorist, the antithesis of Tony Stark’s closed source rigidity.”

While LexCorp and Wayne Enterprises use patients, copyrights, and licensing to build his empire, Xander can throw the world into chaos simply by not caring who has access to his ideas.

Possible line: “I don’t want to drive you out of business. I want to make you obsolete.”

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ReedRichardsIsUseless

See “Reed Richards is Useless” on TV tropes where a brilliant inventor doesn’t share his inventions or try to change the status quo.

Examples: the Justice League has access to causal space flight and FTL travel, artificial gravity, teleporters, etc., while real life NASA hasn’t gone to the Moon in nearly thirty years. Comic-Amazons of Themyscira have a Purple Healing Ray that can repair wounds and cure diseases, yet keep it to themselves just because they don't like male-dominated society.
Comments from author:
That's an interesting idea. I might use it. Thanks for the review and the link.
Review By [dorkmoon] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from DrDamage
Review:
This mixes my favorite Buffy character with my favorite online comics. I hope there will be more of this good fic :)
Comments from author:
Xander Harris is definitely one of the most underused characters on TV. The sheer number of fanfictions with Xander Harris as the main character out there... Whoever was in charge of writing the character on the show was one unimaginative, vampire obsessed %$#¥π√|€.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from thsunami
Review:
Man that is just to good, please finish and no more long waits. It's torture, the story is just to good and I am hooked.
Comments from author:
I'll try not to keep you waiting. Thanks.
Review By [thsunami] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from TheKnightofFaerie
Review:
I enjoy reading Girl Genius myself. And good GG fanfictions can be hard to find. This one? This one here is amusing. Although I'd swear this was crossing with Gen 13 from the descriptions so far, which I thought is Image comics?

Could be wrong about the Gen 13 publisher though.
Comments from author:
Considering I never read Gen 13 that's unlikely. Thanks for the review.
Review By [TheKnightofFaerie] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from moringstar
Review:
Nice chapter, can't wait to see how xander leave maybe some type of death ray?
Comments from author:
Death ray? Too easy and not bloody enough.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [1 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Duquette
Review:
Thank you so much for deciding to continue this amazing pice of fiction, I cant tell you how much I've enjoyed this so far.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, I have no intention of abandoning this fic. It's just difficult to find the time to write. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Rob
Review:
Very cool part.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Rob] • Date [1 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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