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Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VII" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
Well, we'll see how you like what happens next. If you know the canon timeline, you should have an idea.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VII" from starwolf
Review:
nice wrap up. this continues to be a lot of fun.
thanks
Comments from author:
Thanks! So once again, Xander escapes by the skin of his... umm... brassiere. :-)
Review By [starwolf] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VII" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Ah well, that seems to have ended moderately well. Poor Angelus, yet another Scoobie he has the hots for.

Amy is probably still in fairly hot water and had better not pull too many tricks. Or It will be the vengeance of the Kalderash.

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
Yeah, Amy's definitely pushing her luck. Unfortunately, this is exactly the state Amy was in (in canon) at this point, and we all know how well that worked out.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VII" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Exciting chapter. Enjoyed the various POVs.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And I like trying to capture the inner voice of different people, even if there are some people I can't write.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Nov 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VI" from (Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
And here Xander thought that his biggest worries were all the guys and gals chasing him because of Amy's spell.

Very entertaining story.
Comments from author:
Well, something analogous happened to Xander in the canon version of the episode, and he survived that one.
Review By [(Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [22 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VI" from CageFire
Review:
Oh boy. This just isn't Xander's day is it. Keep up the good work, I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)
Comments from author:
Well, if you remember what happened at this point in canon, you might have an idea what will happen in this version. (Hint hint...)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [22 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VI" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Oh, boy!
Comments from author:
Hmm, let's see... Dru wanting to kill me, or Snyder wanting to boink me. Dru... Snyder... Dru... Snyder... This is a tough choice!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part IV" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Catching up with "horrified" delight.
Comments from author:
:-) It's just like the spell in the canon episode... except not.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VI" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Oh dear, it gets even worse...Great Chapter!

Tom.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Just remember what happened in canon at this point.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [22 Oct 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VI" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Wrong in ssooo many ways! But funny!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I hope all the readers have noticed that this spell completely reverses everything that happened in canon.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [22 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VI" from Riniko
Review:
Things improved a bit for Xendra, but there was a big down slide at the end. Leaves me wondering, if Xendra got turned by Dru would the demon that took up home in the body be pissed that they are a boy demon in a girl body, bothered that they are a girl with boy memories, or do demon's even have a gender before moving in. So many questions and not enough answers. Just hoping that something happens to help Xendra soon, as things are not of the good now.

Yes, that would be truly horrible to Xendra, as I am sure she would be much happier with Dru trying to kiss her than Dead Boy.
Comments from author:
Yeah, things couldn't be a lot worse at the moment, unless Buffy was there too, trying to chop Xander up into little pieces. :-) If you remember the canon episode, Angelus grabs Xander and a 'lovelorn' Dru defends Xander. So I think you can see where this will go.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [21 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VI" from frozenchicken
Review:
Man, my mind was already pointing a certain way when their conversation was going on about the spell suddenly giving Buffy the ability to hunt him down, but the comment about 'doggies' made it a more solid suspicion. I hope Amy's circle was strong enough to hold off a certain type of supernatural beasty...
Comments from author:
Let's face facts. Buffy was pretty terrible at being able to sense vamps and track down demons. Okay, feeling the evil of a vamp on the Hellmouth was probably about as easy as hearing who burped when you're in the middle of a heavy metal rock concert.
Review By [frozenchicken] • Date [21 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part VI" from Cutiepie
Review:
Huh? How did Dru get into the garage? Since it is part of the house, I believe it is covered by the "vamps can't enter without an invite" rule. Regardless, Xan is in TROUBLE, until the besotted male vamp (be it Angelus or Spike) shows up. Then, he'll only be in Trouble.
Comments from author:
Didn't I make that clear? I guess not. It's a detached garage. It's not part of the house. And it's not that great for a detached garage.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [21 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part V" from Senko
Review:
Just wanted to say after reading that review from tempi there's a minor character in the half price manga who has that very curse due to annoying a powerful monster. Female by day, male by night.

EDIT
Sorry Half PRINCE not half price. Wiki article here http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/%C2%BD_Prince
Comments from author:
You know, I've never read that manga. Thanks for pointing it out.
Review By [Senko] • Date [12 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bewitched, part V" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Dude! Does Murphy live next door, or what?!
Comments from author:
:-) :-) I think Murphy is borrowing Xander's stuff without asking.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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