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Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from slmncpm
Review:
i love this story and the new chapters. i can't wait to see what happens next! *hands you scones*
Comments from author:
*MUNCH* Yummy scones!! Writing next chappy now! *wanders off happily*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Studyofchaos
Review:
This is going in a fun direction. Jack O'Neill + Xander is always a fun read. Please continue.
Comments from author:
Mwahahahahaha!! And I've added Rayne to the mix!!! Should I add mini-Jack? *wanders away*
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from sjyu
Review:
I love what you doing with both universes. Glad to see in the latest chapter that Xander isn't gone for good. It's a wonderful chance for Xander to get lots of great training for when/if he returns to his universe. Looking forward to see what you have in store for everyone. You have a great imagination.
Review By [sjyu] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from banditdoz
Review:
Ok laughing manically on the bus on the way to work apparently makes people nervous bwhahahahah *insert evil grin here Great chapter let the chaos begin
Comments from author:
I know what you mean. When I'm writing something particularly evil or reading something in the same category I tend to scare even people who know me relatively well. Upside? It really spooks the ones who want to try power plays or some other idiocy around me. *evil grin*
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [19 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from moringstar
Review:
Yea Xander back in action, so what next for xman, please update soon.
Comments from author:
I just did a truly final edit and some of the wording has changed. I think you'll have fun again if you read my chapters again. Manchester helped!

I'll try to get the next chapter out soonish!
Review By [moringstar] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow
Review:
*grin* This is gonna be fun. Somehow, it already feels like it's going to be more satisfying than a lot of Buffy-SG1 crossovers I've read.

(Probably because of it feels like you're really trying to take the "chaos in a serious setting" aspect seriously without going crackfic and, as a result, it doesn't feel any more formulaic than it needs to be to satisfy the part about believability.)
Review By [(Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from WCSII
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-_- *blink*

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All of a sudden I feel like 'mwhahahaha' ing. I think largely because I don't know who to feel sorry for. Xander, SG-1, Hammond, NID flunkies/cohorts/Mayborne, The Goa'uld, The Wriath, The replicators... or that SG universe's council. ... And the fact that Jack and Xander WILL eventually get along just bodes ill for all associated, involved, and just in general.
Review By [WCSII] • Date [19 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from LNR
Review:
Woo Hoo!!!


Loving IT!!!!!!

More soon please :)
Review By [LNR] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Eureka
Review:
So Xander a Giles now.. LOL I really wonder what was in Ethan's letter! I am so glad that you are helping Manchester to write this as I was afraid he quit.

Can't wait to see where you two go with this next.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Knolli
Review:
OMG! Xander is going to be Giles son in the other Dimension?

Thank you for writing this story, it is an enjoyable one to read.
Comments from author:
I just picked up where Manchester left off & he's kindly been acting as beta after posting.
Review By [Knolli] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from AnFan
Review:
I'm enjoying this story a lot. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.

I do have a question, however, are you going to be giving us another side story that tells Xander's and Ethen's tale in the alternate universe? Or will we be getting that as chapters interspersed into this story?

My guess so far is that it's the latter, given that you've listed Stargate as a crossover. Unless Ethen Giles had some connection to it before the transfer.

Thanks for the new chapter. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
interspersed. I might wind up focusing more on one or the other but I'm going to try and keep it balanced.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from banditdoz
Review:
Where was Giles `O´Dear Lord´? Hahahhahaha love it Thank Yooooooooooou
Comments from author:
He's still reeling from the shock it shows up next chapter. XD
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [18 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from kdakmmt
Review:
hmmm a personal appearance by Janus shows just how important things have become...
Comments from author:
*nods vigorously* yup yup yup!
Review By [kdakmmt] • Date [18 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from CageFire
Review:
Nice. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [17 May 13] • Not Rated
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