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Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Well...damn. Rather quick thinking on Cordy's part, though.
Comments from author:
Hey, Cordelia can do important stuff too! :D And they've been using that 'archaeology club' dodge for months and months.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [6 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
I wonder if maybe Willow will give into her repressed sapphic desires with teen Xena? Will Xendra experience all of the things that are totally female, like getting her first menstruation cycle, learning about women's undergarments, etc? I can't wait for the hilarity that is bound to ensue!
Comments from author:
Yes, wackiness ensues! On a Hellmouth! And Willow's massively repressed desires are why she is so incredibly freaked over Xander-as-a-girl.
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [6 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from Chunkman
Intersting changes, Funny thing is Xander might have a better shot at staying with Willow now.

So is this story done because there's no complete for it?
Comments from author:
This story is definitely NOT done. We're getting started. And after this story arc, we'll see a slightly altered season 3.
Review By [Chunkman] • Date [5 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from CageFire
Nice new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! This story updates every other Monday.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from raxadian
Wait, Willow parents are home? Weird... I guess Xendra will be staying with Giles or Willow, right? After all she was rapped, so considering Giles state Willow's mother won't object Xendra staying a few days.
Comments from author:
Willow's mom was home now and then. Especially in episodes where it would be particularly inconvenient. :D
Review By [raxadian] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from DavidEmpey
You write Cordeiia so very well: "I could have wound up with Xander parts in my coffin!" So very Cordy! And of course despite pretending to be shallow and self-centered, she takes care of the others. In a lot of ways Cordy is the most heroic of the Scoobies; she may be the one with the most character growth over the (two) series'.

I suppose you've already got the whole thing written, or at least plotted, but I sure hope we get to see Xendra being awesome.
Comments from author:
Yes, I have the whole thing plotted. Because I'm like that.
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from physicsteach
You don't kid around when you start piling on the hurt, do you? Here we thought Joss was bad . . .

Superbly well done!
Comments from author:
Well, I've saved Jenny... oh but I killed Oz in her place... and Willow got the same concussion even though she really should have been killed when an entire bookcase full of books crashed down on top of her. And I still killed off Kendra.

But you know what happens when a Slayer dies...
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from Riniko
Wonderful chapter, sad that Kendra died, but she almost always does. Her character really didn't have much of a life anyway past being a drone for the Watchers. I expected that end with Xander, if they change him back he would at most need to be in a hospital OR at the time to even have a chance of living. If they could not regrow his eye after all that time then I don't see how they could fix all or even part of that damage without a heavy cost.
Comments from author:
We'll see how that works out in the upcoming story arc.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [5 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Ah, Xander, the only predictability in your life is that it will hurt and be embarrassing. Good luck writing his way out o' this one!
Comments from author:
You'll see what happens in the next chapter, in only two weeks.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [5 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
In between my Alex fixes, I decided that my addiction needed to be fed more. So I checked your other stuff, and damn it all, it seems like I have become addicted to this story too! Do please, please, please write more! I will do anything!
Comments from author:
:D I'm updating this one every other Monday... which means tomorrow.
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [4 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from DavidEmpey
"Nobody dies if the girl stays in the boy," says Dru. And then she let the girl out of the boy. Or maybe put her back in the boy? What WAS Dru up to? Impatient readers want to know!

Oh. Well, don't I feel silly now. Somehow I thought Dru had a much longer-term plan in mind.
Comments from author:
She let the girl out of the boy and used that to get into Giles' brain to see how to unleash Acathla. And it worked! And she would have gotten away with it if it wasn't for those meddling Slayers and their Spike. :D
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from raxadian
Xendra, stop the winning, get free, free Giles, and look for Buffy!
Comments from author:
Absolutely. When you're in a vampire's lair, escape first, whine second.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from DieselDriver
Ok, short but with cliffhanger, sort of, Xander/Xena hanger anyway. She's smaller than he was, should be able to squirm free. Also, even teenager Xena should be stronger than Xander given the mythos they are from. Should aid in getting free and first aid knowledge from both to fix up G-man and get him to help.
Comments from author:
Well thought out! Good going.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from Senko
Yeah I'm going to have to agree with David Empey here that its a bit much calling Buffy selfish. She's a 16 year old girl called on to kill the man she loves frankly I'd be more concerned if she could just ignore her emotions and kill him. Being a slayer gives you strength and skill nothing more. Would you take the same attitude about Xander nit wanting to kill Willow in a later season when she loses herself to dark magic and tries to destroy the world? She's not even possessed when she does that.

Not much to say on the chapter as it pretty much follows cannon with the exception of Xander and Giles still being tied up. Only thing to say is the trouble with Seers especially insane ones is they aren't necessarily talking about now. By changing Xander from the girl in the boy to the boy in the girl she could have been setting up a lesbian relationship with Willow that ends with Tara being dragged back to her family and Xander being the one shot and killed by Warren so no ones around to talk Willow down and resulting in the end of the world.

Not that I really understood what Angel hoped to achieve by this as he's not likely to enjoy the results either. So he groped Xander, fingered her vagina and then focused on the anus . . . interesting priorities and he seems to have changed from wanting to date her to wanting to kill her as well. Also has he really changed in a teenaged Xena or into a female Xander (if you see the difference)?

Hmmmm would it be more humiliating for a man to be turned into a girl and molested if he realizes its the body he'd have if born female rather than a strangers? For that matter would it be more humliating for a girl to be molested or to see another person with an exact copy of her body being molested?

My mind goes to strange places.
Comments from author:
Teen Xena or female Xander? That will be revealed, but not in the next chapter. And it will be highly relevant.
Review By [Senko] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from SirLee
I didn't watch the original episode, so I don't know if Spike acted similarly there. If he didn't, I think one possible interpretation of what happened here is that somebody goofed and resouled Spike instead of Angel.
Comments from author:
This is precisely what Spike did. You should track it down on YouTube or something, because Spike has a parley with Buffy and volunteers to help her and take Dru away. His speech is one of the classic Spike bits in the series. And then, just to make things worse, Spike and Buffy have to save Joyce from Angelus's vampires and Joyce FINDS OUT.

"Don't I know you?"
"Yeah. You hit me once with a fireaxe. 'Get the hell away from my daughter!'"
Review By [SirLee] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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