More, more I beg of thee More. It will fun to see how Thor re-acts to his 'SON'. On one hand, Xander was not begat by Thor. On the Other...Xander is bringing/will bring honor to his name. If Xander must return the axe 'Hvitingr', the Asgardians may take a tack like the did with Beta Ray Bill or Eric Masterson. Having been found worthy each was given a Asgardian weapon. Beta Ray Bill Received 'StormBreaker' and became Beta Ray Thor. Eric Masterson got the ThunderStrike Mace and became the 1st ThunderStrike. After Eric died, the Mace eventually passed to Eric's son Kevin, who became the 2nd ThunderStrike. Perhaps Xander will recieve a similar boon. Pretty much the only person who has proven worthy of the power of Thor and not gotten anything was Captain America. Maybe in the future.... Anywhoo, Great Story, I am eager for the next Chapter.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I really like this one so far and I can't wait to see what happens when the Viking gods find out a god from a different pathelon(sp?) is the cause of a blood adoption.
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Not Rated
For some strange reason I see the confrontation going like this:
Thor and company show up and see monsters and try to kill one. Xander sees this and zaps them screaming "YOU MORONS, THOSE ARE LITTLE KIDS TRAPPED IN THEIR COSTUMES. DID NONE OF YOU PAY ATTENTION DURING MAGIC CLASS?!?!?" Cause Thor and company did NOT pay attention during magic class.
Whatever you do can't wait to read it, thanks for another great chapter.
Review By [DarkLee] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I did a dance of joy ^^ I actually didn't think anyone would answer the challenge, so when I saw you did, it made me so happy I was grinning like crazy.
And I love how you answered to it. More so with the added part of Odin sending for Thor to find the young warrior. It makes things so interesting.
Now I have to bounce in happiness some more... I think I'll need all of tonight and tomorrow to stop having so much joyful energy lol My family will think I'm crazy but I don't care: I adore how you've written the first two chapters ^^
Review By [calileane] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Not Rated
I love it! I have to admit, I'm almost more excited for your next chapter than I am for my own! You set the scene for Halloween up very very well, and normally I just skip those chapters because there is only so many ways you can do it. I hope you update soon!
Comments from author:
I am working on the next chapter now, very slow going. but, hope to see who the new daddy is soon. ;)
Review By [KatieLeighWilliams] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
