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Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from DavidEmpey
Review:
I can't wait for the fight! Hope Xendra kicks butt.

Xendra sounds like (s)he's a lot better prepared for the fledges than Buffy ever is/was when she patrolled. But I guess Buffy has compensating advantages.

Surely the collective term for vampires must be 'murder', like with crows.

What does Xendra look like? A teenaged Lucy Lawless? A female version of Xander?
Comments from author:
I thought about 'murder', along with a few dozen alternatives, because I obsess about stuff like that.

And Xendra looks closer to a teen Lucy Lawless.
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part III" from kyro
Review:
so Buffy/Xena lite :P do pressure points work on vamps I hope Buffy get some what of a chewing out when she pops back up why do i still see shit head for the Scoobs fan?
Comments from author:
Xander never did get those pressure point tricks to work. (You may have noticed at least once where this came up in earlier chapters.)
Review By [kyro] • Date [16 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from Wolf
Review:
I hope Xander is able to be a guy again.
Comments from author:
Well, I don't believe in the Laws of Genderbending. And all it will take is a spell.
Review By [Wolf] • Date [12 Jun 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Soooo, can Xander do the Maiden role for his spell? Gonna be funny!
Comments from author:
For his own spell? No, I don't think that would work. Plus, Giles and Willow might not want to let Xander try magic again.

No, I have something even crazier for The Maiden.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from CageFire
Review:
Interesting new chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks. The summer might get a leeeetle complicated.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from DavidEmpey
Review:
Glad to hear you've got lots more for us. Gotta say, I'm surprised that Giles apparently thinks "Xendra's" "British" accent is good enough that the CoW won't notice (s)he's faking it. And wouldn't the CoW know that Giles doesn't have a niece named Xendra? But no doubt you've thought that all out.
Comments from author:
In fact, Giles *does* have a niece named Xendra. If the real Xendra were to show up, I'm sure wackiness would ensue. On the other hand, would Giles let his closest relatives come to the most active Hellmouth on the planet? I don't think so.
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from MadHobbit
Review:
good chapter ,I am a bit suspicious of the spell,might be a double cross,and of course trying to do a spell at night in a town full of vamps? not a good mix and of course on top of a Hellmouth?
Comments from author:
Yep, a forty minute spell in the middle of the night. Outside. Skyclad. In Sunnydale. What could go wrong?
Review By [MadHobbit] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter. Interesting kalderash clan members here - and interesting information. Loved the british Xendra, and Cordelia's mother's reaction to her and Giles.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Who knew that being able to mimic Giles and Cordelia would pay off in so many ways? :D
Review By [Starfox] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from DavidEmpey
Review:
I hope you have a lot more of "Xendra" for us to enjoy. And more Cordelia. I love your Cordelia.
Comments from author:
I have a lot more planned and outlined. Several seasons' worth.
Review By [DavidEmpey] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from kyro
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I foresee the spell is going to interrupted just before the end I have to wonder if Ares is aware that Xena or her recrimination has or is walking the world again. How big of wrench is Xan being flipped in gears of the plan the PTB have for Buffy/Angel and Friends.
Comments from author:
Well, we will see how AU this goes (over time). Jenny lived, but Oz died. Do we have equivalency? Do we just have a really evil author? :D
Review By [kyro] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part II" from raxadian
Review:
Looks like Xendra will do the staking. And who wanna bet than Xander spell to return to normal will be interrupted?
Comments from author:
I'm not a big believer of the Laws Of Genderbending, but you never know. (Okay, I know.)
Review By [raxadian] • Date [2 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
BWAH-HAH-HAH-HAH! Definitely having some Tomb Raider flashbacks watching Xendra's antics! Great work on developing and warping the character archetypes!
Comments from author:
I love fiction tropes, and I love doing wacky things with them. It's one of my many weaknesses.
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [21 May 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the nice work.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm posting this every other Monday.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [20 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from MadHobbit
Review:
well I must say I like this story,one of the problems I have with the Halloween stories is the power level of the gang gets too high too fast and the author either powers up the bad guys or brings a whole lot of them to the fight.

Xendra is in for some interesting times,I wonder will it be Willow or Cordy who gives him the monthly visitor talk?Poor Xander.

I also wonder if the Council will send some investigators to checkout the gang? On one hand Giles has broken rules,but Buffy has stopped 5 Apocalypses with the gangs help. Too bad Kendra died before Xan changed,Xendra the Vampire Slayer. Or will Ares show up?
Lots of paths that could be taken.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I agree. While there are some *awesome* YAHF stories, many overpower Xander (or all the Scoobies) and run into plot development problems. On the other hand, there are some very funny stories that use Halloween and super!someone really well.

And yes, Council jerks will be coming by *very* soon.
Review By [MadHobbit] • Date [20 May 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter. I enjoyed the scenes with Cordelia, and the trials Xander has to go through at the hospital. I wonder about Willow's reaction - will her attraction to females come to light now?
Comments from author:
Is Cordelia getting some character development or not? It's hard to tell with her. :D
Review By [Starfox] • Date [20 May 14] • Not Rated
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