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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
hmm, interesting chapter.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [13 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
Review:
Very good work
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Genuka
Review:
Nice update. Its a good chain of events and choices that have been set up.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Genuka
Review:
I hope Ranma finds a way to join Xander's crew!
Comments from author:
She will. once she accepted that she is Ranko a female not Ranma a boy.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Buffy and Cordy were funny in this chapter.
I am glad it looks like Rory is going to get to do his wood working for people that will appreciate it.

Good chapter, thanks!
Comments from author:
thanks. And you correct. A shaper like Rory needs to build create and work wood like you and me need food and water.
They also need to feel that what they created is apprciated and loved. and used if its a practical thing they created.

(its not just wood its any organic substance. wood, bone, coral. some shaper can even work metal and rock but they are rare. )

The awsome thing about a shaper is that they can creat work of in short time. what normal would take weeks they could make in a day.
And the things they build is automaticly a bit stronger looks better and hold a reflex of the shapers emtion.

A shaper create something becuse he loves creating stuff. If he build something fore some one he love then that would have higher quality in apparence durability and emotional reflextion..


And just imagen the luck rory will feel having Wood from a million worlds or more to play with. And even better he can help build starships. Jurarian starships are from living wood.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [24 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AnFan
Review:
Hah, poor Ranma. It almost seems s/he is destined to be unhappy. Hope it works out for the both of them. Probably would need them to touch base with each other and talk though. Not something that would come natural to them, but the healing might help there.

Continue to enjoy your story a great deal. Thanks :)
Comments from author:
Ranma / Ranko biggest problem is his sense of honor and loyalty that make him unable to break free from his worthless family.

Ranko the girl side have gotten a second change by becoming part of Xander crew. She just have to accepted that she a girl now. Not a man among man that she was raised at.

Ranma 1/2 is a action comedy and its a fun Anime and manga. Problem is IF you start looking at the show with critical eyes i feel pity poor ranma. A wise man said the difference between a tragedy and comedy is that in the end of the comedy every body is standing up and are friends again.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [24 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Raider
Review:
well its a good start.

hopefully you can manage.
Review By [Raider] • Date [19 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Eureka
Review:
Just so that you know Genuka has not "run for the hills" just been having troubles of his own.

Good chapter.
Comments from author:
yeah she told me so, sadly I had a lot of people so far who offered their help and then "run for the hills" after they saw how much work is needed to make Hatten's stuff more readable that I never heard of them again. She at least gave me back a small part thats more than I got from most, so I started this fic and If I find someone else to help out I'll even continue it.


John. Sorry to my defense i am dyslectic and Swedish is my native langush and we all seen the cook on the Muppet show. (He my uncle)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Hmm Glory is going to get a ship somewhere in Africa.
Buffy still can't remember the correct words or pronunciation...it's part of her.
Ranko is having major (and understandable) identity issues...

Great chapter!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lordamnesia
Review:
Not bad, not bad at all. My offer of services is still open if needed.
Comments from author:
it would be, please drop me your email address so I can send you a file to work on.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
Great continuation. I would love to beta. I'm good at spell checking and general lay-out. I'm sadly not familiar with the anime parts of this story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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