Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part II" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. "What's my Line" will be an 8-part story arc, so keep watching.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part II" from Dragonelf
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I think you have done a nice job with this story so far and I am looking forward to read any future additions you might get inspired to add to it.
::Gives the plot bunny a slice of King Friedrich Orange Cake::
# = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # "I am Grey. I stand between the candle and the star. We are Grey. We stand between the darkness and the light." - Delenn, Babylon 5 # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = # = #
Comments from author:
Thanks. The "What's My Line" arc has 8 chapters, and I'm currently 6 chapters past that arc. I'm not going to cover every Buffy ep, and I'm going to focus on Xander and how his minor change means changes elsewhere down the line, particularly in Xander's life.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part II" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Hopefully things start to have a positive turn for Xander sometime soon.
Comments from author:
Just keep reading, because things change over time.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [1 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part II" from Genuka
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> Oh come on, not AGAIN!
LOL! I ^Love^ this story!
Comments from author:
Thanks. When I can get the voices just right (in my head), they write their own dialogue, which is a tribute to the genius that is Joss.
Review of chapter "Halloween, part I" from HMaxMarius
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To Vianca...
as regards your second question... HUH???
Are you referring to the PDA... otherwise known as the Public Display of Affection??? (Xander/Willow huggles).
edit: LOL... in Giles' eyes anything technological /would/ be a harbinger of the apocalypse =D
Comments from author:
:-) :-) [I think Vianca was referring to the upcoming apocalypses.]
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [31 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part II" from Vianca
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Now that could get them Faith and maybe a whole research division, in order to stop it. Wonder if this is were the plans for the original tablet/pad/ect, came from. Lets face it, Sunnydale has a factory complex perfectly suited to be used in both research and custom gear.
Any demon races that might be willing to help them stop this?
Comments from author:
We'll see how helpful the Watchers are when Giles goes to them with this info.
Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part II" from Katrina
Review:
1. Very glad Willow defrosted enough to hug Xander. About time. 2. That last line was perfect.
Comments from author:
[1] The continual X/W complications will be one of the key subplots. [2] And in canon she had NOT been able to work in a manicure lately. Big difference in universes. :-)
Review By [Katrina] • Date [31 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part II" from AndreaMaine
Review:
Well we all know for Buffy it never ends.
Comments from author:
And it's always in December and May (because of Sweeps Weeks) so I thought I would justify it in-universe too.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [31 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part II" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like how you are expanding upon, altering somewhat and not just repeating interpersonal time with the characters.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I made a conscious decision to ignore most of the Buffy-only story (unless it's relevant for later), because this is really a lot more Xander-centric, and we hardly ever see what Xander's doing when Buffy's not around.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [31 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part I" from nerfherder
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Xander-luck is proofing our as usual... Poor bugger. I think he needs a new demony girlfriend to really mess up his day.
Comments from author:
I think that you'll see some changes in the course of this particular arc.
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [28 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Mark of Eyghon, part I" from Zorgdub
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You say that you only spoil up to the Halloween episode of Buffy, but really, there's not much left unspoiled of the Makr of Eyghon episode either after you've read those parts. Maybe you should update the spoilers notes in the beginning of a new part rather than simply redirecting to the 1st one which only spoiled up to that episode?
Comments from author:
Ooh, good point! I'll fix that.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [28 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part I" from drago
Review:
poor Xander he finely gave her what she wanted and now she's pushes him away, typical female :P So if she pushing him away because she feels guilty.
Comments from author:
Maybe she's pushing him away because she's *terrified*. We do know more than the characters do, after all.
Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part I" from trongod
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i really don't know how long Xander will last under this isolation he's been put in by all the people who know about the whole Xena deal... Maybe if Ms. Calender were to get with him it would help, but with the girls basically pushing him away, and his so-called hame life being what it is...
Comments from author:
Fortunately, this will get addressed in the next sections.
Review By [trongod] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What’s My Line, part I" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good chapter. Glad to see more!
Comments from author:
I plan to post on Mondays, alternating with the TBBT fanfic until the latter wraps up, at which point this may go to a weekly status.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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