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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
This is an interesting story! I look forward to Xander meeting his parents and seeing what will happen next!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [10 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from possom
Review:
Interesting idea, but you seem to use a way to formal speech patern, like I am instead of I'm an you are instead of you're.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review and your observation. I will change that in the next chapters.
Review By [possom] • Date [7 Dec 12] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from banditdoz
Review:
Great story so far and your only making it more intresting :D thank you
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AllenPitt
Review:
Hm. I'm betting Helen Magnus knows about slayers, and doesn't like them much. She's all about protecting Abnormals, Slayers are all about slaying. May have killed a few Abnormals in the past, thinking they were demons, lots of room for misunderstandings there.
It'll be interesting to see if Giles knows about the "Tesla" type of vampirism. Probably his books would say they're a species of demon that died out centuries ago. Maybe it was a Council funded expedition that wiped out their last city? '
Hey. Could Marcie the Invisible Girl be a descendant of the invisible man who was one of the founders of Helen's little group? .... Also if Giles makes the connection to Sanctuary, he'd probably have contact info on it, Helen M. is fairly well known to most governments, I think.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and for your ideas.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I like "supportive" Scoobies stories. Especially liked you spelling out:
“Of course I would never do that. You are my friend Xander. Whatever you are, you are still my friend. And I don’t think you would ever hurt someone without a reason.” Buffy assured him.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from ashez
Review:
Awesome! Thank you so much for answering my challenge! I thought I was hallucinating when I saw the notification email!
Comments from author:
You are welcome. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [ashez] • Date [28 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from banditdoz
Review:
I usally stay away from sanctuary fics because I only watched the first 2series but this looks good, thank you and please continue :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing. I will post next chapter as soon as I can.
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AllenPitt
Review:
Being the child of Helen Magnus is actually more interesting, I'd think. He'll have longevity as well as the vampire traits. Hm, he's got a half sister--maybe she can turn up still alive?
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing. I don't know what I will do with Ashley jet, so maybe she will be alive or maybe not.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Some of the writing style is a little stiff and awkward but the characterization parts and the plot are good.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. I am looking for a beta, so if you know anyone that can help me with my mistakes, please point me in the right direction.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AndreaMaine
Review:
You have a nice beginning here and I would like to see where you take this.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [24 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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