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Review of chapter "Movements" from deathgeonous
Review:
NICE update, really ramps up the intrege, which is a good thing. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks deathgeonous
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Movements" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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interesting chapter. I hope we see more of buffy/mara and looking forward to her meeting noir (love that anime)
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Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Movements" from Genuka
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So I'm guessing that Stargate is going to play a part? Can I say, ^Oh, Shoot! They're in for one hell of a time.^?
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Actually, Stargate is a crossover I cannot use in this story without contradicting myself on 2 occasions

Chapter 1: Tokimi notes that the adventures of the SGC are, in this timeline, a TV show

Chapter 4: Jessica 'Bast' Harris associated Ancient Egyptian with the show.

And a Stargate crossover is also something I'm already doing in Traveller Chronicles. Note that as Buffy dressed up as Ryoko, Dawn as Sasami and Joyce as Washu in this story...

So, here, the Egyptian references are not related to Stargate, but rather to how the Egyptian mythology can relate to the occult war in the Buffyverse.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Movements" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter. :)
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Review By [CageFire] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Movements" from kyro
Review:
let see so whistler is either going to shit his pants or is vaporized. Shouldn't Xander be able to see through more than just walls and clothes possibly spy on the watchers or the wolfram and hart firm in la .so basically all of the gods and demons are walking talking nukes as the clock moves closer to midnight. so Apophis and the Shinning Ones aren't the Goa'uld . using Hindu as Pantheon. nut other than that more!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks kyro,

Xander can indeed do a lot, but he doesn't have the same 'luck' as Buffy regarding leftover memories. You will see more about him later.

No Goa'uld in this story (Or Xander would have a major problem). Apophis just the name Akhenaten used to describe something he saw in his vision. As for what, it has to do with the mythological Apophis.

As for the gods' power... there is still the slight issue of collateral damage when you start to use Akira-level effects...
Review By [kyro] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Movements" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
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Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family matters" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Another enjoyable read! Still looking forward to your next chapter in TTC!
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Thanks, AlphaBeta
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [19 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family matters" from Genuka
Review:
great on the build up and adjustments! More please.
Comments from author:
Thanks, Genuka
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family matters" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am really enjoying your wacky story. Sometimes it is the little stuff that tickles my fancy the most. Like Cordy being nicer to her minions and feeling more 'Canadian'. Lol!
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Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family matters" from Zealot
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Interesting, hope to see more updates soon!

I think you should write a chapter/scene from an outsider's point of view. How forces outside the hellmouth noticed the invaders from another dimension, who already murdered 40 thousand people and took their places. How they need to be stopped, before they completely take over the world.
If you manage to write such a scene seriously, so that the reader starts to sympathise with these outsiders, without any "stupid villain speach" undertones, simply another brutally honest Truth - it would certainly become a (probably "The") highlight of this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks Zealot,

The idea is interesting and I have some ideas on how to do it, maybe by doing a crossover with a cop show like NCIS. After all, the faction realizing it does not have to be supernatural.
Review By [Zealot] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family matters" from DigiSim
Review:
I have to wonder. How is Kendra going to handle all of this? Or Buffy's old friend Ford? I'm pretty sure Eyghon won't be any trouble.
Comments from author:
The whole question of how the new Sunnydale will deal with outside interference...

This leads to several other questions:

Ford: does the 'vampire club' still exist given that its members now have immortality?

Kendra: did Mara's manipulations only affect Buffy or reflect on Kendra?

Eyghon: Ethan is currently a female cat.
Review By [DigiSim] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family matters" from Eureka
Review:
Loving this!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks Eureka
Review By [Eureka] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family matters" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice update dealing with more views on the consistences of Halloween. I liked. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks deathgeonous
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family matters" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thanks Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family matters" from kyro
Review:
so still no response from p.t.b or wolfram heart.wired-ed out Cordy and Xander .shouldn't the regular demons in Sunny dale felt the power of one gods or demons was putting off and run for safer ground cant wait to see the reaction the p.t.b and senior partners cant wait for the next chapter more!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks kyro,

It's a question of time. This chapter ended in the night of the 1st to the 2nd of November, so the external factions either haven't realized yet or didn't have the time to organize a reaction.

As for the regular demons of Sunnydale, they certainly felt the power, but only a mere fraction of it, a hint that something changed. This is thanks to the Mayor/Odin retuning the apathy spell in a cloaking shield (gods and demons linked to Yggdrasil/Nidhogg are not affected as they have the required access privileges).
Review By [kyro] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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