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Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from CageFire
Review:
Nice new chapter, keep up the nice work.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm posting this every other Monday.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [20 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from MadHobbit
Review:
well I must say I like this story,one of the problems I have with the Halloween stories is the power level of the gang gets too high too fast and the author either powers up the bad guys or brings a whole lot of them to the fight.

Xendra is in for some interesting times,I wonder will it be Willow or Cordy who gives him the monthly visitor talk?Poor Xander.

I also wonder if the Council will send some investigators to checkout the gang? On one hand Giles has broken rules,but Buffy has stopped 5 Apocalypses with the gangs help. Too bad Kendra died before Xan changed,Xendra the Vampire Slayer. Or will Ares show up?
Lots of paths that could be taken.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I agree. While there are some *awesome* YAHF stories, many overpower Xander (or all the Scoobies) and run into plot development problems. On the other hand, there are some very funny stories that use Halloween and super!someone really well.

And yes, Council jerks will be coming by *very* soon.
Review By [MadHobbit] • Date [20 May 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from Starfox
Review:
Good chapter. I enjoyed the scenes with Cordelia, and the trials Xander has to go through at the hospital. I wonder about Willow's reaction - will her attraction to females come to light now?
Comments from author:
Is Cordelia getting some character development or not? It's hard to tell with her. :D
Review By [Starfox] • Date [20 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good plot catch up and character POV chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks. But things are going to get more complicated. Soon.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from Senko
Review:
Interesting lots of room to start diverging from cannon. Jenny still alive, Xander didn't tell Buffy a lie (although he still hasn't figured out how much it'd hurt to send someone you love to hell and not a demon possesing them), a realization about Faith and Donna being out there. So teen Xena not female xander ok.
Comments from author:
We'll see how divergent things get as we move through the summer into Season 3.
Review By [Senko] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from Riniko
Review:
Wondering if Xander will find himself or is that herself changing back and forth due to the easy of the magic having a established route of effect with Xander. Worse for him he may find that he is fully healed one way and impaired the other.
Comments from author:
You'll get all the details in just another chapter or two.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from Selias
Review:
Any idea how long Xander's going to be stuck as "Xendra?" No offense, but I'd prefer to skip over the chapters, until then. Not a fan of gender-bending.
EDIT: That's enough. Thanks.
Comments from author:
I'm not going to spill. I will say that this is temporary.
Review By [Selias] • Date [19 May 14] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from Vianca
Review:
Looks like Cordelia might fit the Knight Sabers (Bubblegum Crisis) their leader her profile.
Now if they could get her parents to give her CBR(?)...
Their school has four technical nerds, one female, three males.
There was that book demon who builded himself a robot body via CBR(?) and those plans should still be there.
Ad in that the robot body is still around and.....
Then we have Ted.

Power Armor anybody?
Kitt/Carr???
Well, in self driving fusion powered cars, that is.
Super fast computer systems for home use?
Smart spy drones for the military?

Really, when you think about it, if they automate that factory completely, they can start working on some money making stuff that later will let Cordelia open a high class clothing store for (young) women.
Ad in the weapon making options and...

It really depends on which route you want to take, right now.
All it would take, is a scarcastic command from Xander to Cordelia.
Another route could be to take those FBI guys on a night patrol in order to show them the local wild-live and then explain how corrupt the local police force is, among other things.
Tax is partly your payment to the goverment, so they can keep you save and heapily working.
Sunnydale ain't save, why pay?
Then suggest a deal deal.

You can go lots of routes, which will you take?
The high tech route, the shadow broker route or the magical route?
Because one thing is sure, it ain't the standaard canon route.
And right now, your ad the cross-route.
Or atleast, thats how it looks.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I will admit that - while I went bananas with crossovers in Alex Mack's story - I'm going to control myself in this one.
Review By [Vianca] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from LeChasseur
Review:
So...
Xendra, the British B**** - Check.

Not really surprising, considering.

Oh, and totally seen it coming : Willow in denial. Or, reject. Well, not of the good...
Comments from author:
We'll be seeing what's going on with Willow any chapter now...
Review By [LeChasseur] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from raxadian
Review:
Sorry Xander, but you will probably be stuck as Xendra for a long while, the kind of restoration spell you need is big bucks, and why bother? Whatever Gods out there that want Xena back will just conspire to make you female again.
Comments from author:
I know there are 'Laws of Genderbending' but I tend to be a lawless type. Or maybe a Lawless type. :D
Review By [raxadian] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Summer Interlude, part I" from kyro
Review:
this going be one of those the longer he stays female odds are it well be permanent for the rest of his days boy is he going go ape shit when he finds out his stuck looking like a teenage Lucy Lawless, but there are worst people to be stuck looking like :)
Comments from author:
I know there are 'Laws of Genderbending' but I tend to be a lawless type. Or maybe a Lawless type. :D
Review By [kyro] • Date [19 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, this is very interesting an exciting.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I hope you like where it goes.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from LeChasseur
Review:
So, finally.

This chapter could have been "Becoming... Xandra". And knowing you and your work, well, it isn't a coincidence, right ? ;)
Comments from author:
I had this in mind from the very beginning, along with a lot more. A *lot* more.
Review By [LeChasseur] • Date [7 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from DieselDriver
Review:
Poor Xander, gets to be beautiful and doesn't even appreciate it. I don't suppose anyone would appreciate what happened to him. Rape is a particularly heinous assault on a woman, imagine how much worse would it be (or would it be worse?) for a man turned into a woman? Dealing with it pretty darned well if you ask me.

Edit to your reply:
Ok, I see that now. I wonder about some of the other comments, did they not get what happened to her while she was tied up? I have to wonder about other consequences too. Rather than a menstrual cycle what if she'd pregnant?
Comments from author:
He's pretty much *not* dealing if he can avoid it. A common Xander-trait.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [6 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Becoming, part VI" from Starfox
Review:
Great Chapter - now it's officially Xendra. Gritty, and painful aftermath, with dark humor. Well done!
Comments from author:
Well, only one death, and you knew Kendra wasn't going to make it. the odds were low, given the tiny percentage of fanfic that saves her. :D
Review By [Starfox] • Date [6 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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