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Review of chapter "First prize often goes to rank beginners" from imortis
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please continue this story, its actually better then a lot of them on this site.
Review By [imortis] • Date [10 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First prize often goes to rank beginners" from Joseph
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THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES!!!! It's amazing! Please update soon!
Review By [Joseph] • Date [24 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First prize often goes to rank beginners" from Fayari
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Can't wait for the next update.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [15 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First prize often goes to rank beginners" from Richardthrnnsx
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Interesting idea, looking forward to more.
Thanks for sharing
Review By [Richardthrnnsx] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First prize often goes to rank beginners" from Bobboky
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Sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First prize often goes to rank beginners" from alynambered
Review:
Good chapter, with more action in the near future, as well.

likes breaking up fights between murder convicts - convicted murderers

Edit:
Yes, but no matter how informal you may be, 'murder convicts' isn't even remotely near to any type of usage. Murderers - yes, convicts - yes; but murder is strictly a noun.
Comments from author:
Just wanna point out that spoken English is generally a lot more informal than written English. I mean, I don't have everyone speak without contractions either. They're not Lt. Commander Data. ;-)

Edit: Seriously, "convicted murderers" is *way* too formal and stilted for someone like Xander Harris. Remember that Buffy and her crew gleefully butcher the English language in just about every other sentence. And "murder convicts" is meant to be a description. Not to mention that I have heard it used in multiple English media.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First prize often goes to rank beginners" from Gideon
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That is a handy skill for Xander to have, and it will mean that Buffy has to keep him close to keep him safe, rather than sending him away like happened in later years. I do think that Buffy was perhaps a little too embarrassed for the reverse ritual to be just kissing but it does explain why she came back all powered up after the Master's cave. I don't think Xander will ever be mature enough for Giles to tell him about it though :(
Perhaps Giles will have a chance to share if Kendra gets injured though. I can just imagine it. "Xander, Kendra is injured - Quickly, Kiss her! No,no, I mean perform mouth to mouth- Yes, that's what I meant!"
If Xander manages to pull that off then he just has to prevent Faith from getting stabbed and all Three Slayers will be fine and dandy.
Comments from author:
What brought Buffy back in the Master's cave was CPR. What Giles is referring to is a sharing of the enhanced healing factor, which means something a bit more...physical.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First prize often goes to rank beginners" from trongod
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Oh, my, wonder what Kendra, with her not so Watcher Robot thoughts is going to think of the soon to be discovered weirdness that is Our Zeppo's life...

From thew little we saw of Ms. Kendra, I'd guess that she's just about had it with the way things arre going; just a new view point and sympathetic listener(s) would go a long way in further freeing her from the mold she's been forced to grow into. Just hope that she stays alive long enough to enjoy it and gets to some back like Buffy did - only with some freaking counseling to help her over the trauma, then we can get our Boston Bombshell going, maybe a fast east Coast run for Xander to help keep her and her Watcher alive, please?

Hell, get her to Sunnydale without all the terror and pain she had in canon being hunted across the country...
Review By [trongod] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First prize often goes to rank beginners" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First prize often goes to rank beginners" from moringstar
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Keep up the hard work :)
Review By [moringstar] • Date [14 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Land of confusion" from Genuka
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Interesting connection but the chapter was a tad confusing. I expect to see more coherency in the next chapter.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [13 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Land of confusion" from Morgomir
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Great chapters. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Land of confusion" from PATM
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Edge of the seat storyline for me when I'm reading. More, more, more.
Review By [PATM] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Land of confusion" from alynambered
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Well this chapter fits its title, a little bit of everything mixed together.

Write as you can, one's health is important. Hope your pain is diagnosable and treatable.
Review By [alynambered] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Land of confusion" from Gideon
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Poor Willow:( First she is feeling left out and then she gets possessed by a demon! I hope Buffy makes some time to talk to her too. Of course they don't know that Willow is part of the whole thing yet, none of them do. Sounds like they will be on the lookout for Kendra though and she *should* have been told about Buffy before she arrives this time!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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