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Review of chapter "Family matters" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am really enjoying your wacky story. Sometimes it is the little stuff that tickles my fancy the most. Like Cordy being nicer to her minions and feeling more 'Canadian'. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thanks CPTSkip
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family matters" from Zealot
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Interesting, hope to see more updates soon!

I think you should write a chapter/scene from an outsider's point of view. How forces outside the hellmouth noticed the invaders from another dimension, who already murdered 40 thousand people and took their places. How they need to be stopped, before they completely take over the world.
If you manage to write such a scene seriously, so that the reader starts to sympathise with these outsiders, without any "stupid villain speach" undertones, simply another brutally honest Truth - it would certainly become a (probably "The") highlight of this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks Zealot,

The idea is interesting and I have some ideas on how to do it, maybe by doing a crossover with a cop show like NCIS. After all, the faction realizing it does not have to be supernatural.
Review By [Zealot] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family matters" from DigiSim
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I have to wonder. How is Kendra going to handle all of this? Or Buffy's old friend Ford? I'm pretty sure Eyghon won't be any trouble.
Comments from author:
The whole question of how the new Sunnydale will deal with outside interference...

This leads to several other questions:

Ford: does the 'vampire club' still exist given that its members now have immortality?

Kendra: did Mara's manipulations only affect Buffy or reflect on Kendra?

Eyghon: Ethan is currently a female cat.
Review By [DigiSim] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family matters" from Eureka
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Loving this!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks Eureka
Review By [Eureka] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family matters" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice update dealing with more views on the consistences of Halloween. I liked. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks deathgeonous
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family matters" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
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Thanks Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Family matters" from kyro
Review:
so still no response from p.t.b or wolfram heart.wired-ed out Cordy and Xander .shouldn't the regular demons in Sunny dale felt the power of one gods or demons was putting off and run for safer ground cant wait to see the reaction the p.t.b and senior partners cant wait for the next chapter more!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks kyro,

It's a question of time. This chapter ended in the night of the 1st to the 2nd of November, so the external factions either haven't realized yet or didn't have the time to organize a reaction.

As for the regular demons of Sunnydale, they certainly felt the power, but only a mere fraction of it, a hint that something changed. This is thanks to the Mayor/Odin retuning the apathy spell in a cloaking shield (gods and demons linked to Yggdrasil/Nidhogg are not affected as they have the required access privileges).
Review By [kyro] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Family matters" from CageFire
Review:
Another great chapter. I'm really looking forward to reading more. :) I wonder if this will cross over with any other series. If so, I'm guessing not until later on when they've managed to get stuff setup.
Comments from author:
Thanks CageFire,

I have some ideas for adding more crossovers but nothing solid at this point. As you pointed, I need to finish the 'installation' arc first.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [17 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Demon and The Slayer" from (Current Donor)tchizek
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What a wonderful chapter...I love what you are doing with these characters.
Buffy gets a well needed shake up.
The PTB and the Senior Partners are in for a shock when they look into Sunny D!

Great story!
Comments from author:
Thanks tchizek
Review By [(Current Donor)tchizek] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demon and The Slayer" from Aenea
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Mara's educational trip through history and the safeguards built into the Slayer, very nice and well thought out. Nice to see her acting as the badass she is; AMG always struck me as Hild letting her take a vacation, head after Belldandy, and get some quality time with Urd all rolled into one. Like a lite working vacation. Can't wait to see Joyce and Richard's date; altough this is still the Buffy!verse, something always happens at dates, parties, and gatherings. I'm still guessing in my mind who ends up with Dawn...Cassie?
Comments from author:
Thanks Aenea,

AMG is a very enjoyable read but is written (in my opinion) in a very sitcom way, leading us to disregard things like Mara's ineffectiveness. With my own style of writing, I had to give a different lighting on things, deviate from canon for some and find believable explanations for others.

As for your other questions... wait and see.
Review By [Aenea] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Demon and The Slayer" from Duquette
Review:
I think I like your original pice better, but this is still really good. I do hope you use Xander a little bit more in this one, he was kind of redundant and pushed aside in you other fic, but I think he has more potential here, Heimdall is pretty badass.
Comments from author:
Thanks Duquette,

This story is indeed a different style from Traveller Chronicles, if only for the number of crossovers involved.

Regarding Xander, yes he will have a more important role though Joyce remains the main character.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demon and The Slayer" from kyro
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war is coming that is not of the good considering the fact that each one scoobies has power to destroy planet the without think about it. not mention the power the mayor and Joyce have. Spike as Loki well i guess it was ether him or Angel. the watchers are out of there league anything they try is probably going to blow up in their face. are the sealed and restricted right now
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review Kyro.

The power the gods and demons of Sunnydale have at their disposal is indeed great, but not as world-shattering as the one the original characters from Ah! My Goddess! have. The reason is simple: their Yggdrasil and Niddhog are barely functional, for now.

The situation is however not as bad as in the post King of Darkness arc of the manga, where Yggdrasil was not able to sustain the Norns and we had scenes like Urd drinking tons of sake as an alternate energy source.

So for now, the license and seal system is a bit of a moot point for the Sunnydalers.
Review By [kyro] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demon and The Slayer" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Loving the story! Keep up the great work! Though I hope you update TTC soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks AlphaBeta,

Thanks to some reading on recent theories about dark energy, I got around a block on how to explain a piece of technology. I have now 2/3 of the next chapter of TTC laid down and should be able to update soon.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [11 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Demon and The Slayer" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thanks Bobboky
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Demon and The Slayer" from Genuka
Review:
Wonderful exposition! I can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thanks Genuka
Review By [Genuka] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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