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Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Ah, Xander, the only predictability in your life is that it will hurt and be embarrassing. Good luck writing his way out o' this one!
Comments from author:
You'll see what happens in the next chapter, in only two weeks.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [5 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
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In between my Alex fixes, I decided that my addiction needed to be fed more. So I checked your other stuff, and damn it all, it seems like I have become addicted to this story too! Do please, please, please write more! I will do anything!
Comments from author:
:D I'm updating this one every other Monday... which means tomorrow.
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [4 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from DavidEmpey
Review:
"Nobody dies if the girl stays in the boy," says Dru. And then she let the girl out of the boy. Or maybe put her back in the boy? What WAS Dru up to? Impatient readers want to know!

Edit:
Oh. Well, don't I feel silly now. Somehow I thought Dru had a much longer-term plan in mind.
Comments from author:
She let the girl out of the boy and used that to get into Giles' brain to see how to unleash Acathla. And it worked! And she would have gotten away with it if it wasn't for those meddling Slayers and their Spike. :D
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from raxadian
Review:
Xendra, stop the winning, get free, free Giles, and look for Buffy!
Comments from author:
Absolutely. When you're in a vampire's lair, escape first, whine second.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from DieselDriver
Review:
Ok, short but with cliffhanger, sort of, Xander/Xena hanger anyway. She's smaller than he was, should be able to squirm free. Also, even teenager Xena should be stronger than Xander given the mythos they are from. Should aid in getting free and first aid knowledge from both to fix up G-man and get him to help.
Comments from author:
Well thought out! Good going.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from Senko
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Yeah I'm going to have to agree with David Empey here that its a bit much calling Buffy selfish. She's a 16 year old girl called on to kill the man she loves frankly I'd be more concerned if she could just ignore her emotions and kill him. Being a slayer gives you strength and skill nothing more. Would you take the same attitude about Xander nit wanting to kill Willow in a later season when she loses herself to dark magic and tries to destroy the world? She's not even possessed when she does that.

Not much to say on the chapter as it pretty much follows cannon with the exception of Xander and Giles still being tied up. Only thing to say is the trouble with Seers especially insane ones is they aren't necessarily talking about now. By changing Xander from the girl in the boy to the boy in the girl she could have been setting up a lesbian relationship with Willow that ends with Tara being dragged back to her family and Xander being the one shot and killed by Warren so no ones around to talk Willow down and resulting in the end of the world.

Not that I really understood what Angel hoped to achieve by this as he's not likely to enjoy the results either. So he groped Xander, fingered her vagina and then focused on the anus . . . interesting priorities and he seems to have changed from wanting to date her to wanting to kill her as well. Also has he really changed in a teenaged Xena or into a female Xander (if you see the difference)?

EDIT
Hmmmm would it be more humiliating for a man to be turned into a girl and molested if he realizes its the body he'd have if born female rather than a strangers? For that matter would it be more humliating for a girl to be molested or to see another person with an exact copy of her body being molested?

EDIT 2
My mind goes to strange places.
Comments from author:
Teen Xena or female Xander? That will be revealed, but not in the next chapter. And it will be highly relevant.
Review By [Senko] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from SirLee
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I didn't watch the original episode, so I don't know if Spike acted similarly there. If he didn't, I think one possible interpretation of what happened here is that somebody goofed and resouled Spike instead of Angel.
Comments from author:
This is precisely what Spike did. You should track it down on YouTube or something, because Spike has a parley with Buffy and volunteers to help her and take Dru away. His speech is one of the classic Spike bits in the series. And then, just to make things worse, Spike and Buffy have to save Joyce from Angelus's vampires and Joyce FINDS OUT.

"Don't I know you?"
"Yeah. You hit me once with a fireaxe. 'Get the hell away from my daughter!'"
"Oh."
Review By [SirLee] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from Riniko
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If Angelus was resouled again right before Buffy sends Angel to hell again, she better hope he stays there. Because I don't think Xandra will give a damn when she rams that telephone pole sized stake through his chest and she better keep her mouth shut. Any vamp stupid enough to want to bring the real demons back should have all the others kill them. At least Spike did not seem to want that as he peeled out with Dru, though I think Xandra would have been a lot happier if he had at least cut one of her arms free before he ran. I am hoping the next chapter at least answers the question of who is still alive.
Comments from author:
Yes, all the reveals about who survived are in the next chapter. Two weeks away.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Ok...well, "bad spot" is somewhat underestimating his/her current situation - but it certainly could have been a *whole* lot worse.
Comments from author:
If it hadn't been for Spike, it would have been far, far worse. So yay for Spike? And really, how on earth did Spike knock out Dru with a *chokehold* in the canon episode? I'm willing to let the whole 'Dru is a seer and should have seen it coming' issue since it was Spike, but how can you choke out a being who does not breathe and who does not have a beating heart?
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from CageFire
Review:
An okay chapter. I was a bit thrown off by the warning at the beginning. Perhaps you should've made it mentions of/references to rape or something similar and not stating it like somebody is actually raped. I almost didn't read the chapter.
Comments from author:
I thought I ought to be careful about this, since it is a very sensitive subject and a trigger subject for many readers.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from Starfox
Review:
Oh, sad and gripping chapter. Very dark. Not one of Buffy's finest moments even in canon, doubly so now. I wonder how Xendra will get out of this.
Comments from author:
As far as Buffy knows, Xander and Giles have been dead for hours. Or are worse than dead.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from DavidEmpey
Review:
"A good demonstration of Buffy's self-centered..."
Isn't that a little harsh? She didn't know Xander (Xendra?) and Giles were there.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately, as far as she knows, Xander and Giles are dead. Or worse than dead.
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part V" from VillageOrchid
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A good demonstration of Buffy's self-centered earlier life not being erased by her sense of responsibility as the slayer. It is more of her default to be inwards and self-pittying, while Xander - even in changed form - is the one who looks out for his friends.
Comments from author:
Well, to be fair, everything *is* about Buffy. The villains focus on her. The stress is on her. The threats are aimed at her. The trap is for her. The freaking Balance Demon is for her. The nightmare at home is for her. She knows Kendra is dead, and as far as she knows, Willow and Jenny and Xander and Giles are too, and she's just been thrown out of her home, and she's just had to murder the love of her (short) life to save the world. She *should* be a basketcase.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from raxadian
Review:
Again, sucks not to be Xena for him.
Comments from author:
Sucks not to be Xena for everyone except Slayers!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [8 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part IV" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter. Keep up the good work. Not sure how I feel about Jenny and Kendra seemingly /still/ ending up dead.
Comments from author:
Hey, Willow's the one that got a massive bookcase dumped on top of her. Worry about her!
Review By [CageFire] • Date [8 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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