I love what you doing with both universes. Glad to see in the latest chapter that Xander isn't gone for good. It's a wonderful chance for Xander to get lots of great training for when/if he returns to his universe. Looking forward to see what you have in store for everyone. You have a great imagination.
Ok laughing manically on the bus on the way to work apparently makes people nervous bwhahahahah *insert evil grin here Great chapter let the chaos begin
Comments from author:
I know what you mean. When I'm writing something particularly evil or reading something in the same category I tend to scare even people who know me relatively well. Upside? It really spooks the ones who want to try power plays or some other idiocy around me. *evil grin*
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [19 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from moringstar
Review:
Yea Xander back in action, so what next for xman, please update soon.
Comments from author:
I just did a truly final edit and some of the wording has changed. I think you'll have fun again if you read my chapters again. Manchester helped!
I'll try to get the next chapter out soonish!
Review By [moringstar] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
*grin* This is gonna be fun. Somehow, it already feels like it's going to be more satisfying than a lot of Buffy-SG1 crossovers I've read.
(Probably because of it feels like you're really trying to take the "chaos in a serious setting" aspect seriously without going crackfic and, as a result, it doesn't feel any more formulaic than it needs to be to satisfy the part about believability.)
All of a sudden I feel like 'mwhahahaha' ing. I think largely because I don't know who to feel sorry for. Xander, SG-1, Hammond, NID flunkies/cohorts/Mayborne, The Goa'uld, The Wriath, The replicators... or that SG universe's council. ... And the fact that Jack and Xander WILL eventually get along just bodes ill for all associated, involved, and just in general.
So Xander a Giles now.. LOL I really wonder what was in Ethan's letter! I am so glad that you are helping Manchester to write this as I was afraid he quit.
Can't wait to see where you two go with this next.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm enjoying this story a lot. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
I do have a question, however, are you going to be giving us another side story that tells Xander's and Ethen's tale in the alternate universe? Or will we be getting that as chapters interspersed into this story?
My guess so far is that it's the latter, given that you've listed Stargate as a crossover. Unless Ethen Giles had some connection to it before the transfer.
Thanks for the new chapter. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
interspersed. I might wind up focusing more on one or the other but I'm going to try and keep it balanced.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]