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Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part V" from Dragan
Review:
Did someone order a Queen-C and Dragoness-Xendra Double-team?

Oh? You want a Side of Willow-babble to confuse the issue some?

Anything to drink with that?

;)
Comments from author:
Having to endure Queen C's efforts ought to get Xendra in a fine mental state for the meeting. :D
Review By [Dragan] • Date [14 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part V" from DavidEmpey
Review:
1) Yay! More Xendra.
2) :( but no more for 2 whole weeks! I don't know if I'll be able to stand the suspense!
3) Yeah, the expectations people have for how women are supposed to look are just stupid, aren't they?
And we men just have no idea, do we?
Comments from author:
[1] Thanks.
[2] Sorry, but I'm making sure my publishing schedule doesn't slip.
[3] Seth Rogen is fine as a 'leading man' in movies, but Kate Upton is pointed at as 'looking pudgy'. This is insane.
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [14 Jul 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part V" from LeChasseur
Review:
PMS. Now ?
Oh boy. Poor watchers.

And really, when will Willow discover her inner-lesbian ? Because, if she continue, I think she will break-up with Xendra before ! Talk about ironic.
Comments from author:
Yes, Willow's inner Ellen DeGeneres is most likely the reason she is so freaked over all of this.
Review By [LeChasseur] • Date [14 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part IV" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting stuff.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's going to get more interesting.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part IV" from raxadian
Review:
Short chapter, funny how Xendra still uses male pronouns when thinking about herself. Sure she is not The Zeppo, but she is also not Xena. I wonder how long it will be until someone gets Xendra decent training?

Oh, and you wanna bet that there is at least a god or goddess involved in "Xena return"? Because Xendra is a force of good so something really powerful must be altering the variables so Xander stays female longer each time.
Comments from author:
Xendra still thinks of himself as 'Xander stuck in the wrong body'. He's not just going to wake up one morning and say 'hey I am fully female, I think I'll go shopping for miniskirts with Cordelia!' Anyway, he now has a timeline until he can go back to Xander. In theory.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [30 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part IV" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter. Good action scenes, and very nice lines about "Kiss" or "Clot".
Comments from author:
Kiss of the vampire? Please. Just say no. :D I think a group of vampires should be a sparkle. Think how offended real vamps would be.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [30 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part IV" from Riniko
Review:
Oh, the two week wait was so painful, but the story is so good. Why do you punish me so? Xandra was playing it smart with the minions, but she does not have the experience or power to handle more than a few as yet. And it looks like she will need to take some time off to recover herself, while she is doing this maybe she can look into some form of armor to help protect herself or other defensive/attack options. The javelin would be good, but it is not something that can be hidden while traveling and is likely not going to hit the heart easily from a distance. Maybe an item that flares out when it hits, so that it can't just be pulled out without causing more damage. I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter to this excellent story.
Comments from author:
Why do I torture my readers? That would be because I'm an evil, evil author. I aspire to Joss Whedon levels of evil, but i haven't gotten there yet. :D
Review By [Riniko] • Date [30 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from Tabercil
Review:
Okay, you've gotten this story to a VERY interesting point. Waiting two weeks for the next chapter to come is going to be a interminable torment...

As for Cordy, she's sounds about right - seems to echo Ironbear's characterization of her. Not that that's a bad thing as it's one of my favorite spins on her, with Cordyfan's being THE favorite.
Comments from author:
Cordyfan has given Cordy a different motivation/ability to evolve into a better person, while Ironbear has given her Xander (usually) as a 'softening agent'. We're all trying to change her from her season-1-early-episodes personality in one way or another.
Review By [Tabercil] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks! The summer arc may be a bit longer than most of the other story arcs.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [17 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from Senko
Review:
I'm a little surprised Xander couldn't break those ropes considering how strong she is especially as she was probably tied up like a normal girl not a slayer. Still wondering if Ares is around/going to take an interest and on that note I'd rather like to see Xendra attracted to a boy (or s god who knows how to push all Xenas buttons). Not long term just enough to teach her even if you know something is a bad idea your heart can be hard to ignore. Vamp willow from that alternate dimension could also work for this.

Amusing that Cordelia views the workout clothes as more of a fashion statement than actual workout clothes. Hopefully her opinion of Willow will change a bit after seeing just how smart she is. I also rather liked the counter insult of enough backhand to serve at Wimbledon
Comments from author:
Breaking ropes while tied in a chair takes leverage, which Xendra just didn't have.

Cordelia does have her own world-view (as I see her). It makes her more interesting to write than just another rich b**ch with affluenza.
Review By [Senko] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from Ephemeral
Review:
WILLOW ROSENBURG MANAGED TO BUILD IT IN A CAVE! WITH A BOX OF SCRAPS!

Huh, has anyone written that crossover?
Comments from author:
Probably. I know there's more than one IronXan crossover story and at least one IronBuffy crossover that are YAHF, but I have not yet seen a straight Willow-builds-an-exoskeleton-to-rescue-herself tale.

It's probably out there. I can see a couple possibilities.
Review By [Ephemeral] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from Riniko
Review:
Love the story so far, Cordelia may have one of the better survival traits of all the Soobies. She helps out partly because helping increases her own survival by killing the vamps off. That aside, she does do more than most credit her with. And yes, I bet she does know every clothing/shoe store in the region. Xandra has one other advantage on most vamps, surprise, as I bet they don't believe that the average woman is that fast or strong. Wonder what would happen if she did get called by the Slayer Spirit?

Edit addition: Exactly, when has Xander ever had it easy. Not that I think that will happen here, but there may well be vamps that think Xandra is the new Slayer.
Comments from author:
Well, if Xendra Giles got the Slayer spirit, that would be a bit complicated for Xander, don't you think?
Review By [Riniko] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter - I love the insight into Cordelia, Giles and Xander's outlook.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Cordelia is complicated to write.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from raxadian
Review:
Not even Xander luck is that bad for facing a Master vampire during the summer, right?
Comments from author:
I mean, what's the worst that can happen?

Oops, I didn't mean to say that out loud. :D
Review By [raxadian] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Not the smartest thing (s)he ever did, but probably the only thing. And at least well prepared. Wouldn't Council members know Xendra? Or at least call about it? Or has Giles made a deal with his brother?

And how the heck did a British lady get named Xendra? ;-)

Thanks for writing
Comments from author:
As you will see in a few chapters, some Council members *do* know Xendra. A little.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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