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Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter - I love the insight into Cordelia, Giles and Xander's outlook.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Cordelia is complicated to write.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from raxadian
Review:
Not even Xander luck is that bad for facing a Master vampire during the summer, right?
Comments from author:
I mean, what's the worst that can happen?

Oops, I didn't mean to say that out loud. :D
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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Not the smartest thing (s)he ever did, but probably the only thing. And at least well prepared. Wouldn't Council members know Xendra? Or at least call about it? Or has Giles made a deal with his brother?

And how the heck did a British lady get named Xendra? ;-)

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
As you will see in a few chapters, some Council members *do* know Xendra. A little.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from Vianca
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Xendra might want to visit a sex-shop for some leather clothing & underclothing.
Why?
Make-shift body armor.

Say, that book demon happend already, right?
If so, raid it for parts.
Think power armor.
Get the geeks together for some heavy duty tinkering.
Anyway to prevent fangs from ripping your flesh open.

Too bad that it won't be easy to get clothing from a sex-shop (S&M) blest(?) by some priest.
Xendra might also want to look in the profesional outback backpacker/farmer/ect, protection gear, there are hard carbon plates that you could wear on your lower legs, so snakes won't be able to bite true it.
Meaning that Xendra might like some of the more fancy necklashes that also cover the neck, besides dropping down to the breast.
I mean, pure metal as a neck protection?
And it's even a elegant fasion statement???
I can see Cordelia so going for it.
Yup, body protecting jewelry is the latest trend, especially if it looks good as well.

There are quite a few handschoes(?) in and around Sunnydale, that have power, how many do they have recovered by now?
Xendra might like a good set of something like that.
But the main problem will be finding a good set of running boots, I think.
It's almost a shame the Witchblade ain't real.
Comments from author:
Yes, the book demon happened already. And Xendra is going to have to make some hard decisions, because the more armor he wears and the more it adds to his resilience, the slower he will be, and he really needs to be able to run away from anything he can't kill. He's not Buffy.
Review By [Vianca] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from DavidEmpey
Review:
I can't wait for the fight! Hope Xendra kicks butt.

Xendra sounds like (s)he's a lot better prepared for the fledges than Buffy ever is/was when she patrolled. But I guess Buffy has compensating advantages.

Surely the collective term for vampires must be 'murder', like with crows.

What does Xendra look like? A teenaged Lucy Lawless? A female version of Xander?
Comments from author:
I thought about 'murder', along with a few dozen alternatives, because I obsess about stuff like that.

And Xendra looks closer to a teen Lucy Lawless.
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from kyro
Review:
so Buffy/Xena lite :P do pressure points work on vamps I hope Buffy get some what of a chewing out when she pops back up why do i still see shit head for the Scoobs fan?
Comments from author:
Xander never did get those pressure point tricks to work. (You may have noticed at least once where this came up in earlier chapters.)
Review By [kyro] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from Wolf
Review:
I hope Xander is able to be a guy again.
Comments from author:
Well, I don't believe in the Laws of Genderbending. And all it will take is a spell.
Review By [Wolf] • Date [12 Jun 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Soooo, can Xander do the Maiden role for his spell? Gonna be funny!
Comments from author:
For his own spell? No, I don't think that would work. Plus, Giles and Willow might not want to let Xander try magic again.

No, I have something even crazier for The Maiden.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from CageFire
Review:
Interesting new chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks. The summer might get a leeeetle complicated.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from DavidEmpey
Review:
Glad to hear you've got lots more for us. Gotta say, I'm surprised that Giles apparently thinks "Xendra's" "British" accent is good enough that the CoW won't notice (s)he's faking it. And wouldn't the CoW know that Giles doesn't have a niece named Xendra? But no doubt you've thought that all out.
Comments from author:
In fact, Giles *does* have a niece named Xendra. If the real Xendra were to show up, I'm sure wackiness would ensue. On the other hand, would Giles let his closest relatives come to the most active Hellmouth on the planet? I don't think so.
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from MadHobbit
Review:
good chapter ,I am a bit suspicious of the spell,might be a double cross,and of course trying to do a spell at night in a town full of vamps? not a good mix and of course on top of a Hellmouth?
Comments from author:
Yep, a forty minute spell in the middle of the night. Outside. Skyclad. In Sunnydale. What could go wrong?
Review By [MadHobbit] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter. Interesting kalderash clan members here - and interesting information. Loved the british Xendra, and Cordelia's mother's reaction to her and Giles.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Who knew that being able to mimic Giles and Cordelia would pay off in so many ways? :D
Review By [Starfox] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from DavidEmpey
Review:
I hope you have a lot more of "Xendra" for us to enjoy. And more Cordelia. I love your Cordelia.
Comments from author:
I have a lot more planned and outlined. Several seasons' worth.
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from kyro
Review:
I foresee the spell is going to interrupted just before the end I have to wonder if Ares is aware that Xena or her recrimination has or is walking the world again. How big of wrench is Xan being flipped in gears of the plan the PTB have for Buffy/Angel and Friends.
Comments from author:
Well, we will see how AU this goes (over time). Jenny lived, but Oz died. Do we have equivalency? Do we just have a really evil author? :D
Review By [kyro] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from raxadian
Review:
Looks like Xendra will do the staking. And who wanna bet than Xander spell to return to normal will be interrupted?
Comments from author:
I'm not a big believer of the Laws Of Genderbending, but you never know. (Okay, I know.)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
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