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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Nine" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [6 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Eight" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter as usual. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Eight" from Letomo
Review:
Sheesh. How many twists can you throw into a single story? Well, I'll keep reading to find out.
Comments from author:
Um... a lot? (Runs away)
Review By [Letomo] • Date [5 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Seven" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [4 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part III" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part III" from KeriMcVean
Review:
Oh ho ho, brilliant! In a world with no slayers, of course the monks wouldn't send her to Buffy. So now who's the next big player on the field? She's already written her name across space and time. Or, she will... Time travel is confusing sometimes. Excellent twist, it makes perfect sense.
Comments from author:
Thank you, thank you. I thought it was very clever.
Review By [KeriMcVean] • Date [3 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Five" from Letomo
Review:
Not the twelve year old I was expecting, but a very good touch! Very nicely done.
Comments from author:
Yeah, it took me a while to figure out that Rose was exactly the same age as Dawn. As soon as I worked that out, the rest became self evident.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [31 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Five" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [31 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from Gideon
Review:
Heavy. I have to agree though - forgiveness is a strength, not a weakness. It is very rare though and everyone else will never be able to understand.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from Gideon
Review:
There seems to be a lot of extreme emotional attachment going around. The Doctor won't kill Buffy, even though he is pure evil. Buffy won't kill the Doctor, even though *he* is pure evil. Some omnipotent time traveling incorporeal something or other is working to keep Buffy alive, no matter what. And Buffy is wandering around trying to find Dawn who, presumably won't even recognise Buffy! Maybe Buffy can lure the first Slayer out of the Tardis and kill her. That should bring the real world back right?
Comments from author:
When I was still in the basic thinking stages of this story, I decided specifically not to create a story where the evil Doctor wound up being the equivalent of evil Angel. I just thought that had been done, before, and wasn't nearly as interesting, anyways.

As you mention, there are a lot of emotions, around this story. And I agree, it makes the stakes feel a lot higher. Every single character in this story (with the exception of the First and, behind the scenes, Caleb) is protecting someone else. And I think that makes the story a lot more compelling than if I'd just had the Doctor be all-evil destroy-the-universe.

Thanks for the comment!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty One" from Gideon
Review:
Buffy can't turn around without stumbling over an incorporeal, all powerful, universe altering super-powered being with an unhealthy obsession with her.She really needs a way to tell this guy and the First apart or her life might get really complicated :(
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from Letomo
Review:
Nice chapter, but would have been a little nicer to see the other monks react to the revelation of the First's being there.
Comments from author:
Good point. Didn't think of that.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from CageFire
Review:
Great new chapter, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [27 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from CageFire
Review:
Another good chapter. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [22 Dec 12] • Not Rated
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